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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

sweetie...just let them patch up !!! i'm dying in suspense...pls pls pls...

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Cool_doc

@Cool_doc

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

really great.. tooo cute😳

that kid was too naughty..🤣

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Pr1yanka

@Pr1yanka

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

ur ff has also become like a drug…exasperated to see arnav khushi didnt meet in this part

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

loved the kid. eye opener huh? LOL.

U know i follow this FF like a faithful dog...all thanks to ur writing skills. me thinks they are wasting precious time...both been thru a lot but why waste the moment. Life is too short..😉..see what u did...got me passionate on a fiction...to talk about life and beyond..LOL

Edited by bluetaj - 13 years ago

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

that was too nice and funny with the 13 year old kid

ending was superb

did she see him???????????

update soon

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sam88

@sam88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

very nice but only 1 charter

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Naughty kid.ASR didn't hit her he is so possessive

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

awesome!!!!!

love the 13yr old kid - in love with khushi!!!!! she's so SEXY!!!

loved it!!!!

Arnav can't think of anything else except Khushi!!!!!

she's his drug - he wants her and yet he's holding back afraid of what she will do to his life.

love the story, - you have me hooked i'm constantly waiting for an update.

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Paro Khan AKA Choti Ki Di

@P4RO

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Oh wow that kid is a pervert or what, when I was 13 I was busy buying magazines, making friends, doing homework and stuff, and this kid is thinking about marriage...😲
Khushi is beautiful though, who can blame him...and I hope Arnav acts this mental after the MU in the serial.
Brilliant update, you left me hanging again, looking forward to next part.👍🏼

TFS😊