arhi ss (d haunted villa)last part (part 6) pg 16

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@ambishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Arshi_lovergal
You said not to read it at night it's like broad daylight here in the UK but I'm still scared and my dad's leaving in a minute so I'll be all alone I feel like I'm in the Villa

I bet the one who shot the whole thing is Aman since he was walking around with Camera but then again how would Aman know Aaliya right😕😆

sorry for scaring u but it was on if demand...

and all this wud be claered in comming parts...

imagine wht happened to me when i actually wrote...

the room scene was even more scary but i edited it...

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mandeep

@mandy15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

wow ...:)
loved it dear:)

now who did all those things??????????????????????????????????????????

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Light_Rose

@Arshi_lovergal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: ambishika

sorry for scaring u but it was on if demand...
and all this wud be claered in comming parts...
imagine wht happened to me when i actually wrote...
the room scene was even more scary but i edited it...

Ooh I don't mind it being Scary hehe although I'm easily scared I love reading ghost stories have you heard about Singaporean Ghost Stories by Russel Lee(I think) & watched a.haunting if you haven't then I recommend you to read it & watch a.haunting I'm sure you'll get inspired😃

P.S-like your friends' suggestion make it more scary I love it but don't please separate Arshi even if they die let them die together😃

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@ambishika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

P.S-like your friends' suggestion make it more scary I love it but don't please separate Arshi even if they die let them die together😃

you really have wait for the susupense to get claered

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Lydia Fernando

@fernanl2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

It is a griping story and cant wait for the next part. Pls PM me when you write the next part. Awesome story line

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cutepuppy

@cutepuppy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

nice yaar amazing waiting for the5th part

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kajolkonna

@kajolkonna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

sooo nice of u dat u update 2day.
Feeling so bad for aliya.poor girl.
Its getting confusing dat who killed all of dem?
May b its shyam 🥱 bcoz he was da only 1 wid payal when she is killed.