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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

sooo beautiful...very well written u can keep the audient guessing and engrossed very well till the end...

thnks for writting...

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

sigh...it is just exceptionally beautiful..
i love the intensified pace, yet almost balm like flow..so smooth, yet so rapid..elusive yet almost tangible..
it was perfect..wonderfully worded

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

ahhh...that was beautiful...that was nightmare LOL...it was so gripping..

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

brilliant os...love the way u expressed arnav helplessness...

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hari93

@hari93

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Beautiful... just Beautiful...

I don't have words to express how beautiful it is...

It was so touching...

Loved it to the core...

Thanx a lot for the PM...

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

I got so scared 😲
i really thght smthn happnd to khushi..poor arnav..he must hv been frightened to death..till nw he dreamt nly of his mom..nw he dreamt of khushi too..dis shows dat he luvs her too much..
ur writin style was excellent..vry depth-ful..as if its goin on in our mind..hats off!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Beautiful and brilliant. Eerie too!

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

awesome os...

thanks 4 d pm

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Wow!! That was stunningly beautiful OS. You set the scene so amazingly that I could literally imagine it happening. I could feel the thud thud of my heart waiting to see who was covered in blood. Poor Arnav. Good to know it was a dream but that "lone tear" made my heart ache for her.

Thanks for the pm.xx

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wafa.M

@wafa.M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

emotional...n nysh...gud job dear!! 😊

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