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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

U write so well.

No reason to live when the ppl that really
matters are no longer with her.

She is alr dead the moment he accused her...
Sad...

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
I really really liked it, it was simple succinct yet powerful. Very well written!

Are you planning on continuing this?

Yeah, I was thinking about about writing 1 or 2 more parts. Thanks for the comment! 😊

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

very well riting.w u continu it.👏👏

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Okay, I don't know why I am writing this, but my head was spinning for a few seconds after reading this breathtakingly beautiful OS...

This can't be your first time writing! No way!!

I love, love, love it!!

Your right, he did kill her soul by saying those words to her...

It's amazing how you made me feel the exact same thing as Khushi did. It felt like as if I am the one who was going to commit suicide... and I don't want to even think about doing such a thing!

It was a sad OS, but I loved it! very beautiful and I mean it!!

Thank you sooo much for the pm!

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

That was seriously AMAZING!!!!!! You should really write more!!!!!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: DarkDove

Okay, I don't know why I am writing this, but my head was spinning for a few seconds after reading this breathtakingly beautiful OS...

This can't be your first time writing! No way!!

I love, love, love it!!

Your right, he did kill her soul by saying those words to her...

It's amazing how you made me feel the exact same thing as Khushi did. It felt like as if I am the one who was going to commit suicide... and I don't want to even think about doing such a thing!

It was a sad OS, but I loved it! very beautiful and I mean it!!

Thank you sooo much for the pm!

Wow! Thank you! I really wasn't sure how good my writing was. I'm glad I could make you feel what I felt when I wrote it. Thanks again!

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

very well written!

you are a natural at this - please do write more and share with us :)

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: KC294
beautifully written... esp for a first time :)

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-
Fabulous job!

Thanks!😛

Originally posted by: Usma55
Please update soon
Want to know what the family say

I will continue soon. Thanks for the comment😊

Originally posted by: rukuswasthika
so sad

I felt sad watching yesterday's episode, so I guess that shows. 😊

Originally posted by: Barunlicious
nice one.Good job👍🏼

Thank you!😊

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: khushi_ka_arnav
Sad one, but really very well written.

The feelings come pouring out of your words. Good flow of thoughts and plot. Write more. Continue this...👍🏼

I am glad I expressed what i felt. Thanks for commenting. I'll try to update sometime today or tomorrow😊

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

It was beautiful.. Have no words...i am sorry i guess i needed a good cry.. If u plan to continue it then, though u dont need to but please update and pm me .. i am adding u as a buddy.

Edited by kookie2020 - 13 years ago