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Posted: 13 years ago


PART 14


Hi friends here is most awaited part i try to give

my best but i think there is something missing and

i didn't get it...


In canteen all having their lunch giggling

laughing enjoy typical college canteen

environment... geet is as usual lost in

maan's eyes... but today our maan babu take

oath that he will make geet talk with him by

hook or crook...


Suddenly maan got an idea and whisper

something in karan's ear... and karan smirk

as well maan.. all knows that these two are

plan something and geet get scared seeing

maan's smirking.. she knows that now she is

in big trouble...


Both maan and karan went from their leaving

all confused and shocked... now there is

hastle bastle that maan is in college stage

and he is going to announcement

something... all rush to auditorium included

geet and rest of the gang members...


In auditorium karan request all to be sited ,

all take their sits... whole hall is fill within

no time as Mr.Hottie is going to announce

something who were going to miss it...


All lights went off , a spot light on maan

who is standing in mid of the stage with

guitar in his hand and mic in his front...



Maan - hi friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Whole hall fill with gasp sound... geet who

is sitting with other friends(geet sam dev

pinki and adi) in mid row in far most corner

shook her head on this girls...


Maan - ye to aap sab jante hain ki mein kisi

ladki se deewano ki tarah pyar karta hu...

(all girls make ohhh disappointment

sound) par wo ladki mujhse naraj hain , u to

chatter box ki tarah bolti hain par mujhse

baat nahi karti , janta hu mein wo bhi

mujhse utna hi pyar karti hain jitna ki mein

use ya use kahi jayada par ye baat uski juba

par aati hi nahi (now he looks in geet eyes)

aaj mein tuhme majboor kar dunga mujhse

baat karne pe... guys aaj mein aap sab ko

us ladki se milwaoga jo meri zindagi hain jo

mere dil meri atma aur mere wajood se Jodi

hain , aur aaj wo khud yaha aakar is mere

pyar ko meri deewangi ko sahi sabit kar

degi...



Geet is so lost in his each word like his each

word is witness of his love , geet janti hain

maan ki deewangi ko , jis pyar ne use aapne

aapse dur na jaane dene k liye 8 years ki

umar mein aapna bana liya us par wo kaise

shak kar sakti hain kaise us pyar ko jhukane

de sakti hain she know aaj us aapne maan k

liye aapne pyar k liye maan ka sath dena

hoga...




Maan close his eyes and his figure start

playing with guitar string..



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2HYFTGrdsM[YOUTUBE]


(for real feel play it)


Music...

huuu huh u hhmmm



Geet get up from her sit and start singing..



thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai bakee - (4)


maan open his eyes and look geet with all his love

he know his geet never let him down...

whole hall fill with applause...

maan is in cloud 9 look's geet singing for him...



ham toh dil de hee chuke -2 bas teree han hai bakee

thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai bakee - (2)



geet start coming to stage maan give

his hand to her for support both were looking each other

eyes.. she sing last line with naughty grin in her eyes..

maan shook his head in her craziness...



music...

all old memory of their childhood start

running their mind...

when she remember their marriage she sings


kaun sa mod aaya jindagee ke safar me

bas gaya too hee too abb toh meree najar me


now maan sing making all shock and

openly declare her as he only belongs to her..


dil kee har ek dhadkan tujhko pehchanti hai

meree chahat hai abb kya too nahee janti hai



geet nodded in yes and reply him but add in

second last line her bubbliness

mai tuhje jan gai tujhko pehchan gai

phir bhee teree han hai bakee

thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai bakee - (2)


music...

maan peck on her forehead and hugs her both lost in


each other eyes.. then geet sing


aaj yeh kya hua hai dil nahee meraa bas me

iss liye sochti hu tod du saree rasme


maan grin in her word and sing


umrr bhar ke liye too aa meraa sath de de



teraa ho jaonga mai haatho me hath de de


now geet become full naughty ,



maan hold her from her waist and she sing


haatho me hath sahee too mere sath hee sahee

phir bhee teree han hai bakee


thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai bakee - (3)


maan give her fake angry look and turn to


face her his back geet hug him from back... and


finish the song then maan sing last line...



thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai - geet



thoda sa pyar hua hai, thoda hai - maan...


after finishing song both hug and

whole hall fill with

applause why not they were maaneet yaar...

after that

maan take mic in one hand and other hand on geet's

waist...


maan - aaj mein aap sab ko

aapni jaan se milwana chata hu...



geet blush hearing jaan and look toward

maan who only looking her


maan - ye geet hain maan ki geet ,

jisko maan deewano ki tarah mohabbat karta hain ,

jiski ibadat karta hain ,

jis ka pyar maan ke saaso ki wajah hain...

aur yahi wo ladki hain jiske alawa maan ko kuch aur najar hi nahi aata

... geet eyes get teary seeing his love ,

geet janti hain ki maan use bahut pyar karta hain

par aaj sab k samne ikrar karke geet ke pyar ko ibadat

bana diya...



whole crowd start whistling and hooting...

maan start to leave but suddenly geet hold his wrist

and maan turn to look her ...


maan - kya hua geet??????????????


Geet hug him tightly in front of whole college...


Geet - i m sorry maan , meine aapko bahut tadapaya

na....


But maan put his palm on her mouth and

nod her no


Maan - geet maan ki zindagi to sirf geet ki hain to sirf

geet ko haq hain wo maan k sath kuch bhi kar sakti

hain.. geet ka har shabd maan k liye hukum hain

geet maan ka bhagwan hain isliye bhagwan mafi nahi

magte geet...



Geet overwhelm with his love,


Geet - maan aap mere liye mere babaji ka dusara

naam hain aur meine aapko aapne aapse alag karke

aapko dukhi kiya hain

(with baby face) aap jo chahe mujhe saja dedo...

mein aapki har saja ko maan lungi..



Maan - (knows its getting too emotional and this place is not

safe as whole college is watching them so try to lighten her mood)

geet yaar tum kitna bolti ho ya to bologi nahi aur

agar bologi to chup nahi hogi

tumhare throat mein koi problem hain kya???????????


Geet get into sherni mode listening to maan and

make o shape mouth and start hit him with

her tiny fist...

Maan - oochh geet kya kar rahi ho...


Geet - kya kaha mein bahut bolti hu aur kya naam

diya hua hain mujhe hann chatter box ruko

abhi batati hu tumhe...




Maan run for his life and geet run behind him and

their laugh seeing their Tom and Jerry fight

except one person who haveing tears in her

eyes looking maaneet as

her heart break into millions of pieces...



NEXT - tom and jerry fight...and imp saja😆


As u all want maaneet conversation ,
so here it is..Chalo chalo give me good good comments...
I m waiting for ur comments...
Edited by rubykatariya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
M FIRST AGAIN YIPEEE
AWESOME N HOPE U READ MY MSG N U WILL ACCEPT MY REQUEST
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woww amazing part
loved it
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome baat start talking to ech other
nd
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 13
oh both in same class...
cute part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it finally geet spoke whose heart broken
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
lovely...
that song i have always liked and loved from KTH days...
who is that person sad?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
totally awesome
maan made geet to sing before college
n both proved their love..
she talked to him n apologized also..
this song is my favourite..
kashish s best bgm too..

Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part..
i think that s meera...

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