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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
👏👏thanks...loved it...amazing...brilliant...can;t wait for the next part...to see what kia has planned...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it.
Very intersting.
Continue soon.
Thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
beautiful
so kiara is arhi's actual baby
and kia is adopted
what arnav did is unforgettable
khusi and her two daughters shud never return to him
he doesnt deserve them let him stay with his didi and jiju
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
read the whole thing in one go. what a brilliant plot! I have never hated a fictional character like he was in my own life creating havoc like i have hated shyam, rimjhim, and to some extent, Arnav singh raizada through your wonderful writing skills! I truly applaud you dear! and I can't wait to read the next update to find out what happens! please PM me!

btw..i guess ASR is the one who stops shyam when he calls the daughters ganda khoon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
hey continue soon...its really a long time...plz plz plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Saying this she starts moving towards the villa………….on the way she meets with rudra and arjun who have just arrived………….

Rudra-come here my champ…and gives her a hug. Main na kehta tha arjun yeh maeri natin nahi mara beta hai.and look she has proved it today…………chalo let's come in

Arjun-yeah dad…meri sweetheart jo thehri…………chalo give me a hug………

Arjun is hugging kia and keeping a hand on her shoulder and walking when they hear shyam accusing khushi saying-gunda khoon………..

Then we see arnav shouting –enough……………job hi ho kisi bachhi ko kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi…………aur aaj kuch phots dekhne ke baad mujhe bhi yehi lagta ki jo huwa who haadsa thha………

Kia-closes her eyes and thinks………now or neverkia.now or never

Rudra-yeh sab kya ho raha hai……………..what is the matter…………

Kiara rushes from upstairs and comes and hugs khushi…….mamma.i missed you a lot………….and kisses her……then she goes andeveryone and then pulls khushi's hands and takes her to arnav and then introduces them

Kiara-mamma yeh arnav uncle hai.hum kuch din ke liye………..inke ghar pe the and he took my good care just like you………..woah bahut ache hai…and pata hai inki shhadi hai next week uss ante eke saath…..(pointing to rimjhke)khushi looks at arnav and then kia notices it and says …………attention please maine jo ske liye I am sorry…main aap sab ko kisi se milana chati hu and brign father harry in…….yeh father hrry hai…aap log ko mera pehchhan janna hai na…………..main ushi orphanage se hu…….mujhe mr.raizada aur mamma ne adopt kiya thha……ushi orphanage se jahan se rimjhim s\aayi hai………

Rimjhim-kya bakwaas hai yeh.ishe toh na……..and raises her hand but kia catches it and says.main mamma nahi hu .ki tum apni ginhoni games mere saath khelogi and I will remain quiet………….aur nahi yeh aapke pati ki behen ha i miss Anjali………….yeh toh us orphanage main sweeper ka kaaam karti thhi aur ek raat who saara paisa leke bhag gayi jo mr. raizada ne or phanage ko mujhe adopt karne ke baad charity main diye the……..am I rite father harry………….

Father-yes yeh bacchi bilkul sach keh rahi hai…………..

Rimjhim-nahi yeh jhooth hai.main toh inki behen hu..bol na(nudges to shyam)

Shyam(stammering)haaa…..aan.yeh meri behen hi hai

Kia-pehli baar aisa bhai behen dikh rahi ho jo apne rishtey ko kehene main itna darte hai…………strange

Achha leave it….mary kiarako upar le jao…yeh sab bachho ke liye achha nahi

Kiara walks up to kia-di aap log lad rhe ho

Kia-bend to her no kiara..main naa aaj exam de rahi hu.jo 10 saal se dena thha….kabhi mauka hi nahi maila toh aaj de rahi hu………….coti ma ke saath aap upar rahiye di jaldi se exam deke aati hai..ok

She says nandini from her eyes and she takes her up

Kia- ok shayad mujhse hi galti hogayi magar mujhe aaj kuch video mila hai……I really want to show it to you all and keeps a video…………

Everyone is shell shocked to see the video.it is of anjali's god bharai…………..the video is shown and it shows khushi pushing Anjali but her face expression don't show she meant to do it…………..

Kia-toh aap sab dekh rahe hai na ki mamma ne jaan buch ke nahi giraya thha………….it was a mistake…….. look mamma ke expressions aise nahi hai…..woah sirf ek hadsa thha………..

Anjali(all in tears)-h……aaa……

Shyam-are hadsa tha kya………aap dekh nahi rahe ki khushiji rani saiba ko dhakka de rahi hai

Kia-par haadsa hain woah..aur yeh toh accident ki jaise thha

Rimjhim-arrey kaisa accident .khushi ne jaan buch ke giraya hai hum jaante hai.hum unke paas hi to thha

Kia-magar agr aap pass thi toh aap bhi bacha sakti thhi na………..

Rimjhim-kyunki khushi ke saadi main humne tel dala tha aur jab humne use dhaaka diya toh zyada se zyaada tel humaare hi hath main lag gayi…………………..

Every one is shocked by hearing that……rimjhim remains shell shocked

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
what an nice update...but want some more...plz...its reallly very good...i dont have patience now...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
love it! the old (and gold) trick of virtually pushing the guilty party to a corner until the blabber out the truth themselves! wonderful story planning! love it! can't wait to read on! please PM me the update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
fantastic update...

continue soon...

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
👏👏👏... hey u write really awesome... i luvd kia's character... superb update.. plz plz update soon... and plz pm me...

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