ARHI FF: Dive to the Dark [LAST Chapter-p.98]

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.lostinthought.

@.lostinthought.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#581

Amazing update

loved it

update soon Abi :)

thanks for PM

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Cliffhanger!!! i hate them but being a writer myself i know why they are necessary!!! update quick!!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#583

awesome update loved it hope snake is dead and gone forever loved the beating he got he need it so badly loved how every punched deliver he was told why it was for loved the update perfectly done loved it thanks for the pm

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#584

OMg ...loved the treatment of shaym ...personally i feel men like shaym shuld be castrated...teach exactly how male they are now...keep on writtting...

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Badtameeez

@Badtameeez

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#585

Loved the update! Arnav's beating was freaking good. I enjoyed reading the action packed segment 😃 and yeah I knew Shyam was not gonna die that easy cuz he is just evil like that!! Arnav and Khushi ❤️ they are absolutely adorable and someone creeping on them 😲 Is it Shyam??

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#586

great update

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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MsDramaQueen

@MsDramaQueen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#587

THAT... was an amazing episode! I mean update 😛

Well to me it was like watching an episode. Even with the littlest of words, you describe so much in each sentence of yours! Which proves you are a very strong writer 😃

Man...I looved the part where Arnav was hitting Shyam till Shyam's insides were almost all over the floor...

but I don't know for some reason, I feel tiny bit sad for him,

Hmmm Abi what do you have cooking up here?

Is there a back story to Shyam?? 😲

Amazing update as always and I loved the last part:

One destination: THE BEDROOM! 😆😳

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: arnavluvkhushi
THAT... was an amazing episode! I mean update 😛
Well to me it was like watching an episode. Even with the littlest of words, you describe so much in each sentence of yours! Which proves you are a very strong writer 😃
Man...I looved the part where Arnav was hitting Shyam till Shyam's insides were almost all over the floor...
but I don't know for some reason, I feel tiny bit sad for him,
Hmmm Abi what do you have cooking up here?
Is there a back story to Shyam?? 😲

Amazing update as always and I loved the last part:
One destination: THE BEDROOM! 😆😳

AWWW! My heart is bursting with pride! Thanks so much!

and about Shyam...hmmm I son't know for some reason I was feeling that too...I feel like I might have to put a back story. I''m glad you mentioned it to much because when I was writing the update I felt bad for Shyam too. But I'm happy he's dead, I want to move on for a bigger bang!!! >:)

And OMG there is so much that might happen in that one room, the bedroom :P

its a husband and wife's sanctuary :D

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#589

AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT THE WAY U WROTE IT WAS LIKE A MOVIE GOING ON CAN PICTURE THE SCENE BETWEEN ARNAV N SHYAM HE GOT WAT HE DESERVE N THE LAST PART WHEN KHUSHI KNEW ARNAV WAS COMING SO CUTE N THEIR SCENE WAS ADORABLE WHO THE TALL MAN? CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#590

yess! i got the next update😃 now i hope i could calm my brain. i read this ff yesterday and was waiting really badly for the next one. i must say i was checking the page every hour the whole day. had gone mad havent i?😆

yaaay shyam is dead. i loved how arnav punched him, there was a style in it. that snake tried to confuse arnav till his last breathe..sooo disgusting!!😡 now who is this new one? cant arhi have a romantic married life for a while??😲

please update sooon👏👏👏