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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Hi Puri

Update was gud..👏
So now we have a leap of two years and during which Khushi and Pallavi have settled in Mumbai.Maasiji and her family treats them like their very own.
I think Dev's mother wanted Pallavi to b her daughter-in-law😉 but fate has some pther plans.
RJ and Khushi's bickering is quite amusing and I think they'll end up with each other.😃
so Pallavi is there as a temporary PA for Dev and poor girl is not so happy with the prospects.😆😆
Dev seems to b quite a ruthless boss but I think he is quite fair in his dealings😃
I think its Dev who has left Pallavi speechless in the end..Poor guy!! seems like he spends his nights in office only..😕
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
thanks for another superb update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Hello Purnima...

Just read both the parts of your fic... It is a nice concept... Beautiful update... I loved the characters of Dev and Pallavi...

Maya is a shrew... yes the pairing was obvious and even though there is a 13 years of age difference between the two I dont think it will be a problem for them. Maybe the society, their family will have a problem but they wont. After all Love knows no bars.

Thanks for the PM... Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Hi Di😊
Wonderful Part 😊
Its good that both Pallavi and Khushi are a part of family and they are treated as their own members loved the bonding between Masi and other family members especially with RJ and Kabir😊😊
Now that is very difficult to be a PA of a businessman like Dev is all the best Pallavi try to be at patience it is going to be difficult😆😆
Now who did Pallavi saw which resembled a ghost for her is it Dev😕😆
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
part 3
awesome part dear...
Pallavi and Khushi have settled here so comfortably and also loved...
RJ and Khushi are so funny and along with Pallavi they make awesome trio...
oh wow so Pallavi is Dev's new Sect...
very good and their records are too good and now its gonna be interesting and entertaining...
is Dev spending his nights too in the office?
cont soon dear...

PS - Time Bomb on Zee every sunday? are u sure? how many episodes have gone by? me havent seen that show ever and thanks a lot hun for this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
loveeed the update...leap of 2 years??? wow...i love leaps esp when they help the story to move on faster...
rj is a total fun...he is playing the cupid here...pallavi ko devil ahh i mean dev ki pa bana diya...this is just perfect...
devil sachi mein bhoot hai ...har waqt office mein hi baitha rehta hai...aur apni heroine ki taraf dekhta bhi nahin..gadha kahin ka...hope he improves soon..
cont asap and thanks for the rk news...it is beneficial...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Nice part...

toh hum abhi do saal aage hain...

Khusi n Pallavi bhi achhe se settled ho gaye Mumbai me...!!! vaise mujhe toh aisa hi laga ke Dev ki mom Pallavi ko apni DIL banana chahti thi...par Maya ke Mayajaal em Dev fass gaya...par kaise...??? khair aaj nahi toh kal tum yeh toh bata hi dogi...

hum aage badhte hain...RJ n Khushi ke scenes bade mazedaar hote hain...

toh pallavi...apne Raj aka Dev ki PRIYE (P.A) hai...par bichari ki halat patli hai...par yeh bhi achha hai...maza aayega...yeh dekhne me ki dono ek dushre ke kareeb kaise aate hain...

yeh Dev kya apne office ko hi apna bed room bana rakha hai...raat bhar yehi rehta hai kya...jarur iss me bhi uss Mayajaal ka hi koi haath hoga...

khair tum abhi ud jaldi ko...ta kee aage ki kahani toh pata chale...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good--thanku 😃
so its been two yrs pallavi and khushi settled in mumbai good
and now they are alomost adjusted themselves here
massi kaber and rj made them feel relaly comfortable
pallavi is working and khushi is helping her but now as she left the job rj made her job fixed in dev's office as his pa
pallavi is nervous as dev is her boss
but by seeing whom she got so much scared
i think dev
bechhara ghar nahin jata kya kaise jaayega maya bhootni jo hai waha
plz cont soon and pm me



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Puri-- hi 😃

Update was gud..👏-- thanku 😳😳
So now we have a leap of two years and during which Khushi and Pallavi have settled in Mumbai.Maasiji and her family treats them like their very own.-- 😊😃

I think Dev's mother wanted Pallavi to b her daughter-in-law😉 but fate has some pther plans.--yeahh Dev's bad luck



RJ and Khushi's bickering is quite amusing and I think they'll end up with each other.😃--- may be soon(er) 😉😆
so Pallavi is there as a temporary PA for Dev and poor girl is not so happy with the prospects.😆😆-- 😆 instead of her we are ready 😳😆😆
Dev seems to b quite a ruthless boss but I think he is quite fair in his dealings😃---yeahh he just needs work on time 😛😆😆

I think its Dev who has left Pallavi speechless in the end..Poor guy!! seems like he spends his nights in office only..😕--- i wonder 😕😕
Bye




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Hello Purnima...-- hi 😃


Just read both the parts of your fic... It is a nice concept... Beautiful update... I loved the characters of Dev and Pallavi...--thanku 😳😳 & glad u liked both 😳😆

Maya is a shrew... yes the pairing was obvious and even though there is a 13 years of age difference between the two I dont think it will be a problem for them. --hope so 😛😆

Maybe the society, their family will have a problem but they wont. After all Love knows no bars.---lets see whats in store for the couple 😳😆😆

Thanks for the PM... Cont soon--



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