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Munchy..

what the hell?! dude you always surprise me with such scenes! arnav killed some guy (yeah the whole gang thingy is going above my head) while keeping an eye contact with khushi. And then he uhh went and did it with the girl who had fallen in love with the person who was just killed. After him, aman followed... this is INSANITY. This whole thing scares me but I still bl***y cannot not read your story! okay so umm basically the world is not a safe place and the time this story is taking place, I am assuming most men are bad they kill ppl and then go after some girl to i guess erase the memories or just for the heck of it...whtever. Lol I cant get over Happy Singh being the head of the evil! Name is happy but personality is totally opposite...how saldy ironic.

I didnt understand the italicized terms, were they names or something else? I hope i can keep up with this. Apart from this all, as usual amazing writing and uhh descriptions. They get to me! Keep it up! :D

ow man she witnessed a murder.. oh god! poor girl.. she would be terrified.. nani supporting arnav :O and him not gelling well with akash??

munchy it sounds interesting but different again,

This is going to be dark!!! Arnav as a gunda??? I hope he doesn't take khushi to be one of those u know who...!!! I still can't think of Arnav as a scruffy n roDside character... But I trust u that u will bring me Round n ur writing will suck me right in !!! Tc dear n update soon... I'm really lpoking forward to the story... Tc:)

OMFG! Munchy,i guess u r nvr goin to stop amazing us! Each tym u come wid smthn more breath-hitching than the previous one..
n i guess u hv an obsession in showing arnav so ruthless n filthy in an odd way..bt at d end u gv us bak our dear arnav..dnt knw hw u manage to do dat..ur ffs r alwez unnerving..it 4ces to think,penetrates deep into our minds,digs up feelings..alwez mk me realize dat hw lucky i am to get such a protected life..d stark reality of this world hits me..i dnt knw if it will b called as virtual sadism or nt,bt i at tyms really imagine myslf at d recieving end of such torments n turmoils..like dat of khushi in genesis..mayb its mere curiosity to knw dat side of dis life..i believe if u dnt xperience pain u wont knw wat pleasure actually is,u wont b able to enjy d pleasure totally..
enuf of useless babbering..comin bak to ur update,cnt blv arnav called to DM..n m guessing khushi collided wid arnav,no doubt..she must hv been so scared..poor girl..n arnav became a goon 4 akash's education..goodness gracious..naniji knws,anjali knws!..m scandalized!
d last part wid d s**t was dsturbing..my eyes went wide open wid shock!..frm nw on i wud stop xpctng cz i cn nvr catch on wid ur imagination..hats off!..u r doin an amazin job!

This FF is different than the other ones you write.
Arnavs character is dark.
That was an unusual first meeting between them both.
Can't wait to read more! 😃