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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is superb
sid goes to meet dev who was there sitting in the beach
sid asked dev what was the matter why he is lloking so upset but dev kept silient sid who knew the reasson told him that is he got that leter again
finally the letter's secret is out
but sid who noticed dev's reaction during some days asked him the real reasson behind his worry
but dev kept silient again but sis who knows dev from childhood guessed that he must be falling for pallavi
sid tries to make dev realise and understand that it is wroung but dev he is helpless as he cant stop loving pallavi oh poor he sid should have supported him
anyways here pallavi is equally worried for her boss dev as where he is she tried to search him using every possible contacts but failed
finally at night dev came to her house
and then dev kissed her wow
and he too confessed his love to pallavi but palavi she cant taka eit
oh what will happen to my dev plz help him get his love
and one more thing purnima dont u dare think to close this ff
this is one of my fav ff and i dont wan my fav ff to closed so soon
warna tu dekh na
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice FF😃
interesting 👏
awesome update👏

Plzz PM
and don't stop writing😊


Love Ayushi.❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
another superb update...

Feeling bad for Dev...

Felt like crying after reading the update... this was superb...

Pls Pls cont the fic n finish it dont leave it in between i wait for the updates...

Waiting for more... Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Puri

Update was gud.I must say it was the best till date.👏👏
The highlight was ofcourse the confrontation between Sid and Dev .Sid was really worried over Dev.Maya seems to b worst kind of woman who is exploiting her husband.😡
Why is he sticking to that promise.Dev shud get rid of Maya as soon as possible.
Sid got the shock of his life when he discovered that Dev is in love with Pallavi.He was really angry then.Watever he told Dev was right but Dev is not ready to listen coz for him his love for Pallavi is everything.
That kiss was a shocker.Oh Why did Dev do that??? he really has messed up this time.He didn't even knew Pallavi's feelings and he kissed her..😲😲
Pls continue soon
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
OMG was this a shocker?
nice part...
well i liked the kissing part but i feel that was so ushered up from Dev's side...
why did he do that?
this has for sure complicated things between them even before it started...
so the envelope is all about his useless wife and her flings...
my God shes such a cheapo...
and why the heck is he still sticking to her?
and whats this about her father taking his promise?
poor Dev...
her father for sure did help Dev for his selfish reasons...
and he has confessed to Pallavi...
and Sid is totally against this...
but one thing i wanna ask Dev is, hes not gonna divorce this Maya the cheapo, and not gonna marry Pallavi then why did he confess and why the heck did he kiss her?
13 years difference?
oh my...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part
Sid, is right, no matter how pure and true Dev's love is for Pallavi, given the circumstances, our society would always find her at fault.
Dev needs to get a control on his feelings.
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
update the next part asap...am too excited for what happens next.
vidushi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls cont soon...

waiting eagerly for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez



superb update puri..--glad u liked it 😊😊

and please...story complete karna--lets see 😆😆
this is a persistent problem with RN writers...and many of us are thinking to close fics...but i think its unfair to the story...so please complete it dear...---hoping for same only hopefully story will reach its end 😕😆



Thanx 4 liking & commenting 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is superb---glad u liked it 😊😊
sid goes to meet dev who was there sitting in the beach
sid asked dev what was the matter why he is lloking so upset but dev kept silient sid who knew the reasson told him that is he got that leter again
finally the letter's secret is out-- too much suspense ho gaya tha 😆😆😆
but sid who noticed dev's reaction during some days asked him the real reasson behind his worry
but dev kept silient again but sis who knows dev from childhood guessed that he must be falling for pallavi
sid tries to make dev realise and understand that it is wroung but dev he is helpless as he cant stop loving pallavi oh poor he sid should have supported him
anyways here pallavi is equally worried for her boss dev as where he is she tried to search him using every possible contacts but failed
finally at night dev came to her house
and then dev kissed her wow--- 😆😆😆Pallavi is not feeling wow
and he too confessed his love to pallavi but palavi she cant taka eit
oh what will happen to my dev plz help him get his love--lets see 😆its too complicated for Dev😆😆
and one more thing purnima dont u dare think to close this ff
this is one of my fav ff and i dont wan my fav ff to closed so soon---hope for best... lets see how long FF goes 🤔
warna tu dekh na
plz cont soon ---hope i am able to UD in ur given time 😆😆😆 though net is troubling me...I page taking too much time to load




Thanx 4 liking & commenting 😃

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