~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 73

Originally posted by: Poonam786

Man, oh man, oh man... Your story just makes me want to blubber like a baby.. The heart just breaks.. For all of them.. Why does the world and fate have to be so cruel?? Yes, I know this is fiction, but it feels so real.. :'( And that's all down to your amazing writing, so kudos to you!!

Really looking forward to the next part, and dreading it at the same time.. Khushi's pain will not make for easy reading.. :(

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

When will all the depression end? :(

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

On the contrary, they are expecting a lot from each other...in the sense of not being asked to be the ideal husband and wife...

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

oo never thought about that from that point of view..
but i completely agree...maybe they are expecting a lot from each other...:)
will look forward for the next part...:)

That really was one of your best parts!

this is so depressing...but it was really described well. so sad for khushi. the knife detail was amazing too.

Oh my god. He didnt stand up for her when the truth came out. The Raizadas got a distorted version and he didn;t bother to correct them because his sister refused to believe the whole truth. Is that why Anjali was recollecting that conversation a few chapters back?

It really puts this whole suicide game the CVs are playing with now on the show into perspective. The darkness permeating through every corner as she recollects in the light of his engagement. All her recollections, the good and the bad. And now she goes out to put up a facade in front of her family. I can imagine how hard it must have been for you to seep into the character and put words to those emotions. Kudos for that Rae.

I feel shaken after reading this one. And I have not forgotten Sharman either. You have done a wonderful job of giving shape to this story and your characters. You deserve a biiig hug. 🤗

P.S. The Scientist is like my favouritest song EVERR! Coldplay make some amazing music! And like I said that instrumental piece was a haunting melody! Loved it!

P.P.S. There you have your pics! :P Couldn't resist adding that lil bit of Arnav as well ;) Pic credits to whoever made them. I just found them n tumblr.

RES !!
Till I finish reading only
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Increase you patience madam !! I know you hate RESes but I couldnt help got busy with a call !! So sorry I just put the RES up coz I wanted my comment on the same page as your update *hmm* Im agry coz you're angry at me !!

Well but Im happy now cause you did as you promised !! I loved the beginning OK...Im sorry to say though Sharman I guess is a depending man and all, I guess Im gonna like him a little bit more than Nisha cause for her too she has everything but than she has this tad bit ego factor a little bit I guess a bit more than even Arnav does... So sorry but I guess Id be liking Sharman more than Nisha !! I loved the way he realises that he still loves her and he accepts that he needs her...And I guess its good to accept when you need someone !!

And the rest of the part OMG !!! Is that Khushi ?? Because I just loved the whole introspective way of writing especially all about Khushi's ways... So when you first describe her sitting with a knife I was actually shocked !! Shocked cause I thought she might just do something to herself, but I also knew that you would never do that, cause you are someone who has voluntarily or involuntarily always potrayed your feminine characters strong and when you'd described it there , I was actually shocked for a minute !

And then you start her introspection along with the flashbacks...Every important incident relating to one part of herself she has lost to the one and only man she loved !! Though is seems utterly impossible to believe, that Nani asked her to leave the RM ...and what exactly did she imply when she said Khushi has taken away all their happiness already ?? That seriously must have been the biggest blow for Khushi, epsecially when she'd already been going through so much because of their marriage and all...

And that tells why Arnav never came back for her, why inspite of the fact that he loves her so much he doesnt come for her !! He is so full of guilt for not standing by her when she needed him the most and he coudlnt...Not because he didnt believe her but because he couldnt overcome the boundaries of his family !! And well I dont know whom to feel more bad for, for Khushi or for Arnav or for Sharman or for Nisha ?? Cause they've all just not only lost their better halves leaving their loved ones, they have also lost themselves somewhere in this whole process of being truthful and not hurting their families...And Rae seriously this was an amazingly written update !!
Now I dont only adote you for what you write, I also look upto you for the way you potray the characters...Oh man Im so glad Im reading this FF !!

Loved it Rae🤗

PS: Sorry for being a bit angry in the beginning... But now im fine all thanks to your update !! Its just splendid

simply superb...khushi's POV leaves u depressed and we cant help agreeing with her decision of leaving him...coz all she had got from loving him was hurt, mistrust, accusations, indifferent, cruelty and not even a single caring word...ot matter how much repentant he is...its too late and too little for her to forgive and forget

sRistees plaCe :)
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standing ovation RAE, for such a outstanding part!
you left me speechless with ths part! i got goosebumps after reading it!
khusis pain was well describeD! and after reading her POV i gues it was fair that she leFt! how can anybody live with the person, who has always hurt you and then when u need hIm the most, he decides to be a coward and not speak a word! though arnav is paying a helL lot for hIs mistake, its just not enougH! :( *buT i will always love him *
and the knife part, OMG rae, it sent shivers down my sPine! for a sec, i actUaly thougH she was gng to kilL herself! it was brilliantely describeD!
the pain that khusi is feeling is unbearable!
great job rae and thank you for giving us such a wonderful piece :)