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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Hey nice update...I think its just perfect. U are slowly building the intensity...like it

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

A very sensual, SENSUAL update!
And I love your risque update!!
Since you'll never hear me complainin'!! 😉

And Khushi had to be "actually" hungry at that moment?! 🤣

Thanks for the pm... 😊

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

wow loved it dear...it was sooo hot n trust khushi to think about food when asr is kissing her...lol...it was mind blowing n thnx 4da pm dear...

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Zindagirocks_21

@Zindagirocks_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Hahaha she got hungrey , lol I still can't get over it
After so much time finally Arnav had the chance and bam her stomach started growling , but damn that was hot
I'm cursing myself for wearing a hoodie , cz I'm burning right now , even my eyes were popping out when I read that arnav was serving the food and making it as well :)
Thank for the pm and please continue soon <3

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

i was waiting forever for this...oh i couldnt stop blush through the entire update😳 i feel so proud of arnav coz he chose to feed his wife first rather than giving into his needs; he respect her. khushi is so lucky! update soon pleaseee...😃

👏👏

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

I loved it. You write very sensually, I don't think you should tone it down. Khushi is so innocent, very true to character in your story. Also love Arnav. The reality of Khushi being a foodie is also handled very lovingly. I don't like it when a woman's being a foodie is frowned upon. It is in my culture anyway. Sad. But you made it cute and Arnav found it attractive. That is a cute message.

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Beautifuly written!Thanx 4 d pm.

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Shruti

@...shruti...

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

The perfect start to a perfect honeymoon
My own heartbeat increased
And so nice they are already comfortable around each other great work continue soon

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

Ooh! It's hot, and I love it! Please continue! The sy you have written it, it's written with class and though it's risqu, it can't be mistaken for anything! It is am exploration of 2 very much in love individuals who have a lot to learn about one another!

Thank you for the PM!