..Say It Again..-Kriyaansh OS

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Kriyaansh OS:Say It Again..

P.S:-This is d first part of d OS..


Part 3-pg 21

Part 4-pg29
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This is another Kriyaansh OS which wil b based on our daily D3 soap until where Kriya left.This OS is about the way dey meet each other again after sum days.
Sorry I had no intentions to copy any of d written works.If I had reflected any one of dem pls forgive me.
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"Hello Rey kahaan ho??!!"

"Ghar par hun Swayam bolo.."

"Oh..Wud u mind dropping to my house??"

"Swayam mujhe toh kuch..."

"Rey in my house in half an hour bye"

"Swayam..!!!"

"Patha nahi ithna bhi urgent kaam kya hain isse", he murmuredd.

***Swayam's House***

*Tring Tring*

Swayam opened d door.He was having a men perfume in his hand.Rey wondered y he was so worried about his odours at dat point of tym esp. in d nyt.He crosses Swayam to let go in.Rey had some papers in his hand.Swayam stopped him from entering forwrding his left hand to Rey's way.It was an actionful one.There were no more talks, Swayam was behaving lyk a dumb person.He took dose papers off his hand n kept it on d table.He clutched Rey's arm wid his n pulled him out closing d door behind him.

"Kya hain!!", rey spoke out annoyedly.

"Hangout", swayam said in a calm tone.

"Hangout aur iss tym pai, hav u lost it swayam.U kno sumthing its 10 past 12."

"Mere paas bhi watch hain u kno"

"So funny swayam.Swayam samjha karo see I hav so many works to b handled"

"Chill Rey sab khatam hojayega.Chal Vicky,Nil,bharat n Amar humari intezaar kar raha hoga"

Swayam dragged him to d car n finally landed in a peaceful location of some sort.

"Wow'mast place hain na", swayam mumbled.

"SWAYAM!!!"

"Ok cool..!!"

"Swayam if u called me to show dis den Im leaving..I hav so many other works too"

Swayam was busy giving directions to his hiding friends.Rey notices him not paying heed 2 his words.He lefts out an ease sigh n pulls off his foot back to d car.Swayam holds him by d arm n d boys gang who were ryt behind came up.By d tym rey realized he was in d air carried by his friends.They started giving him birthday bumps by throwing him in d air yelling "HAPPY BIRTHDAY REY" at high volume.

"Thank you guys, now stop it for god sake"

"No!!", dey shouted unitedly.

They kept his foot back on d ground when their energy lost its bounds.Rey had d biggest grin back on his face after so many days.He hugged each of dem individually patting dem mumbling thanks.There was a mini party conducted, for d first tym it was non-alcoholic since Swayam kept an eye on NiCky from d start.It became very late by d tym dey stopped partying.They decided to move off to d home.Rey drove back alone while d gang arranged demselves in deir cars.

Rey was on d way back to him.His eyes were giving up, they were closing amidst d tiredness n full on dizziness.His eyes shutted lightly.A big scream from no where n d car halted.He was worrited to hav committed to do an accident.He got down d car n was worse wen he saw a girl on d road infront of d car n her luggage shattered.He was scared to see her condition.Indeed he cudnt see her so clearly, she was in a different direction which kept his view of her unclear.He kept her luggage at a point saying "Sorry" all d while.Finally she started moving, he gave a sigh of relief to see dat she wasn't actually knocked down.He helped her to see her struggling to maintain her balance to still stand on d ground.She moved her hair away off d face wid her back of d arm.He stood deir startled on seeing back in her life.She was caressing her arm which was bleeding n he was concerned for having d complete fault on his side but there were numerously many questions which were springing up in his mind.

How cud she be here if she had gone to Dehradun.If she hadn't went, den y did she lie to me..not me us!!N wat d hell is she doing here n dat too at dis tym??!!Where is she going??Why is she taking dose heavy lumps wid her n dat too all alone??

He stood deir just lyk a stone wid a cold heart watching dose tears of blood flow from her hand but his part of heart which always loved her cudnt just see wat was happening.Though he hated her for betraying him, his heart always loved her indeed it longed for her return.He took her hand into his, he took out d kerchief from his pocket n wrapped it around d wound to stop it from pouring d precious blood of her.Dis simple touch created dose feelings he felt from d very first touch.She felt d same too, he was also shocked to see her responding to his touch.She slowly lifted her eyelashes to capture his view in her heart.She never knew she cud see him again n dat soon.

I saw him, y was he caring abt me??!!Does I still deserve it??I dnt want him to behave in dis way..I want him to shout at me ifnt slap me.Y is he behaving lyk dis??

The silence was hurting her more dan wat words wud hav.

I dnt want dis silence anymore, she shouted to herself.

"Rey.."

He looked at her straight into d eyes, d angriness clear on his face.For a second, she was too scared to look at him.She shifted her gaze onto d ground.

"Jhoot boli kyun Kriya.Mujhe nahi toh atleast Swayam se kah sakthi ho na"

"Rey mein toh'"

"Tum toh'''TUM TOH mahaan ho,aadhe raat ko patha nahi kya karne ke aayi ho akeli", he said in a loud and terrific tone which wud easily make d listening one merciless.

He raised his hand high in d air n was direct to slap her but stopped himself near her cheek digging his nails into his fist.It was not d angriness dat was making his actions, it was his grief, d sudden growl dat was hiding in him since d past few days.He was a changed Rey to every1 but not to himself or for her.His love seemed to be eternal.How easily he cud hide his true feelings infront of others'he cud congratulate himself for d acting everynight he thought of his new behaviour.He lowered his hand down to a optimistic level but she holded her hand n brought it near her cheek, dat was wat she wanted, she wanted him to take out all his grudge back, he want him emotions to flee n take its revenge.She herself wanted to face d consequences of her acts.She wanted him to react violently, to yell at her, to crush her down to death.Yes death..dat was d only way for her heart to take off d guilt.

She started taunting him, he wanted him to be very cruel to her for wat she thought she deserved.She started raising her voice to let his misery speak to her.She started speaking aloud..

"Reyaansh Singhania d Dazzler...lagta hain abhi bhi tum Kriya Ghai ka chakkar mein hee ho"

"Tumhe sach mein lagta hain mein tujse pyaar karun..never..not again!!N u know at u dnt deserve it"

"Toh mujhe dekhar kaho Reyaansh"

He faced her aggressively holding her arms wid his hands.

"I hate you get it...I hate you so much now"

"I hate you..." he repeated it many times, his voice breaking down as he repeats it, his enraged face turning emotionally, his eyes were speaking his sad tale.He loosened d grip fighting back wid his own emotions which he never wanted to show off to anyone but he was d same Reyaansh Singhania, mayb it was d magic of her which wud make him more weak dan wat he is.He was totally a different person infront of her no matter how much he tried to maintain dat d hunk image.

Was dat wat she wanted??!! It was a straight no for her answer.She cudnt see him, see dat old rey back who loveds her d same n is still loving her.She wanted him to rub off d part of Kriya Ghai in his life.Her eyes were moistening, she wanted to stop him.

"Aww so sad..!!!", she said maintaining her bold attitude only thru her voice.

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So dis is d first part of dis OS..
If any typo errors r deir sorry dint recheck it..
I wil try to updt d next part soon but no promises since Im having my xams nearly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing os shings.
lovely one.
hmmm Rey meeting Kria on his bday and all this happening at that time .
SO sad.
U hacve protrayed his feelings so well.
Do continue it soon.
waiting to read the next part.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first one to comment... simply awesome... luved it...do pm me...all the best 4 ur xams
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Posted: 13 years ago
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abey tu mila rhi hian dono ko ya alag kr rhi hai
sharon ko yeh sb pta chl gya na toh maar dalegi kriya ko
aur aisi startin ke loye hum tjhe mar dalege
kr lya rhi hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres!

I liked it Snigs..it was touching to see Rey so sad and Kriya fighting back to be in her bold image and not breaking down in front of him..!
update soon
thanks fr d pm
Edited by surbhi_d3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh emotional one... bt lykd it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its awesome:-)pm me wenever u update:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc 1...u portrayed their emotions very well...i guess v have here wat v wanted-rey to take out his hidden emotions-the anger,pain and what not... i guess we have another blissful soothing ss in the making...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing 1 snigdha
Hw nicely u did it till d boys didnt wish rey i cudnt even think dat dey r taking him 4 bday celebration.
great writing skill.
well display of KR's emotion.
u jst portrayd it vry well
hope sum day it happens in d3.
thanx 4 pm.
& all d bst 4 exams
is d exam Bitsat??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti

Amazing 1 snigdha

Hw nicely u did it till d boys didnt wish rey i cudnt even think dat dey r taking him 4 bday celebration.
great writing skill.
well display of KR's emotion.
u jst portrayd it vry well
hope sum day it happens in d3.
thanx 4 pm.
& all d bst 4 exams
is d exam Bitsat??

Ya Bisat n I hav another comp. xam b4 dat..

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