-Agar Tum Mil Jao- last part pg 72- 6/5 - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
another superb part dear...

why doesn't maya leave dev n pallavi alone...

I hope dev finds a way to get divorced from Maya...

pallavi knows how to cool devs anger ...

pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi
I am a silent reader of your fiction and I loved this story of yours. specially Dev's character.
I just cudn't stop myself from commenting when I saw that u r making it it another ekta saga where two women r fighting over single man.can't Maya realize this simple fact that Dev is lost to her.How can she expect him to accept her after so much??
Even when he explained her she is after him.Why can't u show that she accepted it and moved ahead like any self respecting person will do.
I hope Pallavi doesn't become a sacrificing victiom here coz she wud b loosing the most.
anyways I hope u dont mind my comment coz I didn't like the way your story is moving now.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishh1

Hi

I am a silent reader of your fiction and I loved this story of yours. specially Dev's character.
I just cudn't stop myself from commenting when I saw that u r making it it another ekta saga where two women r fighting over single man.can't Maya realize this simple fact that Dev is lost to her.How can she expect him to accept her after so much??
Even when he explained her she is after him.Why can't u show that she accepted it and moved ahead like any self respecting person will do.
I hope Pallavi doesn't become a sacrificing victiom here coz she wud b loosing the most.
anyways I hope u dont mind my comment coz I didn't like the way your story is moving now.



Glad the UD made u break the silence 😊😊 & no problems even if u didn't liked 😊😊 i am happy atleast it made u stop & take out time to drop in a comment 😊😊 ...

To each to his own... I cant expect every1 to like the UD... it depends from person to person how we perceive a certain thing 😊😊 ...

As for Maya accepting the fact that Dev has moved on, she will take her own time 😊😊 ...rite now she feels...Dev loved her at one point of time...
Maya has been self-centered character all along...

she feels all Dev did was coz he loved her... now if she will try he will come back to her once again 😊😊 she is not ready to accept the fact that it was her fault all the way of neglecting & not understanding Dev in all these years...

I wont have minded in Making Maya accept the fact in this very UD...& brought a THE END to this FF in next UD...I wud have been more than happy to do that 😃😃😃

but its important that Maya realises her mistakes, its important for her to realise what she lost, just because of misunderstanding ...she had been a friend to Dev before she got married...atleast she shud have trusted him 😊...

Dont worry Pallavi wont end up as a sacrificing woman 😊




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-



Glad the UD made u break the silence 😊😊 & no problems even if u didn't liked 😊😊 i am happy atleast it made u stop & take out time to drop in a comment 😊😊 ...

To each to his own... I cant expect every1 to like the UD... it depends from person to person how we perceive a certain thing 😊😊 ...

As for Maya accepting the fact that Dev has moved on, she will take her own time 😊😊 ...rite now she feels...Dev loved her at one point of time...
Maya has been self-centered character all along...

she feels all Dev did was coz he loved her... now if she will try he will come back to her once again 😊😊 she is not ready to accept the fact that it was her fault all the way of neglecting & not understanding Dev in all these years...

I wont have minded in Making Maya accept the fact in this very UD...& brought a THE END to this FF in next UD...I wud have been more than happy to do that 😃😃😃

but its important that Maya realises her mistakes, its important for her to realise what she lost, just because of misunderstanding ...she had been a friend to Dev before she got married...atleast she shud have trusted him 😊...

Dont worry Pallavi wont end up as a sacrificing woman
😊




hi though i am not the writer of this ff ut this ff writer is one of my fav writer (puri do need to rise ur collar 😆)so cant stop myself when u r talking abou the story line and the present track as u have said in ur comment that its becaming like the typical ekta "s serial two women fighting for one man so i like to say that its not alot like her show bc oz as i have followed this ff each and every bits and pieces it is totally a different gnre story maya is totallly a self centred woman who cant thinking beyond herself she is only concerned with her own happiness she doesnt wan Dev back in her life bcoz she loves him or guilty what she has done to him but bcoz she thinks that Dev is still her property and she cant lose or give it to pallavi
and as per pallavi's becoming a sacrificing woman dont worry puri will not make her that otherwise i will strangle her 😆



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi though i am not the writer of this ff ut this ff writer is one of my fav writer (puri do need to rise ur collar 😆)so cant stop myself when u r talking abou the story line and the present track as u have said in ur comment that its becaming like the typical ekta "s serial two women fighting for one man so i like to say that its not alot like her show bc oz as i have followed this ff each and every bits and pieces it is totally a different gnre story maya is totallly a self centred woman who cant thinking beyond herself she is only concerned with her own happiness she doesnt wan Dev back in her life bcoz she loves him or guilty what she has done to him but bcoz she thinks that Dev is still her property and she cant lose or give it to pallavi

and as per pallavi's becoming a sacrificing woman dont worry puri will not make her that otherwise i will strangle her 😆





Dev's saviour is here 😳 ... *sigh* i was happy, it was good suggestion to drop the curtains down for the FF 😆😆😆 but till Dev's 😆GF is here its gonna be tough for me 😛😆 be prepared for it in next 2-3 UDs 😃😃😃

😆 was expecting ur comment 😆😆😆 knew u ears & eyes will shot up when u wud have read the word "The end' 😆😆😆😆 ...

Guess no one wud hate maya like u 😛...for troubling your poor Dev 😳😳 ...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice & interesting update Puri
Maya bohut hi selfish hai😡😡😡😡😡😡
now she want Dev.
ab tak kaha thi woh????? kitne chances the uske paas, but woh relationship bana hi nahin paayi.
Dev ki koi galti nahin hai, woh to honestly Maya ke saath rishta nibhana chahta hai, but woh stupid lady, uski acchai ko dekh hi nahin paayi.aur usse insult karti gaayi.
ab suddenly saari sach jan kar uske dil main pyaar umar raha hai.😡😡😡😡
disgusting, how selfish & confuse girl
jab ki Dev ko aapne liye ek accha Jeevan Saathi mil chuka hai.
ab woh Maya Dev ko wapas chahti hai,
ab tum plzz ek kaam karo, yeh Maya ko bhagao aur Dev Pallavi ko settle karo.
main aapni Dev ko inn dono ladies ke beech pishte hue nahin dekh sakti.
already mera sweetu bohut seh chuka hai.
loved the update
great going
waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear waiting for the update

pls dont think of ending this fic so soon...

want more of dev n pallo...

If u plan to end then i hope u hv a new fic developing in ur mind coz want more from a fic writer like u...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update😊

Per ab Maya ke dimaag me kya chalne laga hope kuch ulta seedha na kare😡

Continue Soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

@ronojoy_ria--Thanx for liking & commenting 😃 & waiting 😆😆 & Reminding 😆😆😆

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Thanx to every1 who liked & commented on the part 😃😃... it really feels good 😳😳 to reply to comments 😳 & also thanx to all who pressed the like button😳

Thanx to all those who are still bearing FF 🥱🥱🥱 ...a big Thank u ...🤗






puri where is my dev babu bring him quickly 😡

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