~ You're not the only one ~ ArHi FF Ch12NewThread - Page 70

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Loved the update.. The pain and the intensity u described.. Hats off...

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update..

luved the pain n flow of emotions..

very beautifully written..

continue soon

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Awww! I am glad it touched you so.

But you have made a lot of assumptions and I dont think I have said anything about them as yet...wait and watch as the story unfolds.

And yes, RM is a sad cold place indeed but how did it get that way...think it over. :)

Thank You though! Your comment was great and gave me a sense of support because I have been a little disappointed with the response... :)

And Thank You for the wonderful lyrics! :)

Originally posted by: --Siva--

Rae, you are an awe-inspiring writer.. I've no doubts in that!

I've read complicated FF's but nothing was this complicated.. How could you write as if you are answering my questions but in reality you're not! Brilliant!

Arnav is so vulnerable here.. Wish Kushi would see him like this and whatever the fight was or the misunderstanding or the ego was would be cleared and they start to love each other once again..! I know it's just a wish and would not happen, at least for now😊

Arnav laughing, sobbing... I could imagine how maniac it could be.. all the reactions..

The way you justified taking alcohol, if Kushi and Nani could control, why not alcohol.. And I would say yes.. Poor soul.. It is tormented already and still tormenting for his lost love!

Thanks for the PM dear!

Originally posted by: archielicious

okay finally made a step to comment on this beautifully written piece.
for a wonderful writer it requires a good reader who can pen down his views too..
yes it took me a lot ..i mean a lot time to come n give my review since i dont write much..
followed this story a long back say what hmm 2nd part or more..
was little bundled with thoughts abt characters n story.
u see curtains were raising slowly..
at one pt. i thought second couple will be armaan ridhima..
actually i came across this ff through ur index where u hav written OS on them too..
so was taken by surprize to see a new characters but then u did mention AR*smiles*.

as the story as unwrapped i m just taken by surprize n wonder..amazed at ur creditablity to write so cordinally..

this part is one which made me to praise you.
since the way arnav feeling were portrayed were soothing..
yes his heart was in torment but as a reader it was calm for me to see his love towards khushi n repentence took.
seems to wrote so much..
never gave such a big review before.
u see good writers bring a writer in a reader too *smiles*
.n actually i just end up saying good work..write more..n blah blah..hardly even 2 lines..
i give you the complete credit for this comment ..
keep up the work with continuing soon..
n yeah plz pm me if possible :D. for future
updates n if you reply to this comment..!

tc..
archie :-D.

Originally posted by: anumber1

See I told you! You would write chapter after chapter of angst and I would sob and it happened!! Lol, for real though this was amazing! My heart breaks so much for Arnav. He's at his darkest and he is no longer the man we see in the show. The old ASR would take what he wanted without considering his family but I guess Kushi turning him into Arnav is making him listen to Nani. I also feel for Nisha, she was ready to have a marriage of convenience but the pressure to be better than her father (just like Arnav) keeps her away from what little happiness she can find in this bad situation. I can't wait to read what Kushi has been up to. Are we going to see Sharman anytime soon?

P.S. Honeybunches!! I use that all the time!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Rae...a beautiful poignant chapter...written brilliantly👏 as I could visualize the entire scene. The pain, the anger, the regret, the memory, the guilt, the resolve, the hope, the love... a love that refuses to fade with time!!

And these words...so fitting!!😭

Slow regrets
That live in the dark
And I wrote them all down
But I know them by heart
I've counted the cost of this loneliness
And I've paid for the crime

And one day I'll die
With you in my mind

Originally posted by: multifaceted

Wow this update was fabulous..you are a fantastic writer...could feel and visualize arnav's anguish and pain..beautifully written..thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: sweetlove4barun

fantastic update

i so loved arnav's mixed feelings...

do cont soon

thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: ndevi

As usual a nice update but eagerly waiting for next part Khushi's entry...