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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

well for one Garima is a total bit**!

apparently , Vikram was right they do always need a good f**k after they've killed someone!

in Arnav's case it wasn't that good!

i am really enjoying his character in this FF!

loved the update, and thanks a ton for the pm!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Oh that was one kind of a chapter!!

Looks like we are going to see some showdown between Arnav and Akash...

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Jyo.

@Jyo.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Arnav's not an atheist! :P So I am feeling terribly bad for Khushi. Why is her family treating her like this? What's she done? Gosh! And Arnav... love him, hate him.. I don't know what! His characterisation is just... so different! I love the way you've written it :) And also the way this story totally sucks me into it and makes a lazy ass like me comment 🤣 Khushi must be traumatized after seeing all this! I can't wait for the next update now! :)

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

hey dear...
thanks for pm.
you always write something different and difficult to decipher in the beginning...
as of now khushi is sadly blamed for no mistake...n arnav appears to be an honest guy at heart.
you write very well...capturing our attention fully. Thanks.

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9424976

@9424976

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Loving this story!! Please pm me for updates. I Love ur version of the characters and i feel so bad for khushi!

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•Jessie/Jessica•

@.Enchanted_Soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

This seems interesting! Arnav is a bit different here which I like, I want to read more so continue soon please! Thanks for the PM also 😳

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Loving it so Intresting
Loving ittt LOL i dnt kms What to say exept Im Waiting fr the next part already

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

A-W-E-S-O-M-E !!
Just take up all the good possible words out of these letters cause I dont have to say a word more about it then !!
This was such an amazing story till now !! Im sorry I forgot to comment on the first part of it, my PM dabba irritated me to such an extent ki I had to just go shut it up for some time !! But im thankful ki you sent out the next chapter and Im finally commenting !!
Arnav and a gunda !! Hayee !! That so fits his physique you know , and considering the fact when you described Arnav running through the streets I could imagineArnav running like Arjun Kapoor/Imran Khan running around the streets, and that part was amazing !!
And Garima and Payal both are such &*@$# I dnt know Im very angry at these two people, probably they might just turn up good later but right now I hate these two.Buaji seems better like seriously !!

So the first meeting was a boom-boom dash !! And actually the DASHING meetings of theirs are always better than others ... And I loved the whole after effect of the crash you describes and the way Khushi runs away !!
All in all I loved the update !!🤗

PS: Warning , I somehow just write weird stuff once I start commenting... So sorry if its irritating at times