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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

I really really liked it, it was simple succinct yet powerful. Very well written!

Are you planning on continuing this?

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-Kanha-

@-Kanha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nice one.Good job👍🏼

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Heart wrenching ... Not being trusted by the loved one can be really shattering

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mirnalini

@mirnalini

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Very well written!

Totally loved it!👏...The manner in which you depicted her pain was beautiful!

And if this indeed was your first time, then you're a natural. You should take it forward if you wish to.😃

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naveena

@naveena_arhi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

it was sad but good can you make a other part about what it is like with her gone oh and pm me plz

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1DAlice

@1DAlice

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Very well written!!

Lovely OS!!!😊

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Nihita

@nihita

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Thankyou for your pm...thought tbh doesn't feel like your first attempt...splendid!!!!I dont usually like dark ff's but your writing style hooked me...xxx

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow that was great as well as being really sad

Hope you wrote more soon

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farfar319

@farfar319

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Sad, but very well -written.

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Wow very well written hun!! Such intense emotions!! Great work!!

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