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Originally posted by: Poonam786

What an update.. A total melting pot of emotions. *Bows*

Khushi's predicament just breaks my heart.. She really has lost everything if she's lost her stars.. I'm glad that Payal is so angry on her behalf.. Payal is angry...oh yeah! But Khushi...she is quite unwilling to listen or face the music as they say, isnt she?

I'm more and more intrigued as to what Nisha has done to make everyone at the hospital hate her so much.. Looking forward to seeing that part of the story unfold.. It will soon. :)

Arnav's pain is painful to witness... But there are so many things that could remind him of Khushi.. Is he going to explode every time? Poor Nisha.. Exactly. And will Nisha take it every time?

Looking forward to the next part.. :)

Originally posted by: mistyrains

It wasn't a request and she didn't need it to be either. These moments happened by chance, she had realized in her heart and her treachourous, thirsty heart craved for it, her body screamed for it at different levels no matter how much she would deny it later and so she followed his lead, placing her palms over his strong shoulders, trying not to hiss out loud feeling his fingers graze against her bare midriff.

That was a wonderful update. And the lines above strike a chord with the Khushi we have being seeing in the last few episodes. And Arnav's reaction when he saw Nisha in the very same saree Khushi had worn, was so him, and painful. Brilliant job with describing each of their emotions, A, K, N and Anjali too. I really want to know her side of the story. I mean why does she have this helpless edge to her character here? But anyways, I was waiting for you to update this one, so thanks, you've done a great job 👏

Originally posted by: Shruti_P

i dont know what to say

u left me speechless where to start n where to end...😛 Awww! Thank You! :)

okay first yay for long update ...secondly it had more or less all the characters except sharman i think Yep. :) All the important characters were there...Akash wasnt though. :)

khushi in denial and she is neither feeling rage i feel after reading as if she has buried all her emotions and is left with nothing she is leaving just for her family now n i feel so bad😭

and i am still confused what has nisha done just bcoz she is no more with shraman is that y her fellow members treating her like that want to know more background of her...😉 Lol! Read the next chapter carefully...a teeny-tiny hint about the dynamics of her relationship. ;) :D

and then arnav he is so tormented my god really feel his pain

the way he is always in his ex-wife memories even he cant see nisha in the same coloured saree n he is being as ruthless he wants to be😲 Well he is but how long will Nisha take it?

the flashback was really good👏

great update👍🏼

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

... If you're comments are filled with dots everywhere , then just just dont blame me !! Cause I dont know what the hell am I supposed to write ?? Why do you wanna comment when your chapter is like eternal beauty of every damn emotion in the world ??
RES for now !! LOL!
Will comment max in 5 hrs

*EDITED*
That was an amazing update Rae !! Ok I guess thats a usual line, but dont blame me , cause Im telling you Ive run out of words for every update you give... Each one as great as it could get !! *Blush blush*

I loved the beginning !! A better Payal, someone who takes her stance, someone wh stands up for what she feels us right or wrong ,and someone who stands up for her Khushi !! Bravi Payal way to go !! And Khushi, seriously this one seems so distant, though she's present hear physically she's just missing her very important organ, or maybe herslef, her hearts somewhere deep lost in the whole process !! And that flashback !! That was a heart-breaking one at this point , cause she wants to but can never actually hate him and she's frustrated because of it... And the part where you bring out the contrast b/w the new and the old Khushi , and when you just said she didnt believe in stars, It just brought out the fact how much she's suffered in this whole process !! Glad you liked it! And yes, Khushi has changed but should she not just let go off her dam in front of the people who are literally begging her to?

As far as Payal goes, you know I like to explore her character and give her a backbone! ;) :D

Armaan-Nisha convo !! That was a tense one Rae !! Having your best buddy argue with you makes you feel damn bad !! And sometime losing a buddy is more heart-breaking then losing out your love !! And Im waiting for a bit of an insight over here !!And Nisha as much as she guessed it right about Nani, she cant disrespect her !! And somehow her grandmom is more responsible for it ! Yes, losing a best buddy is hard, very. She cannot disrespect Nani because as I wrote she isnt manner less...

The Arnav-Nisha convo !! That was a mind blasting one !! The flashback was B-R-E-A-T-H-T-A-K-I-N-G I was just holding my breath throughout !! I could imagine every move, that angry seething look, those totally dazed doe eyes and most of all what that dance could have been !! I loved that part !! Awww! Really? I was nervous writing that part about the dance...glad you liked it. :)

And NiAr will have more confrontations...they are equally headstrong and neither shies away from a good screaming match! ;) :D

And when he shouts at her !! I was expecting this, but one good thing at the end of the ASR blast, we know he wouldnt let any one harm Khushi's memory and the apology from Anjali just got Nisha a bit more curious about Khushi !! Im just keeping my fingers crossed and hoping that sje doesnt ask Nani about Khushi !! Oh mighty anyone but Nani !! Lol! Lets see! ;) :D

loved the update Rae !!🤗

PS: Im extremely sorry for the incomplete comment beech me, but my cousin actually shut my lappy and dragged me out !! So a big SORRY !!

Originally posted by: flutterby

hey rae... sorry for the super late response... i have read ur ff till part 7... i dont want to rush into it... i want to read it slowly bit by bit enjoying, as u weave ur magic.. ⭐️ but rest assured i will read the rest and comment a little later... the best parts till now according to me were 6,7😍... i loved how u described khushi and arnav's agony, pain... 😭 it is so heart breaking... how both are lost in each other's thoughts without being with each other... they really r entwined in two bodies with one soul... 😍 i really am not that much into the other couple... as much as i feel for arnav, khushi... i loved how u described arnav's myriad emotions... laughter, sobbing lamenting... and khushi with the knife... that was a masterclass... 👏 thanks for the pm and ur patience with me... despite me not responding.. 🤗

ps- u r a big chor... 😉 especially in the 3rd chp... where u described nk announcing khushi's name in italics...and then letting the cat out of the bag... nisha as mrs raizada... well,enjoy ur chocolate cereal... 😛

Originally posted by: Anisha_91

Rae!! Just read up to chapter 6 will continue in morning.

OMG!!! Loving this FF! seriously its just brilliant loving the concept. Amazing job Rae...your writing style is just fab. Gonna continue in morning...awesome job so far x

Originally posted by: Japonica

Oh wow, AT, this is such a powerful, intense story, all verystrong personalities and in so much pain and anguish, so unlike 'ab main kya karoon'!
The pace is perfect and I will keep my hopes for a future. whenever that is to be, when A and K are reunited. Am waiting to see what went wrong in N and S's relationship.👍🏼

Originally posted by: aditi07

Just read the last few...sorry for late comment...exams are coming so little irregular with comments! No problem. :)

wow...beautiful updates...very intense & touching multitudes of emotions...
loved the chapter on khushi...brilliantly written...wonderful thought processing...& the connection wid colour Red...bang on!! even liking payal's characterization over here...very strong & has courage to speak up...liked it that she left RM...now she seem like khushi's sister in every sense! what intrigues me is what does akash knows wch payal doesn't...something about why didn't arnav say anything or tried to stop khushi when he knew that she was innocent! Thank You! :) The Khushi chapter was difficult to write but glad you liked it. Payal and Akash generally have a backbone in my FFs because honestly they have so much potential in their characters if only used properly...answer about Arnav not stopping Khushi is something I wont give right now. Lets let the updates do the talking! ;) :D

must say Nisha is a keen observant...great at understanding the unsaid...& noticing the small bits! wonder what wrong has gone between her & all her colleagues...wen sharman himself that he committed a mistake for wch even he wouldnt hv forgiven himself..then y does it seem that her colleagues accuse her of something...guess we'll have to wait a bit to find it out. Yep, she is. She is a doctor, she should be. :D Sharman will be there in the next chapter...read it carefully, may get some hint into the dynamics of her relationship. :)

Now that last update...wow loved arnav's outburst⭐️...the way he remembered khushi's tiniest details...& couldnt see nisha even in khushi's look-alike clothes...let alone giving her the place that khushi still holds in his life...glad that anjali understood the reason & accidently let it out...loved the scene! Thank You! :) Its fun writing NiAr confrontation scenes. :D

wow...loving the story...beautiful writing...amazing concept 👏👏
continue soon dear😊

Originally posted by: 3llie

What can I say that no one else has. I read almost all the part in
One go and I must say each part kept pulling
Me in deeper!! Excellent!!!