#2[SS+KR] Mines Forever Ch 9-12 *New Pg98* - Page 51

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

I know it is ur ff.. so there's gotta be some craziness😆 Dirty Minds... i didn't want the interaction to end...😆
i know it is fine but the last one was much more longer without any of my rantings but just pur comment😔

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

khushi 3rd installment is as ausual awsome 😊
loved it❤️
dere sweet si fights 4 who is gng to sleep on couch n who is gng to sleep on bed was really amazing...n in b/w dat dere sweet n akward moments...i mean moment of stealing glancing...unknwn romance awww i jst truly njoyed dat part to da fullest
try to update nxt upasap

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome update khushi

loved it very much...the cute fight between kriyansh was awesome

loved the way they care for each other

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: Winz

lovely update Khushi...super cute

Originally posted by: crazysky

i loved this installment a lot specially these two para

He finally decided he had enough. He was about to yell out 'Enough' when his eyes fell on her eyes. They moved down to her lips that moved in formations as she continues her crazy reasons for why she should sleep on the couch. But he wasn't listening any more. The sound factor in his body disappeared. He only gazed at her. The air conditioner's air that made her hair move around.

She moved the piece of strand bothering her view behind her ear and continued talking. Oh, how he wished she wouldn't have done that! The innocence filled cute face was capturing his heart like never before. It just melted him and if reality hadn't struck him, he would have allowed her to sleep on the bed.

i loved it totally rocking...

i know its simple but totally kriyansh scene as kriyansh r known to set simple scenes on fire...👍🏼

n again u explained their situation very well..

i always loved how u explain their situations n feelings..

update soon next installment...

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

I should say YOU are just the most Amazing person and you hve written a beautiful update. Wow spending a night together with a feeling still unknown to them. Well I love this sharon where she treats swayam so sweetly and swayam is always the superman ❤️ Yaar you are so the very best. Pls update fast, i know you are busy but kya kare control he nahi hota.

Originally posted by: nams_arsha

jus one word AWE-SUM !!!!

loved it! it was cute nd romantic.. pls update soon

Originally posted by: rachita_1994

Greatt parts!!! Sorry for not being a regular reader!!!!! Hopefully will comment now!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part!!!!!