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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved all the updates !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome n thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
ruby... 😡
kya yaar.. mr. love beech main aagaya... huh!!!
hehehe me besharam... 😆
ok coming to the update...
its awesome... wonderful...
loved it very mcuh...
oh geet went to maan;s room.. and maan acting like he is asleep.
loved their moment...
yaar their family is so nice... loved theit teasing session...
continue soon dear...
eagerly waiting... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
lovely part...
Mr Love is a haddi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum...
Mr.love was huge haddi ;-)
when will they talk dear?
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 13

In college

Geet come to her new friends (maan's gang) , they were present in the corridor and chatting...

Geet – (with her full bubblyness) hi guys!!!!!!!!!!! What's going on?????????

All turn to geet , greet her...

Karana – (dramatically) hi princess how are you today????????

All shook their heads on karan's drama except geet.. geet confuse with his behaviour , all look her confusing face and understand her turmoil , so adi say

Adi – don't get confuse geet he is biggest nautanki in our gang.. so plz don't mind him...

Geet – its ok adi..

Pinki – waise geet to aagyi ye maan kaha reh gaya ??????????

Dev (teasingly) - oho pinki if geet is here so its is obvious na maan is here some where.. geet blush with maan's name.. and all start doing ohooo ahaaa..

Geet – stop it guys...

Sam – see guys ye dono to dialogue bhi ek jaise bolte hain...

Geet – matlab???????????

All start giggling on her innocent question... geet get embraced , but sam save her from more teaseing session

Sam – leave her guys.. geet u say where is maan?????????? Abhi tak aaya nahi kya???????

Geet – wo unko office jaana pada kuch important kaam aagaya tha...

Karam – koi na tum sab dekhna maan kaise aapna kaam finish karke college aata hain waise bhi ab to he never miss his classes aakhir geet joy aha hain..

Geet cheeks get pink..try to change the topic..

Geet – chale class k liye late horaha hain.. all leave for class..

In class geet come with other and saw meera and went to her

Geet – hi meera!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meera – hi geet!!!!!!!!!! Welcome to our class...

Geet – thanks meera... meera look to others with geet and smile on them... in mean time professor come and lecture start..

Geet didn't concentrate in class as her whole mind is with maan only she is sitting with sam and cribbing..

Geet (cribbing) – maan aap na sach mein dust danav hain aaj mera first day hain is college mein aur aap office chale gaye... u should be here with me. Aise to bada attitude dekhayenge ki geet i m always with u like shadow , sab jhoot hain... i m know koi fikar nahi hain unko meri... babaji dekhna aapne kaisa karte hain wo mere sath...

Sam start giggling mutely listen geet's complaints... geet look her and bit her tongue and give her weak smile...

Sam whisper geet – don't worry geet maan bas aata hi hoga i m sure wo bhi tum se jayada time dur nahi reh payega...

Maan enter in college and in class geet close her eyes and whisper ''maan''... sam heard it and ask her

Sam – geet tum ne maan kyu kaha???????????

Geet - wo sam maan aagaye...and again concentrate on her notes

Sam – how do u know????????? And sam looks out of the window and saw maan is coming... but sam know from geet's sit she cant look out side... sam awe to see their crazy love.. dev who is sitting behind shook sam shoulder to ask her what happen ... she shook her head in no... when first lecture finished professor leave maan come inside the class and silently ask sam to move from her sit.. and sit besides geet...

Whole class get heart attack seeing maan sit with a girl ,a man who care a dam about girls except sam and pinki as both are his childhood friend , all girls cribbing for geet, as they try from years for Mr.Hot's one look and here in one day maan is sitting next to her and more up on she doesn't even notice his presence..

Geet is so lost in her notes she missed when maan come in the class and sit beside her...(geet didnt notice maan because she is only lost in his thought and study so when he come she think she is assuming him)... next professor come , then geet look up and get started to see maan is sitting next to her... she looks down and her cheeks become cheery , professor is teaching but our love birds are too lost in each other and talking silently


Geet(pout her lips) – so ab aayi hain meri yaad itna late koi karta hain kya??????

Maan(cutely) – geetu office mein kaam tha na...

Geet - Par mein aapka kabse wait kar rahi thi na...

Maan (baby face) –sorry

How can someone resist such a cute face , geet melted seeing his cute baby face and blink her eyes as she say ''its ok''

Maan grin and geet looks toward the board , maan become naughty and hold geet hand under the table , geet get conscious and looks to maan and plead him to leave her hand through eyes..

Maan shook his head in no... maan's gang giggle mutely seeing that two romancing in class, geet blush as they caught red handed and give maan a fake angry look but maan nowhere to listen her... she try to come out of his hold but with each try his grip become more tight... maan knows if he see her baby face then he melted so he start looking toward board , with serious face as nothing is happen.. at last geet let go her try as she know maan is not going to leave her hand...

After lecture ends... its break time when professor leaveand allstudent with then now only maan's gang and maaneet in class all burst in to laughter...

Adi -maan ab to geet ka hath chod do... wo kahi nahi ja rahi tumhe chod kar...

Maan – (looking directly in geet's eyes) iska kya barosa pata nahi kis baat par gussa aajaye ya fir Sharma jaye aur chali jaye...

Geet flush with his statement and looks down...

Karan – maan yaar kuch to mercy dikhao geet par look wo kaise sharama rahi hain...

Maan hugs geet from back and rest his chin on her shoulder in front of all and say..geet eyes widen in shock and she only feels butterflies in her tummy , and maan enjoy her closeness... and his effect on her...

Maan – ye baat to iske liye bhi honi chahiye...

All get confused and poor geet become red redder...

Maan – nahi samjhe , are yaar geet also have to do some mercy on me... tum sab k samne chatter box ki tarah boli hogi aur dekho mere samne aate hi ye silent mode pe chali jati hain... isliye aaj jab tak ye mujhse baat nahi kart ii m not going to leave her ... aise hi rahunga...(me maan tumhara charm hi aisa hain koi bhi lost ho jayega😆)

Geet having tough time maan is hugging her in front of all their friends.. geet (st) ek to inko dekhte hi meri bolti band ho jati hain aur upar se ye chate hain ki mein sabke samne inse baat karo...

Geet looks maan with baby face... pled him to leave her and ask him to not be stubborn ... maan melt with her cute looks and leave her.. all giggle looks their silent conversation ... both come back to reality with pinky's voice.

Pinky – waise agar tum dono ki silent conversation khatam ho gayi ho to lunch k liye chale...

Maan – yaa lets go.... he took geet's hand in his hand and leave for canteen...



NEXT- college continue and ya there is something more but i forget it...oppsss🤔

p.s. – o ya now i remember that next update is maaneet conversation as u all want no dream no silence all realwala 😆🤣hehehehehe... now tell me how many were waiting for next update?????????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesm..
truly crazy.. d way geet realises maan s der widout even c ing him.. d feels enuf!!
lol.. loved it
Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

ruby... 😡

kya yaar.. mr. love beech main aagaya... huh!!!
hehehe me besharam... 😆
ok coming to the update...
its awesome... wonderful...
loved it very mcuh...
oh geet went to maan;s room.. and maan acting like he is asleep.
loved their moment...
yaar their family is so nice... loved theit teasing session...
continue soon dear...
eagerly waiting... 😊


😲meine kya kiya
mr.love beech mein aagaya 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update..
Loved the way maan claimed geet without any aware of surroundings..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
loved it
maaneet attending clg saath mein
soorrryyy not able to comment on yesterday part

held wid wid xamz

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