Only you.. forever ? ||ArSha SS|| ch9 jul'17

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

awesome loved ur updateee alottt...

thnks for pm😃

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

awww!!!IT ws so beautiful.tear escaped ma eyes!!

so beautiful..plx plx update next soon

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Off course there has to be another chapter.. come on nammy... u not giving any romance.. maine aaj tak nhi dekha :P

well if not a chapter an epilogue.. u have obviously planned...

so loved the update especially the understanding u portrayed b/w them.. the way she knew what he was doing.. the way they knew what was going in other's mind...

and fir how she confessed indirectly... aww... sahi mein u always find new way of confession.. kya khaati hai tu?????

accha toh srk ki film ki copy.. well obviously yeh mumbai hai.. bhut traffic hota hai yaar... sahi mein vahan one-piece pahuch gaya.. more than enuf.. loved muks comment in the end...

chalo dekhte hai.. 3 months ki leap ke baad kya hota hai...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

nams u did a fab job...

Shaks at Kunwar's dooe step and saying "biggest idiot"🤣🤣

they even understood their silence except for that one strong feeling that they always had for each other

that photo frame with "ONLY U... FOREVER" was fab😍

he got it what she meant... what they felt was the same... but didnt express...

he ran for his love... their bet.. it was all so sweet... their msg convo and at the end Mukti saying "DAMN!! Kunwar tu b na... jaake ILU nahi bol sakta tha like SRK"...

gosh Mukti he is more talented than SRK... kyun bechare ko usse compare kar rahi hai... sahi kaha, he did it all in one go unlike SRK who wud have at least taken 10-12 takes for the same sequence...

n nams i hope this is not the last chap... i want more to this... pls...

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

okkhhh!!!!!!!! first lemme take a breath
tune to meri sase hi rok di thi in climax😳
u knw wht itna to mai ranbir ki movies mai b ni krti 😳 😳

okhh!!!! namsss dat was awsum
hayeee!!!!!!!!!!!! ☺️ ☺️
shaks in kunwar house n dey enjoyed..n dat line "or may b i m waiting 4 my prince"😳 😳
woww!!!!!!!!!!!! nams kaha se itne awsome dialouges lati h

n den dat filmy SRK wala scene...no no no nw dis is our kunwar scene...poorrr!!!!!!!! kunwar pyaar mai kya kya kr ra h 🤣 🤣

n den at airport awww
ILU ni bola...dat y our ARSHA are diffrent
n pls aise end mat kr...ek baar unko milwa na...ILU to bolne de
loved it...loved it alot

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Nams this was a wonderful update.

Plz mat kehena ki yeh last part hai.

I want to read the next part too.

And it was so cute ki shaks was present outside his house and wished he does nt open the door.

The way she said I wil wait for my prince kunwar was cute.😳

Shaks way of saying het feel;ings was adorable.

ha woh Bet jeet gayi wao and Amar was happy.

Wonderful Update.

Thanks for pm.

Plz do write the next part too.

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Madhurya

@maddieee

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

it's absolutely amazing... wow a true entertainer... plz dont stop this SS ya...

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Super Awesome update. Totally loved it. U spent 6 mins thinking abt it and 40 mins writting it. U r amazing dear. I think its one of the best update of this SS.👏

Their POV and dialogue delivery was really nice.

There is lot of things which i liked in this update.

1. When they were hugging each other and saying how they gonna miss each other. This one was lovely

2."I kissed his cheeks and whispered.. 'may be.. im waiting .. for my prince.. 'kunwar'" totally love this line.

3. The best part was the way shaks confessed her feelings for him through the photo with the caption Only u.. forever. Thank god Kunwar ko samaj mein aaya what she meant by this.

4. Then the sequence when he was rushing to the airport was nice.
'I reached the arrival terminal instead of departure HOGAYA SATYNAASH!!!! 🤣

5. This line was nice 'GOSH!! U won shaks..! u won..the bet.. im here running all the way..! only for u.. nd it will b only u.. forever.. I promise..' 😍

6. usse kya pata yahan tak baag ke aane mei meri jaan hi chali gayi thi.. lekin SRK probably 10-12 bara takes to le hi lega.. and me I did it all in one! Isn't tat great ?? 🤣

Overall a very nice update. I would definetely wanna see this SS to continue.

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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

wow...amazing chap...i loved it...finallyyy dey confessed 😊

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Nams

@..nams..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#230

thnk u everyone for all ur reviews..🤗 i think this chapter got max LAMBA COMENTS 😆😳

seriously im in cloud 9..

i wanted 2 thank each and everyone of u for ur coments esply on this chapter.. 😳

but i have only few time😳 left so i thout what if i give an update ???😉

i may update late due 2 xams.. so i jus thout i wud give u update before my xams.. howz da idea ??😆😉

its a gift frm me to all of u..😳🤗 i dont how it has cum.. unlike last chapter this chapter i dint even think what im going to write.. i jus went wid a flow.. and finished off..😳

do temme how is it.. updating in few minutes.. luv ya all ..😳

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago

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