~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 71

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-

Loved it! Can't wait for Khushi's entry!

Originally posted by: tata_tata

i'll tell you what i get and you can correct me if i am wrong somewhere..

Arnav and Khushi -

the truth of Shyam is out.. but in a way that Khushi left without clarifying and in a way that the family think that khushi was at fault.. family being Nani and Anjali.. although Anjali has her doubts and she can sense her Chotte's turmoil!!! Nani is thrilled at finding a perfect girl for Chotte..

Arnav is heartbroken.. Khushi left without a word.. and his every breath misses her.. but still doesnt believe of her innocence completely..

Khushi.. i am waiting for her.. i dont know what she is going through.. what has life done to her.. how long has it been.. but i'll wait for the next chapter.. eagerly!!! :)

Nisha and Sharman -

they were married too.. something bad happened... something where Sharman failed to act strong enough and they split.. i am assuming he too was a doctor.. tell me if i am wrong.. and he left Sanjeevani.. the others are all there, but they clearly blame Nisha for what happened.. and hate her till no end..

Nisha's dad.. now thats a confusing part.. where is he.. what did he do? His own parents need proof of his worthiness..

Both families are extra happy with the wedding..a 2nd wedding for both the bride and the groom..happy to the limit of wanting them to stay together before marriage.. blasphemy, as Nani would in normal course think, but here, she suggests it??? (Aparna ji is Nani right??)

I love multiple romance stories.. my fav MBs are the series ones where they take one couple after the other and fixes their love lives :):) its taking some time here as they are moving in parallel..but i like the concept and i am excited with the potential in the story.. keep writing AT :):)

Originally posted by: yashi_arnav

loved it...

Originally posted by: aditi07

brilliant and awesome!! very intense, touching...lovely!!
like the way anjali is feeling for arnav..but really getting irritating at nani...i knw its too soon as we dont know why she is hating khushi so much wen not even anjali is...but still she is behaving too khadoos!!
cant wait for khushi to enter...continue soon..thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: curledup

Your title seems to be haunting me everytime I read your updates, it scares me with the thought that these individuals are not going to end up with the ones they love. It seems that they are all going to compromise and then in the end when the loved one does come back they are going to deny all entry. I jist have a feeling that is going to happen! also this pain was written magnificently. The way you desvribed Arnav was excuisite& You opened up such a vunreble character within one chapter beautiful! Yes my thoughts on the fic the ones I have just mentioned above beforet the Arnav part are going to remain like that till you auprise me ;) but I just feel that for all of them its going to be a little too late and somehpw they are going to get trapped into everything and one thing will lead to another! I dont know why dont you prove me wrong? gaaah but the chapter was amazing. I dont like nisha but I like the victim portrayal you have made of her. I just pray that somewhere in all this someone will see sense!


Do update soon

-Aashifa

Originally posted by: ...Binny...

Rae.. sorry for the late reply dear.. am still on vacation but you have me addicted so reading this is a must.. 😆😳

Okay chapter 5/6

Loved it.. how beautifully you portrayed the atmosphere that once was and what past events have made of it... I am annoyed by Naniji's behavior of all of the individuals I would have expected her to make that attempt to comprehend the girl that always put others before herself.. so far am liking Anjali tormented by memories who although grasped onto her fairytale is not oblivious to her chotte's pain the void in his eyes that continue to search for his soul..I especially loved your portrayal of ASR's anguish beautifully done could feel his pain at wanting her to shatter his illusions.. not finding the courage to stop the women that completed his every breath.. felt for Nisha as well.. the poor girl has no idea what she's getting herself into.. as you can see Loved it to bits update soon.. :)

Originally posted by: fatima2603

So sad...two people put together and both wanting their past love that they ha thrown away...god there;s going to be a lot of tears and heartbreaking updates by the looks of it!!!

Originally posted by: dumas

How much he wished he could defy everything and change that moment when she had looked at him the last time with a small hope that he would stop her. How much he wished that he could stand up for her but he couldnt...no one would let him - his responsibilities, his family, his past.

arnav is a coward who is letting his family rule and dictate his life he letting them ruining his life and they are selfish anjali knows he is unhappy but she would rather pretend that he is and now his future mrs is in the same situation both destroying their lives in self sacrifice loved the update very intense arnav emotions were well described and heartfelt thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: kritz11

It was fab!! Loved it as usual🤗
I want to give a special mention to this line: "she was not only a victim of Shyam Manohar Jha but also Arnav Singh Raizada"(something along those lines)- how true,haina?

Originally posted by: mari2095

[B][/B] Really gud story..but u hav 2 be at least 45 years old 2 bcum a neurosurgeon which wld make nisha way older dan arnav..