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Posted: 19 years ago
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NAINA
AFTER TWO MONTHS
sooraj:(on phone)naina
naina:yeh papa, aap mujse kuch kehna chahte the
sooraj:ha,actually maine tumhari shaadi keh liye kisi ko pasand kar liya hai
naina:yeh aap kya keh rehe hai
sooraj:naina mujhe ajay tumhare liye buhat acha lagta hai
naina:papa ajay
sooraj:kyun koi problem hai
naina:(happily)no no papa
sooraj:so u r happy
naina:yeh!
sooraj:so u r coming next week!
naina:ok papa(phone disconnect)
AT NIGHT
AT HOTEL
shefali:so naina, now tell us akhir yeh dinner kis liye
arjun:ha naina, subha se tum buhat khush ho
naina:actually, papa ne meri shaadi ke bare mein soch liya hai aur next week meri saagai hai
arjun:(shock)
shefali:(happily)wow, thats great news,waise kon hai woh bad naseeb
naina:(hit shefali)thats ajay
arjun:(having tears in his eyes)
shefali:agar main ghalat nahin to yeh kahin tumhara first cousin ajay to nahin
naina:ha yeh wohi hai, lagta hai papa ka phone hai , main abhi ati hoon
shefali:u look upset arjun, tum khush nahin lag rehe,(having fear)KAHIN............
arjun:ha, tum jo soch rahi ho, woh such hai
shefali:arjun tumne to naina se aisa kabhi kuch nahin kaha
arjun:mujhe kya pata tha keh yeh sub kuch itni jaldi ho jaye ga
shefali:(having tears)
naina:papa the,tum logon ko papa ka khas invitation hai
arjun:ha naina tum na bhi bulati to hum zaroor ate
shefali:(looking at arjun)
naina:(smiling)
to be continued
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
wow! lovely fan fic... poor arjun!!! but u neva know... there might be a bhavri for him as well.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
very good yaar...
wondering wat'll happen next..
actually naina's excitmement to get engaged seems very fishy... hehe..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NAINA
(shefali and arjun in room at nainas house, a day before sagai)
shefali:rjun, tum kaho to mein naina se tumhare bare mein baat karoon
arjun:nahin shefali
shefali:kyun arjun, kya tum usse pyar nahin karte
arjun:shefali agar mein usse pyar karta hoon to uska matlab yeh to nahin keh naina ko bhi

mujhse he pyar ho
shefali:arjun baad mein tumhe agar pashtawa hua
arjun:nahin shefali, pyar ka matlab sub kuch pana nahin hota, baaz dafa kuc khona bhi

parta hai (move around shocked)uncle aap
sooraj:i m very happy, keh naina keh tum jaise dost hain, beta agar mujhe pata hota

to.........
arjun:uncle, apko sirf naina ki khushi dikhni chaiye
sooraj:(smile)i m proud of u
AT SAGAI
naina:ajay , these r my best friends, thats arjun and shefali
ajay:its nice meeting both of u
arjun:(expressions mixed , happiness with sadness)we too
naina:papa keh rehe the keh woh aur ajay kal london bussiness tour par ja rehe hai
shefali:to naina tum ghar par akeli ho ge
naina:nahin ajay ki mom ho ge mere saat
arjun:tumhe jub bhi hamari zaroorat ho to phone kar dena
naina:to tum dono yahan nahin thero ge
shefali:naina mein to papa keh ghar par hoon aur arjun apne dost keh saat hotel mein hai
naina:tum dono bhi naa.....
ajay:madam ab apki baatein khatam ho gaye hon to hum dance karey
naina:(smile)ofcourse
arjun:(having tears in his eyes)
TO BE CONTINUED
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww the story moved fast... plzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
nice fan fic 😊
write soon.........
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
lovely river 👏
waiting for the next part 😃 😃

n wow....... u hav changed ur siggy... n suraj looks awesome.. i luv that pic .. n luv u for the siggy.. amazing talent u hav got yaar... too good 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
NAINA
AFTER THREE DAYS OF SAGAI
naina:mujhe breakfast nahin karna,aap jaye
ajays mom:kya hua kaka, naina breakfast kyun nahin karahin, aap mujhe juice denen
naina:phupo mera dil nahin chah raha
ajays mom:beta tumhare daddy jub dekhe ge na is haal mein to woh meri shamat lenge, isliye tumhe yeh to pina he parega
naina:aap bhi na.......
ajays mom:thats good
naina:aap kahin ja raheen hain
ajays mom:ha beta mujhe eik kaam hein, mein eik do ghente mein ajaon ge
naina:bye(picking up the phone, calling shefali{engaged},called arjun)hye arjun
arjun:oh naina tum
naina:to janab aur kiske phone ka intezar tha
arjun:kisi ke nahin baba, tum sunao kaise ho
naina:buhat bore ho rahin ho, tum ajao na , shefali ko bhi maine phone kiya par engage ja raha tha
arjun:ha use kisi kaam se bahir jana tha, koi baat nahin mein ajata hoon
naina:that will be nice, i m waiting for u
AT NAINA'S HOUSE
arjun:kaka naina kahan hai
kaka:beta woh apne kamre mein hai
arjun:mein usse milkar ata hoon(open the door)so rahin hai, mujhe phone kiya tha keh bore ho rahin ho, aur yahan par(come out of the room)
kaka:kya hua arjun beta, aap wapas agaye
arjun:kaka woh to soh rahe hai
kaka:beta yeh kaise ho sakta hai
arjun:kyun kaka
kaka:beta yeh to ho he nahin sakta keh woh geara baje tak soti rehe
arjun:(thinking)acha aap jaya mein baad mein ajaonga(going,looked at a bottle)kaka yeh dawai kon istimal karta hai
kaka:yeh, beta yeh to ajay beta ki mom ki hai
arjun:neend ki diwai, kaka woh yeh diwai kyun istimaal karti hai
kaka:pata nahin beta,halake woh to raat ke 9 baje hi so jati hey
arjun:acha mein chalta hoon
AT HOTEL
shefali:arjun mujhe naina ki phupo kuch sahin nahin lagti
arjun:kyun shefali
shefali:arjun aaj papa mere naan property ke papers karwane ke liye lawyer ke paas lekar gaye the aur wahan par ajay ki mom thi, woh mujhe dekh kar pareshan hogaye, baad mein maine jub lawyer uncle se poocha is bare mein to unhon ne mujhe bataya keh in khatoon ki bhategi ne apne kuch shares in ke naam kar diye hein yane naina ki phupo
arjun:(shocked)shefali mujhe bhi kuch gar bard lag rahi hein(telling about morning scene)
shefali:arjun mjhe lagta hein keh humein yeh sub kuch uncle ko bata dena chaiye
arjun:tum sahin keh rahi ho(arjun's mobile rung)hello
naina:(sleepy voice)arjun tum aye kyun nahin
arjun:naina, r u ok
naina:(still the sleepy way)yeh
arjun:mein tumse baad mein baat karta hoon
AT NIGHT
arjun:(telling everything to naina's dad)
sooraj:(shocked)(go to ajays room)
ajay:(talking on phone)mom thats not right, aap janti hein ki naina buhat masoon ladki hein ap uske saat aise kyun kar rahin hein(loudly)what PROPERTY, kya sub kuch dualat he reh gaye hein, apne to rishton ki taqadus ko bhi pamal kar diya hein(phone disconnect)shocked
sooraj:(looking at him)
THE DAY AFTER TOMORROW
sooraj:bus , ab mein eik lafz bhi nahin sunana chahta, aaj se naina aur ajay ka koi rishta nahin he
ajays mom:bhai sahab mujhe maaf kardey
ajay:uncle aap sahin hein, mein mom ki wajah se naina ki zindigi ke saat nahin khel sakta
sooraj:beta ise liye maine tumhe kuch nahin kaha , kyunki shait agar mujhe he to woh sirf apni behen se(go upstairs)
to be continued....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing yaar !!!!!!!!!!
too good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!more more more.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NAINA
at naina's room
naina:(sitting on stairs,crying)
sooraj:(sit on the stairs with naina)naina, beta kya hua
naina:(in a crying manner)papa, aaj mom buhat yaad a rahe hain
sooraj:naina, kyun beta aaj tumhe yeh kami kyun mehsoos ho rahe hain
naina:papa is dunya mein koi itibaat ke laiq nahin raha, i can never think of it keh meri apni phupo mere saat aisa karey ge, i cant believe it
sooraj:socha to maine bhi nahin tha
naina:papa koi aisa nahin ha jo mujhse pyar karta ho, jiske dil mein mere liye zara se bhi...
sooraj:nahin beta koi hai jo tumse buhat pyar karta hai aur tumhe khsh dekhna chahta hai
naina:i know papa, thats u
sooraj:nahin naina
naina:(shocked)phir kon
sooraj:ARJUN
naina:(shocked)AArrjunnnnn.....
sooraj:woh tumse buhat pyar karta hai beta
naina:par arjun ne to kabhi aisa kuch nahin kaha
sooraj:(telling everything that happened before the day of sagai)aur arjun hi tha jisne tumhari phupo keh bare mein mujhe bataya
naina:mein kyun nahin uske aankein parh paye
sooraj:beta ab der mat karo , agaye buhat deer ho chue he
naina:(having tears in her eyes)
to be continued

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