maneet new ff...CRAZY IN LOVE/THREAD 2 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

607

Views

258.1k

Users

78

Likes

3.8k

Frequent Posters

rubykatariya thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Part 2

Hi guys thank u so much for ur comments and like.. so here is next part for u all...

At Khurana Mansion


After college maan reach home to see his dadu in living room instructing all servents to do work properly...

Dadu - ye kya hain kal mera yaar 16 saalo baad wapas aaraha hain aur abhi tak tayariya puri nahi hui...

The whole khurana mansion is all ready for welcoming of Handa's but dadu...

Maan rolled his eyes and went to his dadu indeed he is also very excited to but right now dadu and his BP is maan's first priority so he went to his dadu and...

Maan- ye kya hain dadu aap itna tension kyu le rahe hain sab ho gaya hain aur jo nahi hua wo mein dekhlonga aap relex kijiye...

Dadu (after sitting in sofa in living room) - o puttar ji ye tension nahi ye to meri khushi hain kal 16 saalo baad mera yaar aaraha hain aapne parivar k sath...

After hearing family name maan's heart skept a beat aur kyu na ho geetu jo aarahi hain...

Dadu - (seeing maan in his own world ) - maan puttar kaha kho gaya agar geet k aane ki khabar se tera ye hal hain to uske aane k baad kya hoga.

Maan blush and dadu laugh,dadi come there from kitchen...

Dadi - are kya baatein horahi hain dada pote mein hume bhi batayie, kyu ji aapne aisa kya keh diya jo maan sharama gaye...

Maan - dadi mein aapne room mein ja raha hu and run from there

Dadi - are ye maan ko kya hua???????????

Dadu - kuch nahi savitriji ye humare dadu patte ke beech ki baat hain...

Dadi - aapbhi na maan k sath usi ki umar k hojate hain...

Dadu - to is mein galat kya hain wo mera friend hain...😉

In maan's room

Maan pacing here and there...

Maan (st) - kal geetu aarahi hain yepiii i m so excited i want to give her a surprise but kya do???????????? Flower's na chocolates na ye mera dimag kaam kyu nahi kar raha😔 ... idea mom se puchta hu and went to his mom...

Mom dad's room

Dad is on call and mom is in front of mirror arranging stuff maan come there knock the door..

Maan - mom then he notice his dad (maan's st ' dad yaha hain agar inke samne kuch bola to he is tease me like hell now what can i do????????)

Mom - are aayiye na maan bete kab aaye aap college se???????????

Maan - bas abhi mom , mom wo i ... hann ...mujhe ... na hann meri shirt nahi mil rahi plz aap dekh dengi?????

Dad see him suspiciously and mom confused😕 (what happen maan all of sudden a person who never let anyone come in his room not even his mom aur dadi he is asking help from his mom???????)

Dad - maan bte aap tik hain na???????? Aap aapki mom ko aapke room mein bola rahe hain?????

Maan - hann dad i m ok wo bas mujhe shirt nahi mil rahi isliye... all the while he is looking down...

Dad - hmm r u sure bte koi aur baat nahi hain???

Maan - yes aur kya baat hogi??????????????

Mom still confused what the hell is going on between this two?????????????😕

Dad - kahi aap geet k liye koi surprise to plan nahi karna chate aur aapko aapki mom ki help chayiye aisa to nahi hain na???????????? (me claver dad hmm nad poor maan fas gaya)

Maan - nahi wo dad...hann wo ... mom cut him between...

Mom - Sanjay aap kyu mere bache ko pareshan kar rahe ho khud to kabhi kuch karte nahi mere liye aur aap jab maan meri bahu k liye kuch karna chata hain to use bhi sata rahe ho...😡

Maan (st) ' thank u so much mom bacha liya warna dad ne to pura plan kar liya tha mera surprise jaane ka ...his thought disturb by his dad voice..

Dad - are meine kya kiya sona (maan's dad call his wife sona)

Mom - rehne dijiye chalyie maan hum chalet hain aapke sath... maan and his mom went away leave he dad...

In Mumbai Handa mansion

Geet and whole family busy in last min packing

Darji - rano puttar saari tayariya ho gayina...

Rano - ji darji sab kuch ho gaya

Papaji - geet puttar aapne aapne saare documents college se collect kar liye na ab aapko dehli mein hi aage ki study complete karna hain kuch reh to nahi gaya na?????

Geet slightly blush with Delhi's naam

Geet - ji papaji meine sab le liya...

Suddenly a creature come running words geet and geet also run towards him and hug him and kiss him and ruffle his hair...

Geet - so Mr. Love fursat mil gayi aapko aapki new girlfriend se...

All family members rolled their eyes by geet's behaviour...

In Maan's room

Maan - wo mom mein kal geet ko kuch surprise dena chata hua aur mujhe koi idea nahi aaraha plz help me na...

Mom - ...

Next ' Maan's surprise and Mr.Love????????????

Thank u so much for ur likes and comments


Plz ignore grammar mistakes



Valli di special thanks to u...




Edited by rubykatariya - 13 years ago
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Beautiful update..
Maan's dad s so clever..
Nw who s Mr.Love????
tamanna1391 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#33
it waiting for mr love mystry to open



awesomepooja thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Awesome update...
I guess mr.love is pet.
preeti.1 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Qawesome plz add me in ur pm list
vrinda22 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago
#36
baar baar muje thank you kehna bandh karo..warna...

coming to the part..awesome..





u r so fast..


maan n geet



16anyaa.gurti thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Great update. Nd thnx 4 PM😃.Waiting eagarly to knw who is Mr. love????????Update soon
-LUV Anyaa😳.
fatema_007 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Maan is shooo cute..hayeee 😍
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#39
part 2
lovely part...
is Mr. Love Geet's doggy?
cont soon dear...
princes939 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Awsome!!!!!!
Im 100% sure dat Mr.lover vill b som dog or som puppy!!!!
Waiting 4 maaneet 2 meet...!!!
Hope geet maan ke saat bhe wahi kere joh Mr.lover se mil kr kiya...wink*wink*
akhar us ki wife jo ha!!!!!!lol
Eagerly waiting 4 next!!!!!!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

2 months ago

new morning, new day.

new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Raina,Ragsan and Vikresha ff - My love is only for u

Let's me introduced the Characters Ritik Raheja (Arjun Bijlani) : A very rich business tycoon and elder brother of Ranveer and Ragini Ranveer

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".