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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update yaar...
u r too good in explaining songs wid situation...
loved it to d coreee
Awesome...Adorable,Cute n Romantic update...
waiitng for d disco night n Mayank n Nupur's Dance too...😉
loved it lodsss
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update yaar...
u r too good in explaining songs wid situation...
loved it to d coreee
Awesome...Adorable,Cute n Romantic update...
waiitng for d disco night n Mayank n Nupur's Dance too...😉
loved it lodsss
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗


The song was actually.. fitting the situation...
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is going to be amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry haven't been able to comment due to my exams..
Read all the parts!
Nicely written!
Loving the story..😃
Cont Soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey all i am back with my update and guess what today i became a Dazzler 🥳


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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter-22

Gunjan takes Nupur to some boutique of her cousins and lends some dresses for the disco.
Nupur with irritation face selects one beautiful white short sleeves dress which is tight till her waist and then flows down to her legs. Nupur looks like a Barbie doll in the dress.
Gunjan is not looking less than Nupur in her pink dress. It is feast to Samrat's eyes to see two beautiful girls dressed like doll standing infront of him. His eyes stayed on Gunjan which Nupur noticed and felt so happy for him.
She checks herself in mirror thinking 'by god, if Mayank is here will he look at me like that, as if I am the only girl in this world and rest of the world is disappeared' Nupur slaps on her head 'day dreaming band karo Nupur, this can never happen. He is just flirting with you and you think he too loves-'
she did not want to complete the sentence. She gives a heavy sigh and says "if you both completed staring at each other. Can we go to diso" Gunjan and Samrat comes out of their eye lock session "yes lets go" Samrat goes out to his car followed by blushing and smiling Gunjan and little irritated Nupur with her dress.
Three comes to disco entrance after parking there car at the parking slot. The security at the gate says "sorry sir only couple are allowed. Singles are not allowed."
Nupur "what?" looks at Gunjan, she puts her hand on her head says "oh know I forgot to inform Sheetal about Nupur coming as single"
Gunjan gives a helpless look to Samrat and Nupur. Gunjan turns to the security "that ok you can allow us, this is my cousin's theme for this disco party but I can talk with her, it cannot be a big deal"
Nupur is very happy to escape the party, she says "no problem you both enjoy and I will go home, happily because no one is there to become my partner so-"

"your partner is at your service mam" Nupur turns her head hearing some familiar muscular voice from her back which made her hair on her neck stand. Her eyes locked with pair of black eyes. Mayank's breath stopped in his throat looking at Nupur. She is looking breath-takingly beautiful. Mayank forgot what he has to say next. Nupur and Mayank had an eye lock until Samrat said "Sir, aap yaha"
Mayank with his every nerve of control turned towards Samrat "hmm, hmm oh mein" Mayank closes his eyes and opens taking a deep breath says "I just came to chill but I am single so" looks at Nupur "just want to join".

Nupur is still staring at Mayank with disbelieved look. Samrat and Gunjan are very happy "sure sir, let's go."

Nupur donot know if she has to say yes or no.
Samrat "Nupur lets go" but Nupur gives a helpless look to Samrat.
Mayank "you and Gunjan carry on I will come in with Miss Nupur"
Samrat and Gunjan says "ok Sir"
Mayank "Mayank, we are not in office so Mayank is enough" he gives them a smile and sends them away. Mayank stand beside Nupur showing her the way to entrance saying "chale" Nupur nods her head. Mayank placed his hands around her waist making Nupur jump under her skin and looks at him. Mayank is happy to see his effect on her, he pats his back and goes inside with Nupur.

As they enter the party, Sheetal almost fainted seeing Mayank in her party. She cruses her bad luck for not waiting for him and choosing her partner. The party has two different areas one is the normal disco where regular DJ and dance floor is set and people are dancing forgetting everything in a dark room like place and other area is open place with little music, drinks and snacks are getting served there. Some dance group is there to entertain the guests. Sheetal is on 9th cloud when Mayank gives flowers to her and wishes her. Sheetal goes to dance floor with her partner on insists of Mayank. Nupur and Mayank followed Samrat and Gunjan to opposite site of disco enjoying the dancing of girls, who are doing different types of dances. Gunjan is asking Samrat to join her but Samrat is making bahanas and asking Gunjan to enjoy the girls dances. Nupur is trying her best to ignore the hand of Mayank on her waist and enjoy the music and she wish Mayank to remove his hand as it is making weird things in her stomach.

[Guys here is a song from Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara - Senorita]

A girl who is dancing at the on the dance floor looks at Mayank who is looking devilishly handsome standing beside Nupur. She envy's Nupur's luck to have such a handsome guy by her side. She gives a jealous smile to Nupur and goes near to Mayank puts her hand on Mayanks shoulder'. (Song starts)

[Seorita]
Quien eres tu? (Who are you?)
Donde has estado? (where have you been?)
He removido cielo y tierra y no te encontre
(I moved heaven and earth and not find you)

She slowly traces Mayank's face, which he turns to other side with irritation but immediately hides his irritating seeing Nupur's jealous face. Nupur is glaring at the girl for coming near to Mayank. Mayank is enjoying this jealous look of Nupur so decides to make her more jealous, he smiles at the girl.
The girl feels more encouraged and come more near to Mayank'

Y llegas hoy (but you arrive today)
Tan de repente (So suddenly)
Y das sentido a toda mi vida con tu querer
(and give meaning to my life with your love)

Mayank removes his hand from Nupur's waist, Nupur feels bad and looks at Mayank who is slowly going towards the girl' she wished Mayank did not removed his hand'
Mayank goes with girl dancing with her placing his hand on her waist and swirls her.

Na main samjha, na main jaana
Jo bhi tumne mujhse kahaa hai Senorita

Mayank sees Nupur her from his corner of his eyes enjoying her jealous face'mouths the words of the song as indicating them for Nupur'

Magar phir bhi, na jaane kyun
Mujhe sunke, accha laga hai senorita

Girls places her hand on Mayank's chest pushing him stepping one step forward and dancing as Mayank back out one step back like dancing, makes her turn and places his both hands on her waist dancing with her'

[Seorita]
No desvies la mirada (do not look away)
Quedate cerca de mi (stay close to me)

Nupur looks this and decides to go from there when Mayank holds her hand pulling her towards him and swirls her taking her towards the dance floor' takes her into his arms placing his one hand around Nupur's waist and catching her hand in his other hand, almost hugging her.

Mujhko baahon mein tum ghero
Samjhi na senorita

Gunjan encourages Samrat to join the dance floor, Samrat goes with her' Gunjan and Samrat starts dancing in there world hugging each other enjoying the music.
Samrat-Gunjan and Mayank-Nupur does some salsa steps'

[chorus]
Chaahat ke do pal bhi, mil paaye
Duniya mein yeh bhi kam hai kya
Do pal ko toh aao kho jaaye
Bhoole hum hota gham hai kya senorita
Suno suno senorita kehte hain hum kya

The girls still tries to catch Mayank's eyes but this time Nupur holds Mayank's hand as if she has full authority on him, turn in his arms and comes near him, Mayank bends her down and pulls her up' both keeps themselves at arms distance still catching their hands starts turning around without taking their eyes off with each other.

[Seorita]
Jamas podre (i will never)
Interpretar (understand)
El sentido de las palabras que me dedicas
(the meaning of the words you dedicate to me)

The girl gets the clue and goes from there without disturbing them to get another prey to dance. Nupur and Mayank are in their own world'

[Seorita]
Pero el calor (but the warmth)
De tu mirar (of your gaze)
Me hace sentir como la mas bella senorita
(Makes me like the most beautiful miss)

Mayank leave Nupur's one hand but still holding his one hand and Nupur goes little distance from Mayank and turn her head with full force making her hair fell back looking at Mayank with intense eyes..

Nighaahon ne nighaahon se
Kahi armaano ki daastan hai senorita

Pulls Nupur, she comes swirling in his hands toward Mayank, her back is touching Mayank's chest. Her left hand is in Mayank's left hand and right hand in his right hand'

Yeh chaahat ki, mohabbat ki
Saari duniya mein ek hi zubaan hai senorita

Mayank holds the interlinked hands and lift her up alittle, Nupur puts her head on her shoulder and both turn around, Mayank puts Nupur down leaving her hand' Nupur turns towards Mayank'

Mujhse ab nazar na phero, aao paas tum mere

Mayank makes a half round around Nupur, puts his hand on back of her head and Nupur bends completly back with the support of Mayank's hand and Mayank to bends down, both looking into their eyes'

Mujhko baahon mein tum ghero
Samjhi na Senorita

Mayank makes Nupur stand on her legs, Nupur takes her dress both ends and swrills and dances along with the dress where Mayank just do the same steps with his hands and legs.

Chaahat ke do pal bhi, mil paaye
Duniya mein yeh bhi kum hai kya
Do pal ko toh aao kho jaaye
Bhoole hum hota gumm hai kya senorita
Suno suno senorita kehte hain hum kya
Both again come near, standing opposite to each other at arm distance placing there on hand on each other's waist and other in air turns around making half circle both sides..

Jo bhi pal beeta
Hey senorita
Har pal tumne hai dil jeeta
Bus itni si toh baat hai

Nupur puts her hand on Mayank's chest moving forwards as Mayank goes backwards and then both turns other side going forward Nupur dancing along with her dress as Mayank motioning the same steps with his hands and legs' turn and come back'

[Seorita]
No desvies la mirada (don't look away)
Quedate cerca de mi (stay close to me)

The both holds there hand and does a salsa step and then Mayank swirls her continuously where Nupur puts her other hand at her back and goes along with Mayank.

Mujhko baahon mein tum ghero
Samjhi na senorita

Mayank and Nupur dances with each other forgetting the world around them, enjoying in there world comfortably, Where Samrat and Gunjan are in their own world.

[chorus]
Chaahat ke do pal bhi, mil paaye
Duniya mein yeh bhi kum hai kya
Do pal ko toh aao kho jaaye
Bhoole hum hota gham hai kya
Chaahat ke do pal bhi, mil paaye
Duniya mein yeh bhi kum hai kya
Do pal ko toh aao kho jaaye
Bhoole hum hota gham hai kya
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Posted: 13 years ago
I was so desperately waiting for your update...


amazing..
loved their dance..
you had beautifully described

amazing part..
lovely..
loved the song...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ooo

yesss

i am again
first one to comment...

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Posted: 13 years ago
nic update
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved jealous nupur and mayur dance r so good ...fabulous


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