FF: Before The Last Sun Sets: 3/33 Blog Link Pg 1 - Page 27

hmmm...you can do anything cant you munchy??
Arnav...no longer a atheist, no longer diabetic, loves jalebies...interesting!!!:D...
this is what i love about your fictions...they are hardly related to the show...only the basic characterization is the same but then you twist and turn all the relation and voila!!another epic munchy FF!!!

Loved how khushi told shyam to hold his head up and scowl at arnav!!!sometimes i lover naivety and sometimes i feel like killing her for being so naive!!!

loved the expression on her face when shyam and arnav hugged!!!
btw...what exactly is the original??curious to know how arnav is gonna be around khushi more...this is getting more and more interesting!!!

P.S..my comments are finally as long as they used to be in your FFs...that is coz i have one week of holidays!!!yay!!!:D...next update...to the blog!!!!:D...

OMG so Arnav and Shyam are together...

I knew he wouldn't help her. Damn how much would it suck if they both her after her. She has enough problems as it is. Great work!

MUNCHYYY... THE SURPRISE GIRL U R...

Sheesh! M so scared of dis arnav..he's just so sleazy n uggghhh!! N shyam a corrupt police officer..seriously m really nervous wid dis role reversal thng..m hvng a vry bad feelin abt dis ff..dat its goin to point out thngs dat i defintely wud b afraid of seeing..bt curiosity will get d bttr of me..cnt stay away frm ur ffs!
bt arnav luving jalebis came as a total shock! seriously?

wow amazing fantastic i love this story line but tell me one think is shayam good or evil is he Anjaliji Huppy here too or just inspector i know i am just jumbling but kya karu yaar

Munchy! You always come out with the best of stories !
And I am hooked on to this one too !
Continue soon !

Wow cant believe Arnav and Shyam work together. Loving Khushi how she just doesn't seem to want to give up

finally something different!

first chapter - ok ok

second chapter - am pulled in ...

third chapter - am hooked!!

excited to see how you lead us through this underworld journey!

pulp fiction yayyy!

Brilliant. Dynamics changed indeed. Am glad Shashi is nice to her.

And this is weird but I think we are all just programmed to like Arnav :-) If you were to interchange their names,would I still love Arnav and hate Shyam:-)