..Say It Again..-Kriyaansh OS

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mishtika singhania

@mishtika_diva

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Superb yaar...

I ws so lost in it...aise lag rha tha ki koi movie dekh rhi hun...i cud imagine evry scene...

Pls continue soon...w8n eagrly...

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

That was a long and intense update - fully & solely KR. What more can u ask for - they r always special when only with each other - unke pyaar me bhi nokjhok hta hai or unke gusse me bhi pyaar - msure he will brng her around as always 😊

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Sheetal Rajput

@sheetal_arsha

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

It was good but KRiyansh wasn't that good...please make kriya a little less rone dhone wali don't like her like that..it was good but it could have been better..please update soon and thnxx for the pm..!

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

it was heart touching update i really loved it the tears started flowing from my eyes u r 2 good i love u for this update

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Omg . . . Wat a question 😲 . . . Too gud rey..

& she slapped him tight . . Whoa . . She had never expected it. . . . 😳

finally,,, she blurted out the truth . . . & now why she is going...?? 😕

waiting for the next part

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

comments for the rest part.

Shings it was superb.

a very emotional one.

was shocked by the words rey spoke but that was the way to make kria tell the truth.

Loved it wen she she got affected wen rey was hurt.

Thank god she told the tryth to rey.

Thanks for pm.

do continue the next part soon. Canrt wait to read more.

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CHOCOLATEKRIYA

@CHOCOLATEKRIYA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Her eyes moistened once again, tears scrolled down her cheeks.She was gazing at d ground.

R:Kriya tum badal rahi ho..mujhe mera baatcutter chahiye jo kisiko bhi jaawab de sakthi thi aise nahi..", he said wiping off d tears.

R:Baatcutter mujhe sirf yeh bathao tum isse yahaan jaa rahi ho??", pointing out d luggage.

omg mujhe tho rula diya yaar yaha par tumne to kamal ki

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

i especially loved the last part how u used the destiny part...

and rey questioning her about their fate was too good...

and sach mein the idea of the initial taunt was well thought of... i know baad ka i wrote and u'll say ki u helped but cutting this convo tune jo socha na it was brilliant and baaki sab came out naturally...

so amazing

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Awesomee update...finaly atleast rey know the truth...bt why is he listening to her...??why dnt he take her with him...?hope they are back together soon...
Update soon
thanx 4 d pm