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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

hi hun

it was sad, but beautifully written

i hope u continue wid a 2nd part

thanks for the pm

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pc17

@pc17

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Ok I am sorry first for the late comment and secondly for the short comment ( I should be studying too!) Pearl girl you write so beautifully-your writing never fails to stir me. The last line was wonderfully thought provoking. I loved it!

Good luck with it all!

Preity xxx

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Very beautiful ! You captured Kushi's emotions exactly right !

Loved your OS !

Thanks so much for the PM...

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

im very late..sorry for dat..

but well u can understand coz i had my exams too and now im going thru many pms..

amazing os..

very well written...

thnx for the pm..

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

just read it and glad i did! love it 😊

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

ok now u'll say m kidding but i had read this too... n i loved the concept.. ur description and mainly m in love with the poetic turn of lines which u put into ur writing,,, this is a real amazing os and i would say one of the most unique one shots eva... brilliant...