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Posted: 13 years ago
Rae !!!
You are so great !! Inspite of the exam stress, you gave such an amazing update !! And dont blame me for the random way in which my comments gone, cause Im writing what comes to my mind after such a mind blowing update !! (Now Im even a fan of NiSh)

I was shocked !! So Arnav knows all about Nisha and Sharman, but Nisha knows just the outside story of Khushi-Arnav story !! And i didnt even know about the fact that Sharman and Nisha were married ?? They were married ?? And I am shocked ...shcoked betond belief !! And just when you were giving the description of Sharman and the dress incident where he shouts at Nisha... I could imagine once again how similar Arnav and Sharman are yet so different from each other, just like Nisha and Khushi !! its almost like a diff version of Arnav and Khushi's life !!

And I loved all the flashback you showed of Nisha-Sharman !! their reactions when they first see each other !! Nisha hoping... that maybe just maybe Sharman had sent those invitations hoping only for those small wings of hope being ripped of again , and that's when she realises that how much ever she wants him, she cant have Sharman !!

I dont know if you meant this to be symbolic or not, but clearly when Nisha was hurt, she went to Arnav.if not fully seeking his solace.She wont ever do that cause she's Nisha Oberoi after all.Maybe somewhere after more chapters when they know more about each other, Nisha and Arnav may just turn out to be amazing friends !! And Im so badly hoping for that. Cause their lives are similar tooo in a totally diffrent way !! I wonder if you're ever gonna somehow make Khushi and Sharman get related ... anyway...

I loved the update Rae !! And if you were too worried about this, Im telling you I loved this chapter to the core !! And Im just gonna wait for more !!

Love you🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
I know how difficult it must have been to introduce new characters and feature them prominently when we are all ArHi maniacs here. But Rae, you've done an awesome job of writing Nisha and Sharman. I feel for them. You've been peeling of layers of each character in every update. I'm beginning to relate to Nisha and Sharman as much as I do to Arnav and Khushi.

Now, this is the ASR I know, the one who knows all about everything. A background check is so him. And he actually recollected Sharman's name! So it was important enough for him to remember. And Khushi's effect in his life is slowly becoming visible. He's more attuned to other's (read Nisha's) needs now. At least slightly. And I dont grudge him for that. I like to see how things between him and Nisha develop. And Nisha. She is a very dynamic character for me. Her past, what she has become and where she is heading. Its all unraveling slowly. I'd like to see more of Sharman and Khushi. Reserving further judgement until later ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rae 🤗
I loved this chapter too.
Ooh la la Nisha must be looking hot in a black sari. I love her attitude towards arnav.
OMG!! Sharman was there. Damn!! I liked the chotu sa flashback. I'm always excited to read about NiSh love story since we have no idea about their past, it makes me curious to know about them.
What!! Arnav had investigated about Nisha's past. Unbelievable!! I wish he'd have investigated about Khushi & shyam too. *sigh*
I loved the convo b/w Nisha & sharman. At least he tried to talk to her. But in case of arhi nothing of that sort is happening. They are just living with memories.
For the first time in their lives Nisha & arnav talked decently to each other. And he agreed to go back? Don't tell me he's falling for her. I'm gonna kill you..seriously!!
Ahaan!! Arnav sharman face-off. Nice.
Awww..Nisha is so hurt. I feel bad for her. I want to know what happened b/w her & sharman in the past. *makes a stubborn face* 😆
Thank god arnav talked to her nicely in the car. I was least expecting that.
Overall..It was lovely.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
and the flashback was nice
do cont soon
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ooh how cruel you are, you are making me like every character!! I can't hate any of them. So I want everyone to be happy.

Can't figure out what went wrong in nisha's marriage for the life of me

And the fact that I ain't missing khushi just shows how brilliant this is!!

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
With every chapter I really really really want to know what went wrong with NiSh. Also, I love how they have Arhi's spidey senses with detecting each other's presence and the dhak dhaks. Poor Nisha had to brave the party but she couldn't. I liked how the ghost of Kushi's influence is still around Arnav cus he would have never been as nice at the end of the party if it weren't for her. I feel like the elders should have made the youngsters all stop nursing their egos and make their respective relationships work. But seeing as there a still a few missing pieces,. I won't judge them as harshly. Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
the thing i really liked about chp 8 was that akash sided with khushi and left his house for her👏 and i liked how u have made payal a more strong character... she is angry with arnav... wrong word.. abhors arnav for choosing to leave khushi and marry nisha.. i liked how u explained that... " please bhai"... phrase ⭐️ a gem of a sentence...it was so.. deep and meaningful... but the best... was akash's response to nisha...
why dont u live her with ur parents... because i dont agree with ur marriage.. 😎

chp 9- the first sign of a crack in the arnav- nisha relationship... and nisha in this ff is acting like a female asr 😆.. giving her work the utmost priority.. leaving all other relations aside.. yet she consoled hariprakash just like khushi does...

chp 10- that denial thing by khushi... 👏 👍🏼 the emoticons i am using here doesnt express how much i liked that part.. especially this sentence..
Denying that life had miseries scattered around, she had found a sense of joy in every little moment. 👏 khushi despite her loss still wanted akash to return to his house.. which is so understanding of her.. she still cares for the family that insulted her, didnt understand, listen, allow her to defend herself.. and the khushi arnav dance... i loved how u described it... 😍 his touch.. her response... his pain her patience to share it.. ❤️

thanks for the pms... i will respond to the others in due time.. 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Rae!

So I've Finally! (haha, get it !? God! I am bad at puns, lol!) read this FF. I am feeling so many emotions right now, I don't know how to disect them and write a comprehensible comment!

First of all, I want to congratulate you for creating such believable charcters as Nisha and Sharman. It is really hard to create new characters that are believable, you have gone a step ahead and made us sympathize with them! Nisha's character could have been hated by a lot of people if not done right. But you gave a strong background story and let us connect to her in a way, showed us that in this relation she is suffering as much, if not more, as Arnav. Because Arnav doesn't have to compromise much, but Nisha has to bend to shantivan's rules and Arnav's anger, and all the while live in Khushi's shadow, a woman she doesn't know much about, except that her fiance is still in love with her.

I don't understand Nani's bullheadedness about Khushi, but I think a strong opposition was necessary for Arnav, so that he could overcome it and be with Khushi at all cost. But Arnav crumbled under the pressure (holding off judgement on this!). I applaud Khushi for walking away because until Arnav realizes that Khushi means as much, or if not more, as his family, Khushi would never have the stability she deserves.

I don't know what Sharman had has done, or why Armaan and everyone hates Nisha so much, but I can see there is a lot of ways their story can go, and I can't wait to be a part of that journey!

My brain is kinda scrambled right now after reading that, and I don't know what I babbled about in the first 2 paragraphs, hopefully it makes sense!

PS: I miss my Ayaan, he is so much cuter, kinder, funnier, lovelier, and better at everything! Aynu, I miss you!😭 Come back soon! *puppy eyes* Please?
Edited by BlueMystique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow, so Arnav and Sharman finally meet! I don't expect any blazing exchange between the two for now, at least from Arnav's side as he is right now least bothered about anything else.
But what I particularly liked was that for the first time Arnav was receptive to Nisha's feelings and this was because he could relate to the beautiful emotion of lost love. He caught it instantly in her eyes maybe because it is forever present in his eyes too. Sigh!
I am liking NiSh so far😊
Good one👍🏼
Posted: 13 years ago
Just caught up. Gosh this is really intriguing...i'm loving it. I really wonder why nani dislikes Khushi so much?? can't wait to know. I loved the phone convo between Payal and Khushi and i loved the part where u wrote how she denies everything. Also the part where Nisha wears that saree similar to what Khushi had once worn and Arnav's reaction and emotions was brilliant. Loved it and the latest chapter was fab. Arnav was considerate to Nisha's tears. Brill update! Continue soon Rae x

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