ARHI FF: Dive to the Dark [LAST Chapter-p.98]

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Am i right Arnav shot the detective without a blink?
Wow i didnt expect .

And LA, i am sure,she is up to no good.

Thanks for PM

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
AWESOME UPDATE WAT UP WITH LA CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM

glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Angel13
nice update
thanks for pm
cont. soon

thanks!

Originally posted by: -Zara-
eeep! lav stiring trouble!!!
xxx

LOL yea shes not the nicest person...

Originally posted by: flowers4u
oh man hoping lav would be good ...but intresting...do continue

im glad u liked it!

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: imran78
Am i right Arnav shot the detective without a blink?
Wow i didnt expect .

And LA, i am sure,she is up to no good.

Thanks for PM

well thats ASR for you. I love that attitude of his 😳.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Dedicated to me?!

Crikey. I feel so special.

At first I thought it was dedicated to me because we both feature a detective in our current work. (haha)

My favourite bit was when Arnav returns home to his two girls. Especially Khushi's line:

"Don't you enjoy dying by us?" Khushi retorted.

Am a bit concerned about Lavanya. I know that many viewers loved her, but I always felt nervous when she was around, even when she turned good.

Thanks for the PM.

Maya

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.lostinthought.

@.lostinthought.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Interesting updare Abi =)

let's see what happens.

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

ok i m excited now...

La's negative entry...

YES

it's always exciting - reading the jealousy, the claiming

everyone wants ASR or Arnav

But only Khushi has him

ALL of him...

can't wait for the next update - a request - plz make it longer...and do include ASR avoiding LA more...hehhehe

i m done - i swear

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Shopau

@Shopau

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Hey! Just read the last few chapters! I was busy with exams so caught up with them all just Now. Simply Brilliant and awesome! I love the Arnav in your FF. I like that he's so strong and unforgiving!😆

Love

Shopau

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

what the .. la needs to leave she came to cause trouble and khushi is her best friend hope arnav and khushi realize what she is up to loved the update thanks for the pm

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

:( Lavanya f'ing Kashyap. Why. are. you. here?!?!? Loved the update, and please please please continue soon!

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

ARNAV just shot him dead...ohk...

And wot is la doing here...is she wid shyam..or she just realised dat she loves ASR more so shud b snatching him away...

Lets c

Waiting...

Luv
Dhwani