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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story..loved it..uodt soon
Edited by tina_1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
baap re...

i'm so super confused...
i read all the parts in 1 go...
then also i was wondering ho kya raha hai...??

but i must say you write beautifully...
different different...

but this story is seriously very complicated...

i hope i will get something after you update few parts...
hehehe...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: april2003

OMG she's doing the same thing Arnav does in regards to Khushi. They are both drowning in their sorrows. Will they ever get pass this? One thing I can say is that Arnav now understand what she's going through but he's unable to comfort her as he need comforting himself but not from her. She also need comforting but not from Arnav. I'm wondering now if they will come to an impasse. I figure that Arnav now know that Sharman still loves Nisha, and so does she. As to whether he will help them I am uncertain. The only solution right is for NiAr to get their family to see sense out of this whole situation. I wish Khushi or Sharman will come back and demand their love be returned to them. I really feel bad for Nisha. The situation her and Arnav are in is wasting away at the best years of their lives. They know who their soul-mates are but can't or refuse to be with them. What is life without, love and happiness? Why live a life of compromise? Can they find love with each other? They are both lying to themselves. LOVED the update😃


"One look at you and I'd break right down and cry
Now you say that you made a big mistake
Never meant to take your love away
But you can save your tired apologies
'Cause it may seem hard to believe, but
I'm doin' just fine
Getting along very well
Without you in my life
I don't need you in my life
I'm doin' just fine
Time made me stronger
You're no longer on my mind (Who am I kidding?)"


The lyrics descrbe Nisha perfectly...and what you are saying is correct but people in love arent really known to be rational are they? :)

And here there is love and heartbreak...inn sabki toh band baji hui hai. :p

And Arnav...he is always understanding but does he always act on it?

Thank You for the wonderful comment! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Why unsure Rae...the chapter was splendid...enough interaction between Arnav and Sharman to know that they both recognize and acknowledge their respective presence in Nisha's life...one past, and one in the present. Glad that Arnav saw Nish in a vulnerable moment too...perhaps this will HUMANIFY her in his eyes, rather than just thinking her as a means to an end!!

I loved the read!!😛


Lets hope so...Arnav understands everything but seldom acts on it...and yes, he knew about Sharman but now he KNOWS about Sharman... :)

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

Res. Just read it. Will comment in about a couple of hours. Gist _ AWESOME :D


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I knew it. Nisha is an awesome character. Take a bow, Rae. So many layers. I loved the transition from the i-don't-care-about-the-Raizadas attitude to the he-is-here-and-I-don't-know-how-to-handle-it attitude to the I-want-to-leave-and-I-cannot-hide-my-hurt-any-longer one! And then back to being cold again *Bows* Nisha is one tough ass to write! Lol! Not just because she has layers (cos I hope all my characters do) but because she is my own character and one who has been in my mind for a long time...Sharman too but I am partial towards Nisha so I am glad you liked it. I wanted to portray the exact chain you stated. :)

This is a great character and completely yours :) You should be proud. Awww! Thanks! :)

Poor little 10 year old being sent off to boarding school :( (Although I know that boarding school is not half as bad as children initially think it is :P) I am sure it isnt but there is more here...as shall be revealed as we go along...

Sharman? I will still reserve my judgement on him. I don't know enough. Okay. :p :D

Arnav - no comments on him this time (my heart breaks!) because this was for Nisha. LOL! Yep, it was. :p

Brilliant writing! Thank You! :) Coming from you, it means a lot. :)

PS: Can I please go shopping with you next time? I love your selection and description of saris and suits! (of course I hate shopping and hence my taste is nothing to write about!) LOL! I google and I am vella. :p



Originally posted by: meera30

Wait a second. You were doubtful about this chapter?


Why?

You don't need to be doubtful about this story in any way.

It is brilliant! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This story confuses me. :p I have stuff planned out in my head and they it goes all 'Hain?' when I start to write it besides this isnt your normal ArHi fic and I guess that makes me grapple with how I want to write it and how my readers want it. :p

I know I know...get out of it, I am trying. :p




Thank You so much, Meera! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tata_tata

Hey AT.. that was an amazing episode (i tend to think your chapters like episodes.. they are so well written, its almost as if i am seeing them:)) Awww! Thats so sweet! :)


i get what you are trying to do.. you are writing with such passion about NiSh so that we alll start loving them as much as you do, right?? well.. you are really getting there.. in this chapter, i really felt for poor Nisha... i really did.. i mean to have to deal with You caught me. ;) :D
- an idiot of a new fiance, who insists on being in thoughts of his ex-wife alll the time.. (ok sorry.. i do still love Arnav :)) Trust me I am glad you feel this way about him. :p
He isnt perfect just like the rest arent. His mistakes cannot be overlooked even if they are not against Khushi.
- take care of old grandparents' expectations
- live with the shadow of a father, who clearly has done a lot wrong back then..
- to top it all, having to lose someone you clearly loved sooo dearly..

sigh!!

I have made Nisha pretty sad, havent I? *feels bad*

but this Sherman guy.. quickly give us a preview into why is he the way he is.. as of now.. i dont like him.. he seems veryyy... spineless... is that the word i want to use.. i dont know.. something is amiss.. he is not taking a hard stand on anything.. being as feeble as he is.. comes across as spineless.. do something.. redeem him.. show us what made him what he is.. Hold on to this. Thats all I am saying.

but most importantly.. where is my Khushiii.. atleast bring her to the same circles as these 3.. why should she lose out on all the confrontational... tear inducing fun.. :D sadist i have become!! LOL! Khushi is going to be away from the madness...till when? *whistles*

anyways.. great chapter.. why were you doubtful about this chapter again??? Thank You! :)

Please read reply to Meera for that. Right above this post. :p


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
update kare gi ya main atma hatte ya kara?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup

update kare gi ya main atma hatte ya kara?


I can honestly say I did not understand a word of the last bit! LOL!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen


I can honestly say I did not understand a word of the last bit! LOL!



Should I commit suicide if you don't update? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup



Should I commit suicide if you don't update? 😆


Achcha! Atmahatya. Yeh bol na! Lol!

And suicide matt kar yaar...I will try and update soon but no promises...havent really written anything but there may be some other surprise for you... ;) :D

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