OS: Beneath Starry Skies

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

that was so beautiful... the nightmare, his restlessness, staring khushi , lone tear escaping her eyes SUPERB 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow.. That was excellent! Really well written... Very intense.. And the descriptions of the scenes were fantastic.. You draw a very detailed picture... :)

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notacrimetolove

@notacrimetolove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Amazing OS!!

I was so relieved when I realised that it was a dream... The ending was so sweet.

Please add me to your pm list :)

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

oh wow! i could totally imagine this visually in my head! 👏

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Brilliant...I loved the imagery you used in his nightmare...very realistic..!

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awesome!!

The starting, I was like,'Whoa! What's happening??!' But it was beautiful! :)

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Ishi

@Desai09

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Briliant OS... Loved it...

Thanks for the PM..

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow! I really was stumped for a moment trying to figure out what was happening. All his fears culminating into that one nightmare. Losing the 3 most important people in his life. Very well showcased. I know it is an OS but could you continue? :)