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NAINA
naina:nurse maine apse kaha tha na ke inko medicines time par milne chaiye but u people never understand
nurse:doctor ,woh.....
naina:oh please, now dont give me lame excuses
nurse:doctor ainda aise nahin hoga
naina:thats better (coming out of the ward)
doctor:doctor naina, u look upset ,whats the reason behind it
naina:no doctor, i m ok
doctor:tum wahid ladki ho jise maine aaj tak huste muskarate nahin dekha, jo muskrahat hoti hai woh mehez dunya ko dekhane ke liye hoti hai apne liye nahin, kyun naina aisa kyun
naina:shaid meri kismat he aise hai
NEXT DAY
naina:mausi hosakta hai aaj mein der se ayoon mera inteezar mat kariega
mausi:naina apni sehat ka bhi kuch khayal rakha karo
naina:bus mausi , no lecture time
mausi:tum bhi na
naina:ok bye
mausi:bye
IN HOSPITAL
patient:doctor, yeh sub kuch apki care ka nateeja hai ke mein itni jaldi discharge ho raha hoon,thank u very much
naina:sir , no thanks
patient:doctor aaj mera beta london se araha hai,i m very happy
naina:sir khush to honge akhir ab ap ka bussiness apka beta sumbhale ga
patient:ofcourse, are sooraj beta
sooraj:dad to app mera he intezaar kar rehe the
patient:sooraj ab tum agaye ho to sub tension door ho gaye hai
naina:aap batein kare mein ward ka round lekar ati hoon
sooraj:(looking at naina)
patient:beta tumhe yeh ladki kaisi lagi
sooraj:dad
patient:mujhe naina buhat pyari bachi lagti hai aur kal mein aur tumhari mom is silsilay mein baat bhi kar rehe the
sooraj:dad my decision will always be in ur favour
patient:thats my boy!
sooraj:NAINA.....nice name

AFTER 1 MONTH OF MARRIAGE
sooraj:(12 o clock of night, waiting for naina)
naina:(enter the house)hye! sorry aaj der hogaye
sooraj:its ok, ayo khana kha le
naina:sooraj mujhe bhuk nahin hai, tum khana kha lo
sooraj:(leave the table without eating anything)
NEXT MORNING
sooraj:naina raat ko jaldi aana hum dinner par chaley ge
naina:(thinking)ok
sooraj:(at hotel)kya khao ge
naina:apne pasand ka kuch mangwalo
sooraj:(telling the waiter about the food)
naina:(mobile rings) ok i m just coming
sooraj:kya hua
naina:hospital mein emergency hai mujhe jana hoga(left the table)
sooraj:(looking at her)
waiter:sir or kya lana hai
sooraj:nothing
NEXT MORNING
sooraj:(holding red flowers)naina , its for u
naina:thanks!(putting back the flowers)mein cofee lati hoon tum fresh ho ayo
sooraj:(dil mein sochta hai)naina tumhare nazdeeq to mere laye hua phoolon ki bhi koi ahmeat nahin hai
naina:tumhari coffee rakhi hai
sooraj:(taking the coffee from the table, look the flowers in the vase)smile
naina:kya hua, muskara kyun rehe ho
sooraj:kuch nahin
TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 19 years ago
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whoa........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz &nbs p; river....... rit soon......... pretty soon...
cos u know in the last ff only i was going to add.. plz next mein sooraj ko rakhna... thankoo..
waiting for the next part eagerly...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NAINA
sooraj:auntie naina ka yeh rawaiya meri samajh mein to nahin ata, mein janta hoon ke woh dil ki buhat achi hai par phir bhi....
mausi:beta woh hamesha aise nahin the
sooraj:kya matlab
mausi:saula(16) saal pehle,naina mein aur uske mom aur dad hum sub picnic par gaye the, picnic se wapsi par uske mom dad ne kaha ke hum gari parking se late hai , mein naina ka khayal rakhoon,thori deer baad kya dekhti hoon ke woh dono jis car mein the uska accident hogeya, naina uswaqt sirf paanch(5) saal ki thi aur usne yeh sub kuch apni ankhoon se dekha, uske baad woh buhat khamosh hogaye, baat karna chor de aur...
sooraj:(having tears in his eyes)
mausi:uske baad mein to kaam par chali jati thi aur naina ghar mein akeli, us akele pan ne bhi use buhat khamosh sa kardiya tha, woh apne maa baap se buhat pyar karti thi
sooraj:auntie ap bataye mein kya karoon,mein naina ko is tarha gumsum nahin dekh sakta
mausi:beta mujhe lata hai ke tumhe apne mom dad ko apne ghar le ana chaiye , ho sakta hai ke woh uske maa baap ki kami ko door kar sake
sooraj:aap theek keh rahi auntie, waise bhi woh dono naina ko apni beti se kum nahin mante
NEXT DAY
naina:(i happiness)uncle auntie ap dono, i m so happy
sooraj dad:beta hume tumhari buhat yaad a rahi thi is liye agaye
naina:yeh aap dono he ka to ghar hai
sooraj mom:beta , humay tum se bhat umeeden hai , tum samajh rahi ho na
naina:(looking at sooraj)
sooraj:(looking at naina)
AFTER TWO MONTHS
naina:sooraj tumne mujhe mom dadko la kar mujhe buhat badi khushi de hai, TUM ISKA ANDAZZA BHI NAHIN KAR SAKTE
sooraj:(smiling) mein bhi buhat khush hu, tumhe buhat urse baad is tarah khush dekha hai
naina:(combing her hair)
sooraj:(coming close to her)
naina:(naina looking at him)
AFTER NINE MONTHS
sooraj mom:beta ladki hui hai
naina:(very happy)
sooraj:naina yeh bilkul tum par gaye hai
sooraj dad:beta ab is pyari si guriya(doll) ka koi naam bhi soch lo
sooraj:uske liye buhat waqt para hai
naina:(smiling)
TO BE CONTINUED
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
NAINA
IN SHIMLA
naina:suna hai is jaga ki coffee buhat achi hoti hai
sooraj:tum yaha ruko, main lekar aata hoon
naina:ok
anonymous:behen je
naina:je
anonymous:aap meri bachi ka thori deer khayal rakhe ge, mujhe meri patni ko paas se he lana hai
naina:dont worry, i will take care of her
sooraj:yeh kon hai
naina:iske dad ate he honge
sooraj:oh my god, main apna wallet to bhul hi aya , main abhi lekar ata hoon
naina:jaldi aana
sooraj:kyun tum kahin ja rahee ho
naina:ha.......
sooraj:kahan
naina:tum ayo to batati hoon
sooraj:(going)
girl:(shouts) mama.... papa......
naina:kya hua beta
girl:mere mom dad
naina:(looks at the side, remembers about her past when her mom dad died in an accident)
girl:auntie kuch karey na
naina:(run, and save the mom and dad of the girl, and got severlyinjured)SOOooraj.............
sooraj:NAaina...............................
naina:sooraj
sooraj:naina tumhe kuch nahin hoga
naina:sooraj mere paas waqt nahin hai, par eik baat ki khushi ab is dunya mein
eik aur ladki naina jassi zindigi nahin guzare ge
sooraj:naina yeh kya keh rahi ho
naina:sooraj eik aur baat jo aaj tak mein tumse nahin keh pai
sooraj:(crying)kya.... naina
naina:I..... LOoVE......U(DIED)
sooraj:nainaaaaaaaaa...................
to be continued
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
haeeeeeeeee i just read all parts together..why did u kill naina..noooo plzzzzzzzzzzz.. 🤢 😭
par hey very nice FF..parhte huay seemed so real.. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NAINA
AFTER TWENTY YEARS
sooraj:naina...
naina:yeh papa
sooraj:beta, i will really miss u
naina:papa, yeh pehli dafa to nahin, keh mein hostel ja rahi hoon
sooraj:promise me, u will daily call me
naina:ofcourse papa
sooraj:bye....
naina:bye....
AT HOSTEL
arjun:naina...
naina:hai!
arjun:welcome back
naina:oh, so u caught me
arjun:how was the journey
naina:yeh, it was nice,but where is shefali
arjun:shefali.......well may she is giving the paper
shefali:so u guys r here
naina:how was the paper
shefali:dont ask me
arjun:(laughing)
shefali:hey, why r u laughing
naina:Arjun,kya hua shefali
shefali:that stupid professor! i really hate him
naina: what happen
shefali:u know through out the paper , jub bhi mein sochti keh idhir udhar se kuch pooch leti hoon to kya dekhti hoon keh woh professor meri tarf he dekh raha hai, now tell me is this fair, bhai hall mein mere alawa bhi buhat students hain unke tarf dekho...
naina:(laughing)
shefali:u too
arjun:i knew it
naina:arjun tumhe bata jub insaan ko kisi se pyar hot hai na to use woh insaan har jaga dekhai deta hai , yun lagta hai jaise use woh dekh raha ho
arjun:naina tumhara matlab.......
shefali:STOP IT! u people r really too much
arjun:waise shefali, professor is really very handsome,kyun naina
naina:i agree with u
shefali:i m just going, if u further talk nonscence
to be continued.............
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
NAINA
at cafeteria
naina:three cold drinks plz(at counter)
arjun:thanks
shefali:naina ,tum cold drink le aye
naina:oh! i forgot tumhe to coffee pene the

na,mein exchange kara lati

hoon(walking)OOOooopppsss..........(get

slipped)
(an anonymous guy holds her)r u ok
naina:(smiling)yeh, apko pehle kabhi nahin

dekha
anonymous guy:baaz dafa naazrein humse

dhoka kar jati hai, woh khoobsoorat cheezon

ko dekhna bhool hi jati hai
naina:sounds intresting, kabhi phir milinge!
anonymous guy:why not!
arjun:(naina ko dekh kar cold rink pete pete

ruk jata hai)yeh kon tha, jis se tum buhat

muskara kar batein kar rahi th
shefali:naina tha waise buhat handsome
naina:u r right
arjun:Naina! i dont like this guy
naina:kyun , r u feeling jealous of him
arjun:ME, OH i dont get jealous by such

guys
naina:(smiling)
to be continued...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
whoa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow woww wow wow wow wow wow wow wow woww oww..................
too god river 👏
read all the parts now.. very very good...
but again generation leap !!! n suraj out of the picture.. don b so partial yaar 😭 😭
but really not good.. u killed naina 😭 😭 bechare suraj ko fir akela chod diya... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey gr8 going buddy! well done.. hats off 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just read remaining parts...doin great as usual..keep it up n continue soon..😊

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