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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

This was so beautiful :)

Its so sad to see them both in pain...And Arnav i really hope he gets her back :)

Brilliant concept...you've portrayed their feelings so well :)

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

hmm where can i find my own punching bag aman lol

but hey at least they came face to face...now its time for

him to bring her back

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Batool!!!! I hope I can call you that!! :P please continue soon!!! This was brilliant!

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

batoo atlast they saw each other thank god i loved it

fantastic writing so this an SS gr8 news dear

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: purplekid
Batool!!!! I hope I can call you that!! :P please continue soon!!! This was brilliant!

Ahan ofcourse you can call me that dear.😳

Thanks alot love.🤗

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arshilover68

@arshilover68

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

👏It's AWESOME, BATOOL!

Yay! Can't wait for part3!👏

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: ChocoBloc_12
This was so beautiful :)
Its so sad to see them both in pain...And Arnav i really hope he gets her back :)
Brilliant concept...you've portrayed their feelings so well :)

Thankyou so much love.🤗

Ahan, well lets wait for the next update for the story to unfold itself.😳

I am glad you liked the story behind it.😳

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
hmm where can i find my own punching bag aman lol
but hey at least they came face to face...now its time for

him to bring her back

Haha, I actuallt salute Aman's brovado.😳😆

Oh yeah actually it is time, but well you never know he might return empty handed.😳

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

part 1

beautifully heartbreaking perfectly done the emotions were well described very heart felt him walking in to the room and realizing everything of hers was gone and then reading the notice on his phone and knowing she was gone the desperation was touchable her leaving because she did not want him to show her that it was 6 moths and she need to get out their feeling perfect

part 2

him talking to nani and her realizing the pain in his voice was the one he used when his mother has died and him saying she was gone heartbreaking loved it her forget the pic only to come back for it him finding his pic and knowing only she would bring it with her and seeing the blood and knowing she was hurt loved it them meeting and she ready to run loved it continue soon