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Posted: 13 years ago
wow jealous sharon,i loved it.new hot girl n gang thought that sharon acting kar rahi hai.AMAZING.update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
jealous sharon 😆 lol..lovely update.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY GUYS HERE'S THE UPDATE, SORRY FOR BEING LATE, REALLY SORRY. IT'S A VERY LONG UPDATE AND MOSTLY A BUILD UP FOR THE SCENE COMING UP AND PLEASE AFTER READING THE UPDATE DON'T EXPECT ANYTHING OF HAYE RAMA SORTS IT WON'T BE LIKE THAT 😊

and guys I know there havn't been many romantic Swaron moments it's because most of the people write that amazingly on the forum there are so many ss's and ff's on that but the one thing that isn't portrayed well either in the show or the fan fiction (only what I have read) is Sharon's equation with the gang so tried making her bit friendlier with the weaklings too, I love the friendhship equations in the show and in real life too so tried to show something of the sorts. guys teasing her, helping her etc etc but I assure you the next update would be only Swaron 😊
Edited by medha_m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE:

"Guys Preetika asked Swayam out for a date and being the gentlemen that he is, he didn't directly refuse and ended up saying yes" Rey explained the situation to the gang. "Yeah couldn't say a no, what would he do, marry her if she asks him to or if any girl asks him just because he can't be rude to a girl moron. You better stop it Vicky, I don't care how you do it take her sightseeing or whatever but there won't be a date today, do you understand" said Sharon looking at Vicky menacingly. "But it worked Sharon" said rinni third time that day, "no it didn't Rinni they are going on a date, okay a date I don't think he has ever been on a date before and some random chick is not going to be his first date, no offence Vicky" "you haven't ever been on a date too Sharon, oh after confession you two going on your 1st dates that would so cute" said Simmi a little mushily. "Would you please focus at the problem at hand" snapped Sharon but her cheeks had gone red at simmi's comment, "Sharon, he did realise that you were jealous he was quite zoned out after you left" Rinni tried explaining her point again. "Yeah and he asked me too, said you were driving him crazy" said Rey smiling. "We don't have to stop the date, we can all just "accidently" land up at the same place and spoil their date make it a group thing maybe, and get you two closer" said Vishakha. "No" shouted Sharon "I don't want to be a part of another conversation centred on how toned up Swayam's body is" Everyone exchanged mischievous looks and Rey winking at the gang asked her "so you don't agree with her comment." "No that's not what I meant, he is toned up... no...I mean he is strong has a good ...good...body...uh... but ...I...how could she state that so bluntly he ...oh shut up" the gang was howling with laughter by the time she had said bluntly. She looked away flustered thinking "what have you done to me Swayam Shekhawat can't even keep my emotions under control" "okay enough" she shouted out loud. "I think Vishakha's idea is good, Vicky and I can try finding out the place they are going to" said Rey after they had all stopped. "Fine but you better come up with some GOOD ideas that actually work and won't backfire" said Sharon still embarrassed. "We can try suicide" said neha excitedly, "WHAT" shouted everyone simultaneously. "No no I mean pretend , we can all pretend that Sharon's about to commit suicide then Swayam would definitely come to save her" the gang just rolled their eyes and gave her you-are-unbelievable kind of look, "I am not doing something that filmy" replied Sharon. "We might as well make Sharon the damsel in distress and get a gang of "fake" brats to "fake" harass her, then maybe Swayam would came and save his lady love, right neha" said nilesh mockingly. "Yeah that would be great too" replied Neha. They all smacked their faces with their palms and gave Vicky an exasperated look "What she likes Bollywood" replied Vicky looking at her lovingly. "Right, guys you should go now and think about some other plan, meanwhile Vicky and I will try finding out the time and place, okay so see you then" said Rey and everyone left for their respective homes deep in thoughts.

At 6:45 that evening they all met again outside the building of one of the most posh restaurants of Mumbai. "I must say Swayam sure has a good taste, nice place for a date" said simmi eyeing the building and looking impressed. "Listen everyone here's what we will do the restaurant is at the fourth floor, when they both arrive we will go up by lift leaving Swayam and Sharon behind. Rinni and Simmi you have to make sure that they are the only ones to get in the lift and then text me okay then Sharon" Rey began explaining his plan. "But Rey they will get just 5 minutes to talk what good would that do" asked Rinni "they won't get 5 minutes Rinni, we have already talked to the electrician here he would fake a power cut" "why exactly is he being so charitable, did you bribe him" asked Sharon suspiciously. "No I didn't" replied Rey sincerely "we did" replied Vicky and nil together "and Bharat might have threatened him a bit" Amar added. "Rey asked us to" said Bharat pointing towards him. "No I didn't, the bribe and threat was all you guys I just didn't stop you" replied Rey lowering his tone at the end and smirking a little.

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Edited by medha_m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sharon pulled Rey away from the gang gesturing the rest to stay and began blabbering in a hyperactive tone "Rey listen this isn't about talking to Swayam okay I would have done that before if I could but I can't, even if a get 20 minutes with him alone it's just too awkward and messed up and not just about the canteen part. I can't just go up to him and say whatever I feel I can't even say a sorry you know me ...I...I...you don't have the slightest idea of what happened later and that is why I needed everyone's help, to make things a bit normal and to calm him down he won't be the normal Swayam in front of me anymore he is acting"

"Shush Sharon relax, I know he is acting I have noticed that. I have no idea what happened between you too later and I don't want to know but both of us do know that he just pretending so you act too, remember the tips Neha and I gave you"

"Act, act what jealous" "No Idiot, you will be stuck in a dark elevator with him, what will you act jealous of? The walls, Act scared cling on to him hug him or whatever you know, get ahem a...hmmm...close to him. Dramatise it up a bit more than what I am saying, you get the idea don't you" Replied Rey a bit embarrassed but still eyeing her expectantly. She looked at him flabbergasted "You want me to, you. Are you serious and we had decided on nothing filmy" she replied rolling her eyes. "Do you really think this would work, what do you expect him to do anyways"

"Trust me Sharon it would, it's tried and tested not intentionally like this one though. You guys are in love, stuck in a small dark lonely place how would you expect things to go" replied Rey in a flat tone looking down at the ground. "Have you? This has happened with you before, with whom Kriya?" asked Sharon curious at the same time a little cautious. "Hey it is 7, yeah look there they are ready let's go" "No Rey I can't" "come on Sharon"

She had butterflies in her stomach, probably she didn't realise it but her cheeks were deep red, she kept staring at the ground not even bothering to see how the gang was handling it. She could vaguely make out Swayam proposing to take the stairs while they tried dissuading him from doing that giving lame excuses. She didn't know what how or when but someone pushed her and she was with him in an elevator moving upwards she mentally counted till five. At five the lights turned off and the elevator stopped.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! Nice update. I like the way you have portrayed the gang. It's so much fun to read! Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just read the extension. You very nicely displayed Sharon's discomfort. Very Eager to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. Plan to kafi mast hai. But ganda wala cliffhanger de dia. Waiting for next update not so paitently.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ,but cliffhanger...neha ka plan just like her filmy.i loved the gang part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hw could u yaar... Itna masta update diya vo bhi itna lamba... Bt last me cliffhanger... U wan us 2 die w8tn fr d update... U surely gono update by 2day or 2mrw plzzz oders m gonno kill u fr sure... Plzzz... Ita z kind request...
Cuming 2 d update... Freaking amazing d way u hav potrayed sharon's character is mindblowing yaar loving it... N also d gang tease n jealousy part... Update soon plz...

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