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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeah they are finally together. 😛 Thanks so much for the happy ending. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely ending to a lovely series.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing ending 👏

Luvd it very much 😊

Waiting for d epilogue 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all the 12 parts in one go.. Reason: I cudnt stop myself from not reading once a chapter got over.. Loved the way u build up the story.. ArHi's relationship.. His trusting her.. Absolutely wonderful..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice ending part! They finally confessed their love to each other and Khushi forgave him!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Read all the 12 parts in one go.. Reason: I cudnt stop myself from not reading once a chapter got over.. Loved the way u build up the story.. ArHi's relationship.. His trusting her.. Absolutely wonderful..



Thank YOU ! 😊 The reason is completely justified...I feel that way with the FFs I read too but somehow can't stop from reading them !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunjanmkj

I cnt xpress to u in words hw happy I am to b able to comment first on dis particular update😳..its d final chapter to one of my fav story on IF..n its also d first tym dat ne1 has dedicated their update to me😊 m so touched n humbled wid your gesture, n i tk it as an honour😊 i thank u frm d core of my heart😊!!
nw lets gt back to d update😊
first of all i must say dat i was shocked n dssapointed at d same tym to c dat dis is d final chapter of dis ss..its one of my fav..i wantd it to go on..bt i guess since u r d writer u wud knw bttr..n there's no point in unnecessary stretching..so i undrstnd ur pov..bt i wud really mss dis one😔
u gave dis ss a proper ending..arnav n khushi got back 2gthr..resolved their prblms n dffrnces..cleared their msundrstndngs n opened their hearts to each othr,finally..m vry elated😊
u showed dat hw just three words cn chng d world of two people..evrythn else ceases to exist wen these three words r spoken at d ryt tym wid honesty😊 lovely depiction of this..
"Once is enough. I trust you."--ah..'I trust you..anothr three words dat has d capability to chng d lives of people..trust..dnt mk me start abt dis..trust n love goes hand-in-hand..wid one comes d othr..n both these words has d potential to mk or break a person..i truly loved this two lines.
in d beginning of dis update i undrstood dat khushi secretly wantd arnav to stop her..her subcnscious mind already forgave him..n in her heart she wantd to gv him a chnce, she wanted to stay wid him, she wanted him to cnfess..mayb in reality she nvr was angry wid him..it was just hurt, pain n dssapointmnt..
i dnt knw hw much i cud undrstnd ur update..bt i thoroughly enjoyed it!..u dd a vry good job, as usual..
keep writing!
n dnt 4gt to send me pm wen u write smthn new😊
tk cre!


I'll sure PM you :) You don't have to tell me at all :) You deserved the dedication...You don't know how much your comments encouraged me...And now to the comment on this particular update...Thanks so much for analyzing it so beautifully...I completely agree with what you say...That was the idea :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

i know i didn't comment but thank you for sending the pm! this is one ss i waited to get a pm for and i'm sad that ur ending it yet content with the ending..



Thank you so much :) Though you never commented, you always liked the updates...That itself meant a lot to me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: boreddamsel

Good job!!! Loved it.. it was so cute.. They both were so cute.. I was like awww... most of the time and then


"What...?" he asked giving his trademark 'Unbelievable' expression. "Have you been listening to a word I said Kushi? That's the most ridiculous question I've ever heard."


made me laugh.. so typical of Khushi and so typical of ASR!!!
The story was awesome!! I will miss it. .. please please please tell me you are writing a new one.. !!!!! Thanks for the pm and for this awesome update!!



Hey thanks ! I have an idea and I'm breaking my head over it..I'll post it after writing down 2-3 chapters and seeing how the story shapes up..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update and happy ending but sad coz u ended this one =) =)
Update ur other storiesss tooo waiting to read them =) =)
Thank you for sharing such a awesome story with us =) =)

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