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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1041

So much of emotional baggage; its so painful to embark on a new relationship whilst the ties of the past one are still strong. Everyone is suffering so much. Glad that for once Arnav behaved in a sensitive and mature manner.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1042

Loved the part.. So Arnav and Sharman met.. Good going...

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1043

awesome update..
d story is getting me hooked now..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1044

thanks for the PM. Glad 2 of the characters met. I love the way you have described Nisha's Anguish and the crumbling of her hard exterior as soon as she met Sharman. Is a meeting of Arnav/Nisha with Kushi on the cards?

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#1045

Yet another beautiful chapter.

Loved the meeting between Sharman and Nisha. Loved how they both sensed each other's presence. Also how Arnav sensed something was wrong with Nisha.

The Martha part would be about her being sent of to boarding school, right?

And how she says, nothing had changed, and she was all alone like before, I really feel for her.

Hats off to you for giving so much depth, life to her character. Great job :)

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1046

It was just wonderful. I can't believe I am saying pain can be wonderful but once I read the last two chapter all I wanted was to read more.. just a bit more. The recollections and the consequences seemed very real. I am hoping Arnav and Nisha will empathise with each other and they'll get somewhere - the four of them. The conversation between Armaan and Nisha seemed like a painful symbolism. I don't know what I mean by that but it was worse than that between familiar strangers. I like Sharman and the way he said 'take care of it.' I am not liking Nani - she's being too aristocrat. Wonderful writing! 😊

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#1047

heya

interesting...

it was nice to see sharman...for some reason i have a liking towards him..he seems like a nice guy..

little flashback about their engagement was good..

will look forward for the next part..

thanks for the pm..:)

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Raj

@GillRK

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#1048

Wow just read all chapters together...wer do I start??? The emotions in this story are captured so well!!!! I love the two love stories and how you have captured all four emotions it's sooo emotional to read!!!! Feel for all four characters!!!! Thank you :)

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1049

Awwaa... Yet another heart wrenching update from you .So Nisha met Sharman and he saw her with her new fiance, hmmm... intersting .

I loved how like Ar-Hi , Ni-Sh can sense each others presence❤️ ❤️

Poor Nisha , it was really hard for her, suddenly meeting him like that 😒. Thank god Arnav didn't behave like a total jerk ,and agreed to take her home after seeing a un-shed tear in her eye .👍🏼 That was a nice gesture on Arnav's part .👏 👏

Arnav and Sharman meeting was short. but they established the roles they play in her life . 👍🏼

It was nice that Arnav saw how meeting Sharman has effected her , it might help him to see her, as a fellow human being , and not behave the way he had with her previously . eagerly waiting to read more .