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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Beautifully written!

Thanks for the PM!

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

AMAZING...VERY WELL WRITTEN I LOVED THE WAY U EXPRISED HER INNER THOUGHTS WITH UR WORDS...😍

SUPERB

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

That was beautiful, and so very realistic.

I don't know what I would do if I was in Khushi's position. Too afraid to tell the truth, still hoping that everything turns out fine, and still confused and hurt.

Poor girl, you really make us feel for her in this OS.

I would love to read a continuation, but only when you are happy to do it! I know what it's like to write a continuation for stories you have no idea how to pursue further! Hopefully you get struck by a stroke of inspiration which gives us another part to this fantastic OS! :)

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

How and why did I miss this one!

Its beautiful!

And i see what you are saying about continuation. Try. I can definitely see some potential and I know with your ability, you'll do a wonderful job :D

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Beautiful .. in one word

If you find some time, please continue. I would love a PM if you can!

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Beautiful but so sad. Please continue. Will there any ray of hope for Khushi??????????

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Krani
That was beautiful, and so very realistic.
I don't know what I would do if I was in Khushi's position. Too afraid to tell the truth, still hoping that everything turns out fine, and still confused and hurt.
Poor girl, you really make us feel for her in this OS.

I would love to read a continuation, but only when you are happy to do it! I know what it's like to write a continuation for stories you have no idea how to pursue further! Hopefully you get struck by a stroke of inspiration which gives us another part to this fantastic OS! :)

~K

Thank you so much for this lovely comment dear! I hope nobody ever lands in Khushi's position! I know it kinda sounds melodramatic or something - but I strongly felt this while writing this one.

I'm always happie to write anything about ArHi! And I would love to do a next part... I'll surely give it a thought about the continuation if possible. Can't promise, though! But yeah - I'll certainly try my best!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: meera30
How and why did I miss this one!

Its beautiful!

And i see what you are saying about continuation. Try. I can definitely see some potential and I know with your ability, you'll do a wonderful job :D

Aww... Thank you so much for this lovely comment hon! It meant a lot! I'm glad you liked this!

About continuation, I will certainly give it a thought and hopefully - hopefully if everything goes right, I may come up with the next part! Can't promise though!