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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it add me and send pm also plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Da concept seems very interesting...
Could u plz pm this 2 me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u so much friends for like the concept and appreciate me... i try to not disappoint u all...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 1

After 16 years...(from that incidence)

A well build handsome on his latest sports bike came to Delhi University who is non other then MAAN SINGH KHURANA . Heart of every girl stop biting for a sec when he park his bike and let down from bike take out his goggles and turn to see his friends his eye full of passion his M shape lips his killing looks his care a dam attitude towards the girls who are dyeing for his one look . He walk to his friends in full attitude.

MAAN's Friends

(Dev, Adi , Karan, Sam , and Pinki , they all are friend from childhood. Twist is dev love's sam but he had no courage to confess it and same with adi who is in love with pinki . karan a cool dude type personality but always respect girls he has many girl friend but in limits. Maan's all friends belong to respected families of Delhi)

Dev - kya yaar when ever u came college every girl only see u not single girl is there who were not drool u

Maan smirk on his statement...

Karan - true dev can u believe even my girlfriend is drooling over him when he comes...

Adi - karan y u afrid from our maan is already booked and he is very loyal towards his LADYLOVE

After hearing adi's statement maan's lips have a beautiful smile...

MAAN - (try to change topic) guys don't we have any class today and where is sam and pinki and after hearing name of sam and pinki its dev and adi's turn to smile

Dev - here they are...😊

Sam - hi guys!!!!!!!!!!! What happen why u all smiling something interesting going on????????

Dev - no sam nothing let's go we are late for classes... (murmured bach gaya) they all went for their classes...

Mumbai HANDA MANSION

An angel is sitting in window edge and singing a song which is her hobby but nobody knows about it except one person he is the only one lucky person in whole world who can hear this melodious song . And thinking about past when she is 8 year old...

"All family members are shocked by Maan's action. They all back to their senses after hearing Maan's word...

Maan - bolo na dadu ab to humari shadi hogayi na ab to Geetu yaha reh sakti hain na .😒

Dadi - maan bte ye aapne kya kiya??????????????? 😲

Mom - maan bte aapko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...(me think mom u ask only na? what maan see in tv then???😕)

Geet - mom aap sab Maan ko kyu data rahe ho plz use mat daato na (she is our sweet caring geet she can't stand a word against his maan )

Beeji - geet bte aap jayiye aur face wash kariye aur rano aap geet ko lekar jaiye...

Rano drag geet from there to her room to clean her face... dad mom and papaji also went with her now only dadu dadi darji and beeji is with maan to make him understand...

Maan - nahi geet kahi nahi jayegi ab wo meri wife hain. (with angry face.)

Dadu - dekho maan abhi aap chote ho aur shadi to bade log karte hain na...

Maan - par dadu aapne hi to kaha tha ki geetu meri hain to wo Mumbai kyu ja rahi hain please use rok lo na mein promise good boy banoga kabhi masti nahi karonga...😒

Dadi - maan bte geet k mummji, papaji darji aur beeji sabhi Mumbai ja rahe hain na to geet ko bhi jaana hoga na socho agar humne geet ko yaha rakha aur agar geet ko un sabki yaad aayi aur wo cry karne kagi to kya aapko aacha lagega nahi na isliye bte aap geet ko jaane dijiye...

Maan - par meine to use shadi karli na ... to ab😕

Darji - maan puttar geet to humesha aap hi ki rahegi hum aapse wada karte hain ki jab aap bade ho jaoge aur aapne dadu aur dad ki tarah business sambhale lagoge hum aap dono ki shadi kar denge...

Maan - tab fir geetu humesha k liye mere sath reh sakti hain...

Beeji - ji puttar ji fir aap dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta...

Maan - tik hain...

After hearing this news geet become sad and after that she never talk with maan in last 16years... maan try alot to monafying his geetu but all in drain through they both call each other but never speaks only there heart who talk with each others... they send messages mails but all blank like they never need any word between them...so true true love never need words their feeling is more than enough ...

Geet come back to present when her mummji call's her

Rano - geet puttar breakfast k liye aaj ja sab tera intejar kar rahe hain...

Geet come running down from stairs and hugs her darji and beeji (ya she is the princess of HANDA MANSION)

Geet - good morning darji...😃

Darji - good morning puttar ji

Beeji - gudiya aaj aap apni beeji ko good morning nahi bolenge...

Geet - beeji aisa kaise ho sakta hain good morning...

Papaji - geet puttar hum bhi yahi hain...

Geet - good morning papaji how can i forget you????????

Papaji - (very lovingly put hand palm on geet's head) - humesha khush rahiye bacha duniya ki saari khushiya aapko mile...

Mummyji - geet puttar kitni baar tujhse kaha stairs pe mat bhaga kar gir jayegi...

All family member with geet giggle on rano's statement... because this is routine of rano to scold geet every morning...

Geet - kya mummyji roj same dialogue why don't u try some new dialogue....

Mummyji - chup badmaash mera majak banati hain chal breakfast karle aur hain where is ur Mr. Love... subah se dekhai nahi diya??????????????

Geet - mummyji he is busy in flirting with his new girlfriend...

They all went for breakfast. At dining table...

Darji - raj puttar dehli ki tickets book ho gayi ya nahi?????????????

Papaji (raj) - ji darji saari tayariya ho gayi kal subah ki flight hain 11 baje ki...

Beeji - chalo aacha hain hum sab wapas delhi ja rahe hain aapne ghar aapno ke pass..

Darji - kyu nahi simran ji aap to badi betab hain aapni friend se milne k liye...

Beeji - jaise aap nahi hain yash bhaisahab se milne k liye...

In between this whole conversation geet slightly smile with blush she only know how she live without his love in last 16 years she is very excited to go dehli...

In dehli University canteen

Maan and gang is sitting their and talking, leg pulling each other...

Karan - kyu dev do u watch or read a slient love story??????????? Maan chocked his food because he knew now his is the target and all giggle...

Maan - karannn😡

Dev - (by defending karan and innocently) - kya hua maan tum karan ko aisa kyu bol rahe ho is he say something stupid???????????

Maan - dev if ur not going to stop now then don't regret it letter (by now dev seal his lips because he knows maan can do anything)

Sam - true maan how can u love someone like this madly yaar u both doesn't talk even for once fir bhi love each other like crazy how's it possible...

Adi - no one can believe that our Mr. MSK is in love from last 16 years...

Maan - correction adi not from last 16 years but the day i born...

Pinki - ya ya how can we forget that...

Union - U BOTH BORN AT SAME DAY SAME TIME SAME PLACE...

Maan just smile on there statement...

Maan - guys we both talk for hours and u all know that...

Pinki - ya ya when ever ur both r talking u both went on silent mode and only smile...

Maan - Guys u know i love her from the time we both born and there is no needs of word between us. Mein uske dil k har ehsaas har jasbat ko bina use kahe hi samjh jata hu fir words ki kya jarurat hain , wo meri atma mein basti hain uski har dhakan mere dil mein dhadkti hain uski saaso ki khushboo ko mein aapni saaso mein mehsoos kar sakta hu to fir humare beech shabdo ki jagah kaha bachi...

All friends are amazed to see the craziness of his love indeed he is

CRAZY IN LOVE...

NEXT - introducing Mr.LOVE...😊

Thank you so much guys for ur comment and likes

It encourage me alot and my special thanks to Valli di she help me alot...love u di

Sorry for mistakes...😃

Edited by rubykatariya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update... intro me juda hue aur aab mil rhe h... gr8...thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely concept silent love story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum start luv it keep going like dis luv dare crazy luv 2 d core .n plz not dis I DON'T WANT:- MU bet dem, no other girl or boy in dare life, No ladie zagada.N I WANT:-dare cute nok-jok,rutana manana, hot hot romance, n finally crazyness in luv.n plz clear age problem i dont understand it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow they r soo crazily in love with each other...
Loved it
continue soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gr8 start...sent u request do add me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha.sinari

Awesum start luv it keep going like dis luv dare crazy luv 2 d core .n plz not dis I DON'T WANT:- MU bet dem, no other girl or boy in dare life, No ladie zagada.N I WANT:-dare cute nok-jok,rutana manana, hot hot romance, n finally crazyness in luv.n plz clear age problem i dont understand it.




hi dear !!!!!!!!! ur wish my command 😆 ok age problem intro incident is held when they both are 8 years old... and now after 16 years from the incident so today they both are 24 year old ... clear now??
and yaa their is some one is geet's life oopsss 😆
Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago

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