arhi ss (d haunted villa)last part (part 6) pg 16

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Varun.srk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

amazing,excellent,welldone,

nice ss

t4 pm plz pm other prt

plz updAte it soon

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Devi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

hooo...it was really scaryyy. i'm readn all d parts together that too at 11.45 night..
good job 👏

Edited by devibnair2009 - 13 years ago

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Mona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

great part loved it thanks for the pm!

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

omg continue soon and thank u for pm me

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PRI

@ambishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

hey guys i am back...

with part 5

here it goes...

aaliya:i dint kill evrybody...i just told them the truth...

khsuhi:the truth?????

aaliya:yes the truth...

khshuhi:then who killed them...and why u want us be here...

aaliya:bcz its only u who can save me...

khsuhi:but how me...

aaliya:bczz the same was going to happen with u...

khushi:with me...

aaliya:yes with u ur frnds will sell u...

khsuhi:noo never it wont happen...they are my frnds...

aaliya:they were mine ...

khushi:but then why u broke our car...killed aman aakash payal...

aaliya:i dint wanted u too leave ...

and i only killed aakash ...

khushi:then who killed payal and aman...

aaliya:khsuhi u want to know wht was decided by ur frnd for you...

khushi:okok tell me...

aaliya :close ur eyes...

khushi:sees ...

aakash was mixing something in the glass...

and then he gave it to khshuhi...

aakash:dont worry...just fruit beer...

khushiu:i trust u...

la:dekha khushi its good idea when we go ou na...

shyam:mam tomi will show u more things...

khushi:stated feeling dizzy...

shyam noticed it...

aaksh:payal go and sleep na we all sit here u look tired,...

apayal:okok sure...

aman:hey payal wanna see my recording of today...

nk:hey aman can i have ur extra camera plzzz

amna:ya sure

payal:amna help me na in making sleeping arerangement...

aman:okok...

nk:hey la i was thinking why dont we spend some quality time...

la:okok./.

la:khushi i am comming in 10 min okok...

khihsi:her head was going crazyyy...

khuhsi:yaa...

and then shyam an aakash lift her..and take her to room no 13...

aaksh on the camera...

and then nk comes guys have u staterd ...

shyam:just waiting for u...

who want to start.1////////////

aaksh:me...

shyam:it was allmy paln and i gave u money evn soo i will statr...

and khushi was faint...

athey didi it then suddenly la comes their and

la
:guys wht are doing...

and nk:nothing la..i can explain...

la:i will tell evryone...

and nk closes her moth..and till that time other dress up and nk opens la mouth but find out she is dead and then they check khushi who was covered with a bed sheet...

shyam:she is dead...

then evrything fades away...

khushi:soo frnd sold me...

aaliya:just like me...

khushi:soo who killed u...????????????

aaliya:the one how killed u...

khushi:shyam...

aaliya:u know khushi i ant kill him...

everytime he does something wrong the eveil spirits around him gets more powerfull..

only a human can kill him...

khuhsi:thts why u need me...

aaliya:i need u khhsi bcz u cn understand me...

khusi:but why otherd died...

aaliya:i told payal the truth and shyam killed her bczz he dint wanted anyone to know abt his deedsss...

i only told aman the truth...

khushi:soo evrytime u ell a person he truth he is killed by...

aaliya:yes by shyam...

aaliya:i want to be free ..i dont want to be pain..but i cant be relesed frm this pain till shyam gets his punishment...

thts reason i called bhai here...

khushi:soo all this was done soo that i live and kull him for u...

aaliya:yes bczz ur death is not happened ...bcz he will kill u but u survived...soo only u can kill him...before he kills u////////////

khushi:then wht abt arnav.??????????//

aaliya":he was written in ur destiny...

aaliya:khushi i am sorry..

khushi:why???

aaliya:i have to kill nk ...

khushi:nooo dont plzzz nooo

and then all sudden the room is dark again...

on other side ...

arnav:khushi...

where are u khushi...

and he is seraring her but then fallls and sees a dead body...

its of aaliya...

arnav:aaliyaaa

sorry if its short but as i have to extend the part this part shorted..

+ a lots of editting is done...

bcz i am writting it at night...

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kajolkonna

@kajolkonna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

yepeee...
1st comment.
awsome part.
I knew dat it was shyam.

Edited by kajolkonna - 13 years ago

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Devi

@devibnair2009

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

very very interestn...wat aill happn next???? plzzz update...

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

thxx fr ur update...its really horrible...

its lovely...as aaliya dead...some confusion plz make it clear dear..

as aaliya sold...n dead

is khushi is also sold n dead?plz make this clear

tht bloody syam...tight slap on his face...

update soon..

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sparky03

@sparky03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

awesome one please pm me its an intresting story

plz plz pm me😃

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PRI

@ambishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Akorshi
thxx fr ur update...its really horrible...
its lovely...as aaliya dead...some confusion plz make it clear dear..
as aaliya sold...n dead
is khushi is also sold n dead?plz make this clear
tht bloody syam...tight slap on his face...
update soon..

yes khshi was also sold by her frnds and she has to die..but it dint happen ...

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