SS: Abandoned Eyes. Note pg 58. - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!! can't wait for more :)
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To all those people waiting for an update I'm extremely sorry but i don't know when i will be updating. i will try my best to update around sunday. i'm sorry for the delay again its just i'm too tired after a long time with work and can't bring myself to update even though i decide to update every single morning.
PS: people who follow the other SS: The End, i will finally update it. its ages i know. sorry for that. 😔
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Love this one =) and yeah try to update all your ffs' =)
AWesome update dear love it =)
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TgThis is such an amazing story. Such a horrific thing happened to her and he finally knows. Payal is amazing in this, can't wait to see the new Arnav
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CHAPTER 4
A Promise made...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iGkVWxZJmrQ[/YOUTUBE]

Imagine a world without me - say you're falling apart Let's pretend you've missed me for a while
Wouldn't you say you were lonely and love was breaking your heart?

He sat besides her that night, the whole night memorizing her face, gazing at the light from the moon and the shade danced around her casting shadows on her face. He wished, a wish he had not made in a very long time; to be in the place where she was. Whereever she was.


I dream of dreaming dreams of her - in twilight she's a constant blur The picture is clear and I'm still fact she's fiction


His eyes never left her face till the sun rose as his eyes lost focus, adjusting to the sudden brightness. He blinked. His life had gained a new perspective, the truth that he had once held against her did not matter. What mattered was her.


Remember the night you were with me - fell asleep by my side
Strangers together - your hand in mine

How come we never came closer when all the stars were aligned?

I thought we had a moment


Each moment was golden and he would cherish it in his heart. He remembered their hands entwined, her hands clutching the lapels of his T-shirt, their fights, her smile, the feel of her against him, her stars. Her childishness, her ideas, their hug, an incomplete kiss... From today, each day would be marked with her.

"Zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi, Aur har raat tumko dekhke bete gi, Ek naye subah tumhare saath ke umeed mein."


He swiftly rose from the bed after the placing a kiss on her forehead to begin a new day. He pulled out a dress for her, a red one, she would dress in his favourite color, after all it was their first day together as a couple.


I seem to miss the missing part, she's still my favorite work of art
The picture is clear and
I'm still fact she's fiction


He gazed at her face wistfully, willing her to wake, but she remained constant. Her stubborness, he called, strengthened his resolve, she was coming back. He turned making his way to the bathroom. "Aap sach mein ja rahe hai, Mat jaaye... Hamare saase rukh..." He turned on his heels and in two long strides was back to her. Kissing her cheek like once previously and with a "I'll be right back" started his day.

I fell in love with her longing -
let's just say that she never found out..
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I'm sorry for a real late update buy no virtual hitting me please...

Song Courtesy: Fact and Fiction by Mads Langer


The words in hindi - from the show Geet, modified by me. Suits them. Don't you think?

I am a little skeptic about this part so do share your views.
I don't know when can I update next but comments spur me on... Just a hint.

Likes, comments and criticism welcome. To leave in your thoughts.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahh...the song fits well into the plot...and aswesome update...but its very short yaar...where is the new arnav u have promised...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow update s awesome
And the song suits to the scenes 100% ... Perfect...
And oh dear i love each n every word of this update but my darling Don't u think this update is bit shorter =) =) ????
I've waited so many days , hours waiting for your update =) And pls next time try to make it bit longer PLS... PLS...
Love the update =) waiting eagerly for the next part =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both parts.
the last one was a bit small. but very intense.
hope the creep rots in hell.😡
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nareshSV

Ahh...the song fits well into the plot...and aswesome update...but its very short yaar...where is the new arnav u have promised...?



next chapter i promise. i was short of time since i'm nearing a deadline. sorry but nect time I promise.

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