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Posted: 13 years ago
Haila nupz ka dream sch ho gya
lovely part
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Last update was totally outstanding dear
adorable Mayur atlast 2gether thanks 2 u
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
yayy both r together..
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was a simple bt romantic confession. Finally Mayank shared his problem with Nupur and she is with him.Now as they wil work together so they wil get lot of opportunities for romance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
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Sweet n Simple...
loved it lodsss
Rohan n Ishaan part was funny...
loved it...
hope to see dem Together now...
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Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
outstanding update.

finally mayur confessed.

beautifully written.

continue soon.

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hey I am back with my update 🥳
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Chapter-31

Nupur goes along with Ishaan but looking back at Mayank thought she cannot see him as he is sitting in the car and glass windows are closed. Mayank observes Nupur going gets disappointed. Nupur reaches her relatives house but with a broad smile. Everyone are confused kutumb thinks 'did Nupur liked that guy, oh no. I did not like him at all. Before I want Nupur to say yes to this match but after seeing the way the guy and his mother is behaving I really donot want my Nupur to marry. I think I should do something and keep daughter away from that guy till we leave to Chandigarh' Kutumb "beta Nupur, how is the fields and all, hope you are enjoying"
Nupur "yes mom, they are beautiful" says dreamily.
Kutumb continues "then go and enjoy naa why to waste your time here. I will call you once we start ok"
Nupur just want this opportunity to run from there. She says "ok mom, bye" she runs from there.
Ishaan is busy with Inder and Vidith is busy with Seema. Rohan is still clearing his running nose due to allergy sitting with his mother.
Kiran asks "where is Nupur, ask her to come and sit with us. My son want to talk with her. I think they still did not speak much"
kutumb continues "why did he jumped in to mud pond"
Kiran "what?"
Kutumb covers "I mean bechara how did he fallen in mud pond" Kiran keeps her hand on her sons head and says "yes , poor son" Kutumb thinks 'keep your poor son with you' and gives a smile and says "oh actually I send Nupur on some work, she will come. Aree rohan beta go, go and take rest when Nupur comes I will call you"
Rohan who is really sick now nods his head and goes to his room followed by his mother kiran.

Nupur runs towards the fields where Mayank's car is parked before, gets disappointed when she did not find the car. She turns back to go when someone pulls her making her fall on hay heap along with him. She raises her head to see that she has fallen on Mayank and both on hay heap.
Nupur shouts "Mayank" and hugs him "I thought you left"
Mayank "how can I go leaving my Nupur and more over after she confessed her feelings to me" he tights the hug pulling Nupur too close to him. Nupur puts her hand on his chest and rests her head on her hand looking into Mayank's eyes. Mayank plays with her locks falling on her face and caring her cheek, enjoying the feel of her soft skin.
Nupur "where is your car. I did not find it here so I though you left me"
Mayank "oh the farmers came and asked me to remove my car, so I just parked on other side" Mayank rolls over Nupur coming on top of her looking into her eyes slowly bend down and hides his head in the hallow of her neck and hugs her tight. Nupur feels heat of Mayank body warming her up, she breaths unevenly. She closes her eyes to savior the feel; she likes Mayank weight on her body. But she feels shy looking at the intimate way they are lying, she tries to move but Mayank "stay like that Nupur, I want to savior the soft feel of yours under me".

She places her hands around him pulling him as close as possible. They stayed in each other's arms like god knows how many minutes or hours. Later they roamed all over the fields hand in hand enjoying the beautiful nature and cool breeze just like teenagers who fall in love for the first time. It is almost in the evening when Ishaan comes to search for Nupur. Mayank pecks on Nupur cheek and says good bye and starts back to Chandigarh. Nupur goes along with Ishaan. Bhushan family takes leave from everyone and goes back to Chandigarh. Inder politely rejects the match after consulting Kutumb and Nupur. Everyone are in deep sleep when they reached Chandigarh no one noticed the continue blush and smile on Nupur's face except Seema.

First Seema thought may be Nupur is blushing because liked Rohan when Nupur came back from fields but when she rejected Rohan, seema is confused. From her corner of her eyes seema noticed Nupur's every move.

Seema "kuch tho gadbad hain, Nupur is looking very happy and she is blushing as if she fallen in love for the first time. Oh my god is she in love. If this is true then with whom? Samrat is not possible because he is hooked with Gunjan, everyone knows that then who is the mystery person. I need to find out."

Next day Nupur gets ready to go to office with very much care. To Kutumbs happiness and Seema increasing doubts, Nupur is looking like a girl. Nupur has taken care of small to smallest thing while dressing up. Nupur never cared about her appearance and kutumb has to roam around Nupur and request her like hell to make her wear anything girly and Nupur wears them like a burden but never looks herself in mirror to check if the dress suits her. Today seema is seeing a new Nupur.

Seema "ok Nupur, you keep your little secret and I will make sure to find out." Nupur reaches office, deposits her mobile at security and goes inside. As Nupur is about to cross Mayank's office someone pulls her inside the cabin, she donot need rocket science to know who it is. Nupur smiles as soon as she sees Mayank who puts his hands around his waist pulling her close.
Mayank "so when will we get married" he asked so simply as if he asking her to come out with him.
Nupur gives him a disbelieve look and says "are you proposing me"
Mayank "yes"
Nupur "then remove your hands"
Mayank "why"
Nupur "I said remove your hands first"
Mayank gets confused and removes his hands. Nupur folders her hands and says "by god do you think this is a way to propose for marriage" points her finger to him "Mr. Mayank Sharma remember one thing thought I very rarely behave as a girl, this does not mean that you will say let's get married then will come running to marry you"
Mayank lips forms a 'o' Nupur glaring at Mayank continues "sit on your knees give me a ring and then propose like a gentleman. Until then I wonot say yes to your marriage proposal, got that" completes her speech. Mayank starts laughing on Nupur act. Nupur gets angrier on Mayank and goes out of office fuming. As soon as Nupur exits Mayank laughs even louder Mayank thinks 'oh god she is so cute when she is angry. Wow to get this cute angry face I can do anything, tease her to the core' with mischief smile Mayank follows Nupur to the lab.
Nupur enters the lab still angry on Mayank for proposing so lamely. Mayank thought of teasing some time and then propose her but Nupur did not gave a chance and to their luck or bad luck three became busy with their work slowly. Mayank thought of talking with Nupur in the evening. Nupur is at security sees Mayank approaching her so she runs before Mayank can reach him. Mayank "god she is so stubborn. What shall I do now?" Mayank gets an idea and goes from there.

Nupur and Samrat sits on terrace room checking Vidith and Seema marriage album, as Samrat came first time after Vidith and Seema's marriage. Nupur showing the pictures to Samrat laughing on them suddenly sees a shadow before she could say something the shadow comes out into light and says "hey" with his hands.
Nupur almost falls from her chair seeing Mayank standing leaning to the big window of the room. Nupur opens her mouth but only air comes out, she still couldnot believe that Mayank is there.

Samrat sees Nupur "what happened Nupur"
Samrat sees Nupur looking at his back, he turns to see who is it and Nupur shouts "nahin" Samrat gets shocked and asks "what"
Nupur looks at Samrat and says "n-nothing' y-you see the pictures"
Nupur sees over Samrat's shoulder but she cannot find Mayank there. Nupur is confused now did she have seen Mayank really or it's her illusion.
Nupur "one minute, I will come" she slowly goes to the window as if she is adjusting curtains and searches for Mayank but she cannot find him. She decides it is her illusion and she is turns and about to move one hand caught her waist and the other closes her mouth before she can shout.
Nupur with wide eyes looks at Samrat. But to her lucky Samrat is still looking into the album. Mayank whispers "it's me"
Nupur eyes now shows angry and she takes a sharp turn. Mayank leaves her waist and stands infront of her folding his hands and giving her his dimple smile which runs a chill down her spine.
Nupur stammers "w-what are you doing here?"
Mayank touches her nose and says "came to manavo my girlfriend"
Nupur shows her fake angry and turns to otherside smiling.
Samrat "Nupur what are you doing there and why are you smiling" Nupur stops smiling and stammers "oh oh cat, yes cat it is roaming here and there na soo"
Samrat ok and bends his head saying "come Nupur see your picture, it is looking nice."
Mayank "cat, and me. Nupur you are gone pay for this" before Nupur can go Mayank catches her plaits pulling her back. Nupur puts her hand on her mouth not to making noise.
Mayank whispers in her ears lightly touching her ear lobule with his lips "you made me cat right, now this cat want the cream" Nupur is confused "cream" Mayank "yes, cream" and bytes her ear. Nupur makes a fist with her hands not to make any noise.
Mayank came to apologies to Nupur but this is turning into romantic evening for him.

Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update,loved Mayur moments..continue soon
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, amaaazing update ! Thanks so much for pm :)

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