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RiaSheikh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

Aww Munchy..I am simply Lovin' It :)

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LilaUK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Whoaaa so A is a bad guy and Shyam is a semi-good guy ?? I think I like this, you know girls always like bad boys ;)

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waterunder11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

ah now its not as disturbing as before. It takes a bit time to understand your characters...
This is an interesting lifestyle.

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

So this Khushi does have a small bolt of fire running through her ;)

Wow, i never thought would ever see Arnav in this persona, it's so different yet more mysterious, it's like you never know what to expect :)

This is definitively keeping me on my toes, In my mind i'm just guessing all sorts of future plots, but i doubt they will even come close to what you may have planned! So really intrigues to where his story will go...

Brilliant, intense update, you can just imagine the tension and the intensity between Arnav and Khushi! Its definitively as if there is fireworks exploding :D

Thanks for the PM, will see you on the blog for my next comment then :)

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Wow arnav and his gang are asses
the way he ordered her around.
Poor khushi but i like the fact that he didnt try touching her when she went past him.
Shyaaam. When he came in i was thinking is he good? But then you answered my question loved the update :)

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

WOW!

the world is upside down!

shayam, who is an eye sore in the show is a pretty descant guy in this FF!

i am really loving Arnav. he is a unique character!

enjoyed reading the update! it was awesome!

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

that was amazing! the emotions, and actions were portrayed so well. please keep updating! 😊

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desisweetheart9

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Thanks for the PM. Nice update. Poor Khushi and her Dad. A lot of money they have to pay. Liked how Khushi handled them. She did not show fear.

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Sindhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#289

hey its from all others...

i loved it...

pm me...

thanks for the update...

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#290

I am in love. With this story. I love it. That's all I can say.

After Pandora's Box, this is soon going to become my addiction. You might have got yourself a stalker for your FF! :D

Awesome update! Loved how the characters came together, the underlying corruption was highlighted, along with Khushi's innocence. Shashi's fatherly attitude was shown well. But I could make out that he does not speak much, since Garima is not pleased with Khushi.

It was quite surprising that Madhumati seemed to sympathise with Khushi as compared to Garima.

Anyway, this was a great update! Looking forward to reading more!