MG-MY LONG FORGETTEN LOVE(Updating) - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
he at last got a link...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
continue soon
now I am really curious to know where exactly is Geet what happened to her
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE AFTER A LONG TIME
NOW MAAN WANTS TO KNOW MORE ABOUT GEET
AND SHE IS COMING IN HIS DREAMS
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Posted: 13 years ago
very interesting update...
plz pm me 4 dis also
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krndr

how long will it take



1-2 hrs...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED IT👏👏👏
READ IT AT ONCE😊

UPDATE SOON & PM ME😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-11

i reached the place told by adi..

i saw all people staring me..as if i have done some crime

i reached the house, it was small house..i knocked at the door..i heard a female sound

"ayee..". she opened the door , she was an old women in late 60, i saw her face, she was angry, but why i cant understand...i heard her say "how dare you come to me, i don't want to see your face..haven't you done enough damge.." . i said "please listen to.."..i heard her say " listen to a shaitaan like you, you broke a angel heart, god will punish you" , i said "please listen to me..ek baar". i heard her say "why are you asking me?? go and ask your father...he knows everything..".i said to her "please mujhe ..i want to say something..". i heard her say "kya bigara tha meri bachi ne tum logo ke..batao, uske saath ye kiya tum logo ne..chalo gao yashn se...chale gao.." and she closed the door

i was shocked "what i have done geet?? why everyone hate me this much..please geet this pain is killing me..i can't bear it..". i heard someone say "beta i don't know what i am doing is right or wrong, but it seems you don't remember anything, it is better that you should not open the door of past..i will give you pain only..but if you want to do so, go to handa haveli, may be you can some information..i know you think if i know everything why i am not tell you...but i am bound to an oath..just go..."..and she disappeared..

i sat in the car and told adi to move to handa haveli..

i was lost thinking...

"maan ap humari haveli ga rahe hain.." i heard a sound

i opened my eyes and saw geet.."

"hain geet, mujhe jaana hain tumhare barre mein , humare bare mein.."

"maan ap jante hain, ye haveli mein meri sarri yaadein hain,i feel back..."

i smiled, she was acting like a small child

"acha.." is said

"mein mummy papa and dae ma used to have lots of fun.." and saw tears in her eyes..

i saw her seeing towards something and she said " maan i have to go..sorry , i love you and she vanished..". she was scared restless, i wondered why...i try to locate what she was seeing, but all effort got vain.

i reached handa haveli..

i was a real beauty..

adi said to me "sir hum pahuch gaye.."

i nodded and came out of the car..

...

next- some story to be unfold..


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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dear.
Loved it.
Waitong 4 story to unfold a bit soon.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
want to know what happened in past
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
u r maintaining the mystery well..
loved it..

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