ArHi FF:A Fate Intertwined Th2: Ch 17-20, Epilogue

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casker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

beautiful but sad it ended😭

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Loved the epilogue and left me wishing that the story had not ended but what a wonderful enjoyable and engaging ride! And one big compliment - you managed to get across the intensity of their feelings and passion for each other without explicitly detailing their sexual intimacy. Not that I have anthing against sexually expicit content provided its well written and gells with the story - but you managed to create that passion any which way, it left me with a wonderful warm feeling - so kudos!

As for Arnav and Khushi not being who they are in the show - yes and no. But I think thats the challenge and the exciting part of reading fan fics - to see how much more can you create and weave with the same characters , tweaking their characterisations a wee bit to make an intersting read. It didn't jar for me at least! I didn't once think about that!

Hope to read something else written by you soon!

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SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

I loved it! :'D

It's bitter sweet,it is.On one hand I'll never be able to read another chapter again but on the other It was beautiful! And it all ended perfectly :'D :3

Thank you so much for this story!

And yes ,thanks for the PM! :)

Will miss this FF though I am quite new to it and just caught up a few days back.

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Really enjoyed reading this ff, it was simple yet realistic but expressed in such a beauutiful way.

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smile1412

@smile1412

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Meera...The story was just as how Arnav in the show described khushi in his inebriated state...beeeaaauuutiful!!!! Iam bowled over by your writing skills!

Am sure forum wasis agree with me that we all enjoyed reading this version of the story as much as you did writing it... Some of us so obsessed as to read it over again n again!!!!!

Pls keep up this amazing talent!!! And yes , we are looking forward to the prequel and sequel !!!!

Cheers!

Sujatha

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Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Nice ending.
It's a pleasure 2 read ur stories.
Write more stories...

Thanks 4 d pm

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Neha

@melovemayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Awsome Epilogue!! I love happily ever afters!! You c,we dnt get it often!!

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

👏👏👏And so we come to the end...I enjoyed the light hearted journey Meera...

thanx for the regular pms even tho I am not a regular commnetor...but I did seek out and read...even looked forward to the next...this would be a story that fall in the line of predictable...but still there is a call to read it in the writers words...and I think you penmanship is that the lullaby like voice of the narrator...Thank YOu...and plz if you have something new come up keep me posted...

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Saadia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

awesome end to a beautiful story
just loved it
looking forward to read more beautiful works

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nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#380

Aww, can't believe this story has ended. I looked forward to the update so much around lunch time. :(

But great, great ending. Sweet just like the rest of the story. :)
Aditi's dialogue about ASR's proposal was hilarious. And glas that you gave Anjali some peace. She deserved it.

Great story! Please keep writing. You are amazing! :D