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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Wow that was so unexpected...complete contrast of everything...loved the update...amazing turn of events...eagerly waiting for the next part..thanks for the PM

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

God Shyam and Arnav both wanted her...no words to comment ...getting all bad words and curses for these two.

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Gargee

@Gargee

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

W-O-W!!! What a Chapter!

Khushi Fiesty isn't she? Way to Go Khushi! So Garima's a bitch and Madhumati's nice? Hai Rey NandKisore!! 😆

Can't wait to read more!! Great Chapter Hon.. I'm completely hooked! Thanks for the PM!

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

haila happyji as happybhai? and shyam a cop ? totally confused

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shameshame

@shameshame

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

intriguing! and brilliantly crafted as always

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neha

@arshiipkkndluv

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

wow,,,fantastic update loved it,,,shyam and arnav are together,,,its amazing

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

You have some amazing writing skills.. Your descriptions paint a very vivid picture.. Poor Khushi.. Her illusions about the world and the people in it are being smashed up into little bits.. Arnav is sinister, but at the same time gives the impression of having the ability to be a protective influence.. And his crude words seemed to be a bit of a show for the bhai brigade..

I'm still trying to figure Shyam out.. He seems like he might be the type to doublecross the bhais if it served his interests...

So now that the updates are going to be on your blog, will you still be sending out PMs?

Thanks for the PM for this update! :)