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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#1061

hey im finally done with exams and i read the whole thin again and all the chaps in one go..

im on a reading spree..

i loved arnavs and sharmans interaction..

waiting for the next part...!!

and its almost 4.30 am ..

ill read the ss tomorrow..!!

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1062

really sorry for commenting late actually i have been out of town and m back now so getting back to unread pms!

loved all the last four updates!

amazing ff!

khusi's emotions were beautifully protrayed and nisha-sharman confrontation was much needed!

beautifully written!

thnx for the pm!

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#1063

I am missing YNTOO :(

no pressure :):) ok no i am kidding.. really no pressure..padhai karo!!

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1064

Wow. Rae this chapter was just something else. It was so great. How you described Nisha at first when she came down changing her saree, the confident one that didn't care about anyone. Then when she went into the party and saw Sharman there, no felt him first then saw him. It was so good. Your described the emotion perfectly. How Nisha who was calm, composed and collected before had the look of a broken girl who fell in love and moreover what was great was that Arnav recognised this and he knows how he feels. Now I can't wait to see how Nisha see's Arnav and Khushi's confrontation.

There was not even a hint of arrogance, a hint of the strong will that she brandished ever so willingly...she was...looking broken, lost, pained, hurt and in love.

loved this it shows so much about them two. But I wasn't surprised that Arnav did his research on Nisha and found out about Sharman. Sharman thinks that Nisha told him so when Nisha finds out about that somehow, she may just have a blow up with Arnav about it for checking her background. Would it be bad of me to say I'm looking forward to it already?

"Take care of it..."

These words were wow. He was holding the coat but was talking about her. He still has feelings for her you can tell. But what intrigues me is what had happened in the past that has caused them to behave like this.

18 years down the line and still she was crying, craving, wanting.

Nothing had changed.

This was another great few lines. How she stayed crying wanting to be in some one's arms but those arms were taken away from her. I hope that sometime soon Arnav and Nisha talk about their past relationships and how they feel about them because honestly I think they would understand each other a whole lot better and could possibly see what they have to do next to make it right. All in all a great chapter once again. Loved the Sharman and Nisha scene. Sorry for the late comment.

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1065

damn I don't know If i am going to survive this FF...

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1066

wow. Is all I can say to your writing style

But coming to the story.
Omg. Arnav n Khushi are divorced , he is getting married to someone else. But the seer tourcher n pain he is going thru ... Hope to see Khusi's pov n where she is? ummm I only read 3 chapter is there any mire updates that I had missed. If so can u plezzz send me the link. Or pm me your next update I would live to read it further.
First page said part 1-13. But I could only read up to part 3. Than it dosent go any further. Plz send me the link if there is any
Thaks a ton love

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1067

okay! sorries! really sorries 😕 its all my exam's faults, and my fault *Scrunches nose* I loved this update it in itself said so much about three of the main characters

Sharman - This man clearly feels guilty and still loves her he sounded so adorable too me when he was speaking to her. I loved his character here frankly speaking I loved the entire chapter, I loved how you conveyed all of their feelings within the chapter, it was b e a u t i f u l l y constructed and marvelously told! I loved it.

I loved it when Arnav made her go change, I loved it when Nisha fought back and loved it when they all met at the party! I loved it..there is no question <3

And the end - my heart went out for her! it was so sad, her whole life she has had to dance to someone elses commands..I feel for her 😆

also Khushi and Arnav are not going to meet till later later? 😕 are you trying to kill me? 😆 how late are we talking here? like married late? 😉 or sangeet late? 😉

-Aashifa

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Kiah

@kashforlifex

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1068

Just caught up with this and can I say it is beautiful! It's so heart-wrenching and so complex, I love it! I usually like happy, light-hearted stories but I thought let's try a dark and sad FF and it's beautifully painful. I love how you describe each character's complex life in so much detail, revealing information slowly using the flashbacks. I like Nisha, liked her from the first chapter :) I'd really like to know what happened between her and Armaan. And I'd like more of ArHi flashbacks and more about Khushi!

And obvs, Arnav is my favourite in this one :D