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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

this was truely awesome... i was actually smilling ear to ear when one by one the kid opened up sharon's little secrets... n cant wait for SwaRon convo on that... awesome update n thnks for the pm...

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Nivedya

@ArSha_TanHa23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Amazing!!
U hav very nyc creativity skills..👏

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Sakina

@-Sakina-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

And you PM me NOW?

Girl this is AWESOME!!Very crisp,very avant-garde..very innovative.

The whole Sharon surreptitiously looking at his tattoo...and the whole Prince Charming episode-Awe-friggin'-some!:D

You BETTER PM me next time you update!:D

And the whole incident with Blah was really sweet.:)

Edited by -Sakina- - 13 years ago

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

wow prince charming was awsmm

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

this was an amazing update :) totally loved it

i am awestruck with the kid arya , she is too good👏

sharon is now stuck between her cousin and swayam !!

waiting to no what happens next , update soon...

also it was very interesting to no abt the person who is ur inspiration behind the story 😊

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

This is amazing...beautifully drafted..its good to see not the usual side of Swayam and Sharon already feels for this Swayam and is attracted to him WOW. Swayam's conversation with the kid was superb and Sharon's reaction were uber cute. The kid is superb...love her to core and Swayam feels she is just like Sharon ..so cute.

Swayam is Sharon's knight in shining armor nd in here d kid is swayam's knight in shining armor 😆

V nice and crisp..loving it..update soon and please PM me when u update.

Edited by AmritaluvSwaRon - 13 years ago

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

🤣🤣

I am still laughing and smiling while writing this reply. This is the most amusing FF i have ever read.😃 The way you played with the words for the dialogues of Arya was awesome.😛 I mean seriously - Don't talk to the prince like that and call him your highness was seriously ROFL moments.😆 And Swayam's pov's and reactions were like million bucks.

P.S- Please PM me when u update.

And yeah read the inspiration behind the story it was amusing too.😊

Edited by marauder - 13 years ago

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sharon_

@sharon_

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

im enjoying every bit of it... i mean it .. i was right down imagining the whole thing in my head...

loved how u described sharon's uneasiness 👏

needless to say ur next update is highly waited

p.s. the kid's smart 😉

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Loved it!! I absolutely loved it!!👏 So Sharon's cousin is just like Sharon!!😆 Loving Arya-Swayam conversation.❤️ can't wait for da next update!😃 Thanx for da pm.