SS: Abandoned Eyes. Note pg 58.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ppl, a prologue to a story haunting me since two days.


ABANDONED EYES

PROLOGUE


"Chote, welcome back" her eyes betraying the calmness in her voice.
He found his family seated in the living room, all but two, a discussion in progress. The voices hushed, the minute he turned up.
His eyes sweeping the room for a pair of familiar wide brown eyes.

"Di, where is Khushi?"

The eyes had haunted him the past twelve days he had been away. Separation from her had not been the key to calm after all. His heart disregarding his brain, the need to see her overpowering his senses, he had cut his trip short.

The silence that followed his question was tangible, making his heart beat erratically.

He strode to his room, need to feel her overpowering every sense.
Something seemed amiss, the silence in house, like she was not there. Something was not right, and it was with her.

She lay on the bed a pale corpse, abandoned eyes staring into nothing, reflecting the coldness of the room, the emptiness in her life. An IV drip connected to her pale, thin white hand.

Let me know whether you wish for the story to continue.
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Preeti.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The prologue is really promising and the SS will be great.

Update the 1st part soon...wanna know what happened to Khushi.

PM me when u update next.
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Please do continue and update soon. ASAP
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nice start
do pm me wen u update

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What has happened to Khushi
Where is she
Is she in a hospital or in their room
Update soon
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What Happened To Khushi ?! : O Is This SS Based On This Track ?! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Usma55

What has happened to Khushi

Where is she
Is she in a hospital or in their room
Update soon


She is in his room. The next part will help you with what has happened.
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Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

What Happened To Khushi ?! : O Is This SS Based On This Track ?! 😳


Not exactly... Till yesterdays' episode and then the fact that Arnav is leaving for a trip to London. No ASR getting kidnapped.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really an awesome prologue...

wuld luv to read wat wuld b ahead...

plz add me to ur pm list...

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