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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-
Navu jaan🤗
That was just super super amazing !!
How can I tell you how I felt while reading it...I just enjoyed every part ...
I loved the first part so much,,,,,I mean the way you describe about the realization dawning upon him that she's actually gone and the sudden change in his mind...on how he's missing her...Well its just perfect..
And the last part of the 2nd part...where she comes and addresses Arnav as mister...OMG !!Pll navu jaan update sooon.i cant bear the wait any more...And especially her retreating footsteps.OMG look at the order how Ive commented.youve made me mad...
Im waiting for the next part

Shobhra.🤗

Aww dear, so you finally caught up on it, I am so glad that you did, I was actually wondering if you missed on it, or probably were inactive or something.😳

Haha, alright now dont blame that on me na, I am crazy myself, dont hold capabilite to make others my xerox copy either.😆

You know what, that is how actualyl I personally feel that Khushi should react, after the six months are over, well atleast I would want it this way.😆

You have commented in perfect, what are you accusing youself for?😆

Haha, I'll try to update asap, once I am done ratofying the next set of Geog chapters for my exams. Man Geog sucks so bad, i tell you.🤢

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: clarissajohn
Yay amazing this too. YOu stopped it at the perfect point to make me mad . Come with third update soon other wise i will blackmail u like ASR

Thankyou so much dear.🤗

Haha, dear, I am writer, have to have something in me to keep the readers hooked, I usually dont do that, but when I turn evil, I am sheer evil.😈

Haha.😆 No need to blackmail, ill try my best update, when I get my time off, I am preety stressed with my studies these days, when I get time out, I am write, so yes thats the only period I can update too.😆

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

they found each other!!!! yayyy!!! again loved ur writing.. you portrayed all the emotions sooo well!!!

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: -Zara-
loved the description of this. felt so sad for khushi but her determination for a new city made me feel :'). go khushi.
arnav frantic searching was heartfelt too, but poor aman has to be said, lol. i hope khushi doesnt give in
xxx

Thankyou so much.🤗

Aww, I know I mean I want to make it sad too.😳

Aman, man I salute his spirits!😆

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: emistry
they found each other!!!! yayyy!!! again loved ur writing.. you portrayed all the emotions sooo well!!!

Haha, dont be too happy dear, you never know, it might just be a last goodbye.😆

Btw. thankyou so much for the support.🤗

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Omg!

Yay!

He found her!

Pleas continue soon :)

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Shruti21
nice
quick enough to write the second part...
but yeah...make them talk yaar...😛
if you have time...😆 i mean u have to study...
and they are together so i'm satisfied...

ThankGod someone considered finally that I have to study.😆 I myself seem to forget it alot these days.😆

Ahan, they are going to talk dont you worry.😉

Haha.😆 You are satisfied too soon jaan.😉

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: -Gautami

Loved the update batool!
N i Love it more when arnav threatens Aman😆
I want to read more parts to it..So update soon😉

Thankyou so much love.🤗

Haha.😆 I love Aman totally,😳 Mana parein ga, hes one man who is so obssessed with his job.😆

Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: kitzdoll
oh my it was beautiful...loved it...i literally had tears in my eyes n i hardly ever cry from reading but yours touched my heart...pliz continue sooon n thnx 4da pm dear...

Aww.😳 I am so sorry to make you cry, I thought this one was a little less depressing than the first one was.😳 So sorry.😳

Thankyou so much dear, that is one heartfelt compliment.🤗

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
*Exhales*

He found her.

Aman, you are awesome and a born PS. ;) :D

And Arnav, you better make this right!

@Author - You are really good! I could feel the pain, the helplessness and finally the relief! Great job! :)

Haha, thankyou so much dear.🤗

Aman, he rocks for sure.👍🏼

Btw, you can call me Batool, author sounds too formal.😆